1、Unit 3 Reading for Writing health Warming up Talk about things related to health fruits drink meat exercise stress sleep 健康书,学生可以在其中交流关于健康和健身对 青少年有用的想法。写作时，你可以从“锻炼 (Exercise)、减压(Reduce stress)、自信( Self- confidence)及健康饮食( Healthy eating)”等方 面入手，也可以从自己或他人的过去与现在对 比方面人手。总之,写wellness book的目的就是 唤醒他人或自已对健康
2、的认知,从而建立起健康 的生活模式。 健康书写法指导 ()Preparation for writingWords and phrases _ adj. 健康的 _ adj. 不健康的 _ 绿色食品 _ 健康饮食 _ 不健康的饮食习惯 healthy/fit unhealthy/unfit green food healthy food/diet unhealthy eating habit _ 良好的生活习惯 _ adj. 肥胖的 _ 强身健体 _ 充足的睡眠 _ 进行运动 _ 减肥 good living habits overweight/fat build up ones body e
3、nough sleep take exercise lose weight _ 对有益处 _ 节食 _ 养成一个的饮食习惯 _ 身体健康/不健康 _ 对某人的健 康/视力有益/害 be good for/do good to go on a diet form a.eating habit be in good/poor health be good/bad for ones health/eyes 1.我非常高兴与大家分享我喜欢的体育项目。 It is an honor for me to share my favorite sport with you. 2.和朋友一起打篮球让我放松。 I
4、t makes me feel relaxed playing with my friends. 3.另外，我有机会和其他人交流。 Moreover, it provides me a valuable chance to communicate with others. 4.如果我们吃的太少或太多或选了不好的食物，我们可能会生 病。 I we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick. 5.为什么不和朋友交流下来摆脱孤独和压力呢? Why not have a talk wit
5、h your friends to get rid of your loneliness and stress? 学 科 网 创原家独 Reading P42 Going positive Task 1: Read what Kayla wrote for a wellness book and answer the questions. 3. What makes her change her thinking? 1. What problem did Kayla have in the past? 2. What does the sentence “I almost went banan
6、as” mean? She was worried about her weight and appearance. It means she nearly went crazy because she was so worried, and tried various methods. An article that said instead of asking “Am I fat?” people should be asking “Am I fit?” Task 2: Read the passage on P42 and fill in the table. The past 1. W
7、orried about _ and tried_. 2. Compared myself with _. Turning point I read _. The present 1. Thought about _. 2. Wanted to _ or do _. 3. Added _. 4. Made a list of _. Result Became _ my weight every new diet actresses and models fitness rather than weight run 2 kilometers 30 push-ups healthy foods t
8、o my meals things l liked both happier and healthier an article Writing task Write a page for a class wellness book 过去过去 1.年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒；年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒； 2. 上学很困难上学很困难 转折点转折点 读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章 现在现在 1.养成早起和慢跑的习惯养成早起和慢跑的习惯; 2.对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度；对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度； 结果结果 身体逐步强壮；对日常生活有好处。身体逐步强壮；对日常生
9、活有好处。 要求：要求：100字左右字左右 参考词汇：参考词汇： 1. jog v. 慢跑慢跑 2. build up 强壮强壮 A page in a wellness book includes: a starter stating your topic and the past situation in the past tense the reason for your change and your changes the final results your changes have brought you or will bring in Reading for Writing
10、The language features 1. When you are telling your past situation, the past simple is a must. 2. When you are telling the changes, pay attention to using phrases “other than” “rather than” “instead of” “different from” “however” “though/even though” and “instead”. 3. When you are describing somethin
11、g or someone, try to use attributive clauses. 写作指导写作指导1:定框架定框架 体裁体裁 人称人称 时态时态 布局布局 第一人称第一人称 A page for a wellness book (健康报告健康报告) 一般过去和一般现在一般过去和一般现在 第一段：描述过去情况第一段：描述过去情况 第二段：转折点第二段：转折点+现在情况现在情况 第三段：结果第三段：结果 要点要点1：年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。：年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。 要点要点2：像其他孩子一样像其他孩子一样上学很困难。上学很困难。 要点要点3：读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，：读
12、到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，文章文章 说慢跑对健康有效果。说慢跑对健康有效果。 要点要点4：养成早起和慢跑：养成早起和慢跑半小时半小时的习惯。的习惯。 要点要点5：对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度。：对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度。 要点要点6：每天锻炼每天锻炼，身体逐步强壮。，身体逐步强壮。 要点要点7：对日常生活有好处。：对日常生活有好处。 写作指导写作指导2:定要点并适当补充内容定要点并适当补充内容 要点要点1：年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。：年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。（so that） When I was young, I was so weak that I caught a
13、cold now and then. 要点要点3：读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，慢跑对健康有效果。：读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，慢跑对健康有效果。 （make a difference,定语从句）定语从句） Then I read an article that said jogging in the morning would make a difference to health. 要点要点6：每天锻炼，身体逐步强壮。（：每天锻炼，身体逐步强壮。（work out; build up） My body is building up by working out everyday. 用非限制性
14、定语从句链接要点用非限制性定语从句链接要点6和和要点要点7：对日常生活有好处。：对日常生活有好处。 My body is building up by working out everyday，which is good for my daily life. 写作指导写作指导3：遣词造句：遣词造句 写作指导写作指导4：过渡语：过渡语 as a result 结果结果 after that 从那时之后从那时之后 whats more 更重要的是更重要的是 I follow the advice 我听从建议我听从建议 Writing 要点要点1：年幼时期，身体虚弱，经常感冒。：年幼时期，身体虚弱，
15、经常感冒。 要点要点2：像其他孩子一样上学很困难。：像其他孩子一样上学很困难。 要点要点3：读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，文章：读到一篇有关早晨慢跑的文章，文章 说慢跑对健康有效果。说慢跑对健康有效果。 要点要点4：养成早起和慢跑半小时的习惯。：养成早起和慢跑半小时的习惯。 要点要点5：对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度。：对自己和自己的身体有更积极的态度。 要点要点6：每天锻炼，身体逐步强壮。：每天锻炼，身体逐步强壮。 要点要点7：对日常生活有好处。：对日常生活有好处。 When I was young, I was so weak that I caught a cold now and th
16、en. As a result, it was difficult for me to go to school like other children. Then I read an article that said jogging in the morning would make a difference to health. In order to change myself , I follow the advice and do it everyday. After that, I form the habit of getting up early and jogging fo
17、r half an hour. Whats more, I am more positive about myself and my body. Now, my body is building up by working out everyday, which is good for my daily life. 参考范文参考范文 假如你的老师让你在班级Wellness Bok上分享 自己的亲身经历及心得，请根据以下要点写一 篇80字左右的文章 1. 你喜欢的运动是什么？ 2. 你最喜欢的原因是什么？ 3. 你参加锻炼的体会。 牛刀小试 【参考范文】 Its an honor for me
18、to share my favorite sport with you. My favorite sport is basketball, which benefits me a lot physically and mentally. To start with, it makes me rid myself of stress from study while playing with my friends. Secondly, playing basketball helps me to improve my health. Moreover, it provides a good ch
19、ance to communicate with others. I suggest we make it a rule to take physical exercise on a regular basis and everyone go for sports and I hope all of us can have fun from it. Lets start from now on. 【点评】 该作文覆盖了全部的写作要点，很好地完成了写 作任务。学生使用了to start with, secondly , moreover等话语标志使文章的语言更流畅。在语 法方面,学生使用了非限制性定语从句、it作形式主 语、复合宾语结构等,展现了其较强的英语表述能 力。这是一篇优秀作文,值得背诵! Rewrite your draft and hand in
