1、Section Writing自然启示类文章 技法指导 1如何写自然界启示类文章 观察自然界，感受其启示，获得灵感并写一篇启发性的作文， 这类作文属于夹叙夹议文。写这类作文应该遵循下列步骤： (1)选取一个与自然界相关的具有生活意义、 富有哲理寓意的主 题。比如：适应、生存、亲情、关爱、团结、毅力等。 (2)描述某一个自然现象， 比如动植物的生活习性以及为了生存 而形成的本能和意识等。 (3)阐述该自然现象给我们的生活启示， 我们应如何在生活中应 用它。常用的由描写自然现象过渡到阐述启示的表达有 similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same
2、 manner, equally 等。 2常用表达 (1)Nature can sometimes teach us a valuable lesson and give us inspiration. (2)Much to my joy/astonishment/surprise/amazement/delight, I found. (3)Its important to remember that. (4)Inspired by the lifestyle of wildlife, I began to realize that. (5)Observing them living in
3、harmony, I couldnt help wondering whether. (6)Catching sight of., I stopped to watch., feeling amazed at its/their. (7)I was wandering along the path of the farmland when I. (8)The same is true of our human beings. 精品展示 假定你是李华，在学习了本单元后，你们班准备在周末举行一 次主题为“Learning from nature”的班会，要求各位同学发言。请 你为此准备一篇发言稿，
4、内容包括： 时间背景 前夜，下了一场大雨，你在清晨早起锻炼。 事件 沿着山脚小路跑步时，你发现了一棵长在山坡的小 树，它的根土被昨夜的大雨冲走了，露在外面。你 想它不可能存活了。 结局 小树的根找到了新的土壤，健康成长。 启示 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 审题谋篇 第一步：明确要求，确定人称和时态 本题要求写一篇向自然界学习的文章，文章以第一人称和第三 人称为主； 描述情景用一般过去时或过去进行时； 写得到的启示时， 要用一般现在时或一般将来时。 第二步：确定段落内容 第一段：描写清晨跑步时发现一棵小树的根土受到破坏的情 景。注意，
5、前夜下大雨是伏笔，要交代清楚。 第二段：表达当时自己对这棵受损的小树的生命的预测，从而 与后文的结果形成对比。 第三段：描述后来这棵小树健康成长的样子。 第四段：表达这件事带来的生活启示。 第三步：提炼要点 1_ 碰巧做 2_ 看到 3_ 冲走 4_ 非常让某人吃惊的是 5_ 情不自禁做 happen to do catch sight of wash away much to ones amazement cant help doing. 第四步：句式升级 1我正在小路上跑步，发现一棵长在山坡上的小树。 (一般表达)I was jogging on the path and I happen
6、ed to catch sight of a small tree growing on the slope of the hill. (高级表达)_ _ 2我同情它，我认为它活不成了。 (一般表达)I had great pity on it and think it couldnt survive any longer. (高级表达)_ _ I was jogging on the path when I happened to catch sight of a small tree growing on the slope of the hill. I had great pity on
7、 it, thinking it couldnt survive any longer. 3无论我们可能遭受什么困难，我们也应该有强大的生命力。 (一般表达)When we may suffer any hardship, we should also have powerful life force. (高级表达)_ _ We should also have powerful life force whatever hardship we may suffer. 连句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ _ 连句成篇 One morning, after a nights heavy rain, I
8、went running around the hill near my home for exercise and fresh air. I was jogging on the path when I happened to catch sight of a small tree growing on the slope of the hill. Its white roots were clearly exposed in the air because the covering earth had been washed away by the heavy night rain. I
9、had great pity on it, thinking it couldnt survive any longer. About half a month later, I deliberately took the same path to see that small tree. Much to my amazement, it was still alive, with its roots finding their own way into the new soil under the tree. Just at that time, I couldnt help admiring its strong energy and enthusiasm. In the same way, we should also have powerful life force whatever hardship we may suffer.
