1、中考英语书面表达 写作技巧指导,一、江西中考英语作文命题特点,近年来江西省中考的书面表达都属于指导性或半开放性写作。作文试题涉及的都是我们所熟悉的话题和常见的文体。试题中会出现必要的写作要求说明并简单地提示写作的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容和相关的情景。情景可能以表格、图片或文字（中文或英文）提纲的形式出现，并留有一定的自由发挥的空间。,中考作文所涉及的话题都在我们初中学过的22个话题之内，有的考题综合了几个话题。2011年中考题是一篇说明文，内容是向笔友介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说自己喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由，以便让笔友选择度假地点。它涉及了自然环境、交通、娱乐等话题。2
2、012年的题目是根据所提供的信息写一篇介绍自己的购物习惯与爱好的短文。2013年中考题是介绍自己的母亲及与母亲之间的真情故事，属于一篇写人记事的记叙文。,2014年作文为“阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查，请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。,Reading Outside Class , As we all know, reading has a lot of benefit. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge,
3、 and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about whats going on around the world. I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because theyre bad for eyes. On
4、 weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night. Summer is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. Im sure reading can make a
5、difference to my life.,2015英文有句谚语 East, west, homes best. 某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。 内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系， 并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。,There is an old saying, “East, west, homes best.” I live in an apartment. In it there is a sitting room, a dining room, two bedrooms, a washroom, a kitc
6、hen and a study. Thanks to my mother, my home is always clean and tidy. The flowers in the sitting room look lovely. My apartment is not big, because there are only three people in my family, my father, my mother and I . Sometimes my parents argue, but usually they get on very well. They love me and
7、 I love them, too. Everyone needs a good home. Ill do my best to make my home better. On one hand, Ill study harder to make my parents happier. On the other hand, Ill do what I can to improve our living environment.,2016书包伴我学习，伴我成长， 某英文报以My schoolbag 为题，举办中学生征文活动。请 根据下列的图表信息，写一篇短文。 内容包括：书包的外形特征、 用途和
8、书包背后的课业问 题以及课余你期望做的事情。,第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,二、江西中考英语作文评分标准,三、书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,假设你班上周就“Is it OK t
9、o tell white lies?开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。,假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。,审人称 审时态 审格式 审内容 审重点部分,审,人称 时态 内容 重点部分,假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。,三部分,一般现在时,第三人称,赞成者和反对者
10、 的观点,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 将列出的简单表达连词成句。,列,写作第二步,假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。,1. 善意的谎言是出于好意，说了不为过。,谎言,出于,white lies be out of,?,White lies are out of kindness.,It is all right/OK to,?,It is all right to do so.,2. 善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处。,谎言,帮助,white lies h
11、elp sb. do,?,友好相处,get on well with ,?,White lies can help people get on well with each other.,3. 善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。,谎言,能使,white lies make sb. adj,?,Sometimes white lies may make people more confident.,4.善意的谎言也是谎言。,A white lie is a lie as well.,伤害,?,do harm to/hurt,5.谎言会伤害友情。,Lies do harm to friendship
12、.,6. 谎言终究不能持久。,Lies never go far.,持久,go far,?,White lies are out of kindness. It is all right to do so. White lies can help people get on well with each other. Sometimes white lies may make people more confident. A white lie is a lie as well. Lies do harm to friendship. Lies never go far.,列,加,加首尾，使结
13、构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,Last week our class have a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. They have different opinions.,A coin has two sides. In my opinion, white lies both have good ways and bad ways. Sometimes it can help someone, but it also hurts others.,a nice
14、head,a nice tail,a nice body,White lies are out of kindness. It is all right to do so. White lies can help people get on well with each other. Sometimes white lies may make people more confident. A white lie is a lie as well. Lies do harm to friendship. Lies never go far.,Some people think Some peop
15、le disagree,加,增加与文章相关的句子，丰富内容。,写作第三步：,方法:添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容。,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,例一：这样更方便照顾父母。,拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。,原因,as they are getting older and older.,例二：因作业过多， 孩子们晚上睡觉很晚 。,拓展：这导致孩子们在白天的课堂上昏昏欲睡 。,后果,which made them sleepy in class in the daytime.,It will be much more convenient to look afte
16、r your parents,There were too much homework that kids stayed up late at night,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,目的,例三：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查,We did a survey about how our middle school students communicate with each other during the holiday,拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式,In order to learn about how our middle school students
17、 communicate with each other during the holiday, we did a survey about how our middle school students communicate with each other during the holiday.,Is it OK to tell white lies? Last week our class have a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. They have different opinions. Some think it
18、 is all right to do so out of kindness. A doctor usually tells white lies to patients who are badly. White lies can often help people get on well with each other. They may make one confident. Many others take telling lies very seriously. They insist that white lies are lies after all. They do harm t
19、o friendship. Whats worse, lies never go far. A coin has two sides. White lies both have good ways and bad ways. It can help someone, but it also hurts others.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; meanwhile(同时），furthermore(此外，再者） 2.表
20、示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,As a result, 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; in addition(另外）， 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: All in all, in a word, Generally speaking,Is it OK to tell white lies? Last week our class have a discussion on whether it
