1、八年级英语写作指导八年级英语写作指导 Have you heard of this story ? Can you write this story in English? No, I cant Yes, I have Task1:How to examine the topic:(Task1:How to examine the topic:(审审) ) 例题例题：龟兔赛跑是我们耳熟能详：龟兔赛跑是我们耳熟能详 的故事，请你用英语写一则的故事，请你用英语写一则8080词词 左右的短文，描述这则故事。左右的短文，描述这则故事。 人称：人称： 时态：时态： 体裁：体裁： 内容要点：内容要点： 字
2、数要求：字数要求： 第三人称第三人称 一般过去时一般过去时 故事故事 龟兔赛跑的故事龟兔赛跑的故事 8080词左右词左右 Task2:How to write a story:Task2:How to write a story: How did the story begin? What happened? Whats the end of the story? A story Who were the main characters? When did it happen? Where did they live? Once upon a time,Once upon a time, Th
3、ey had a race.They had a race. There lived a rabbit and a tortoise.There lived a rabbit and a tortoise. One dayOne day In a forestIn a forest The tortoise won the race.The tortoise won the race. Task1:Can you List simple sentences?Task1:Can you List simple sentences? How did the story begin? 1.Once
4、upon a time, there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest. What happened? 2. One day, they had a race. 3. The rabbit ran very fast . 4. The rabbit was proud. （列）（列） 5.The rabbit thought that the tortoise couldnt catch up with him. 6.The rabbit stopped and fell asleep. 7. The tortoise kept runni
5、ng . Whats the end of the story? 7. The rabbit woke up but its too late. 8.The tortoise won the race. 1.Once upon a time, there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest. 2. One day, they had a race. 3. The rabbit ran very fast . 4. The rabbit was proud and thought that the tortoise couldnt catch
6、up with him. 5.The rabbit stopped and fell asleep. 6. The tortoise kept running . 7.The rabbit woke up but its too late. 8.The tortoise won the race. 恰当运用连词，连句成篇，恰当运用连词，连句成篇， 使得文章层次清晰，各个使得文章层次清晰，各个 部分衔接自然。部分衔接自然。 Conjunctions 连词连词 表顺序表顺序 At First, Then Finally 表转折表转折 but, however,but, however, altho
7、ugh,although, 表并列表并列 andand 表对比表对比 instead ,while,instead ,while, instead ofinstead of 表因果表因果 so, becauseso, because 表结论表结论 In a word,In a word, All in allAll in all brainstorm Task2:Can you connect the sentences?Task2:Can you connect the sentences? _, there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the fore
8、st. One day, they had a race. _, the rabbit ran very fast ._ he was proud and thought that the tortoise couldnt catch up with him. _ he stopped and soon fell asleep. _ the tortoise didnt stop . _he was slow, he kept running. _, The rabbit woke up but its too late. The tortoise won the race. Once upo
9、n a time At first Then So But Finally Although a nice body （连连） a nice body a nice head? a nice tail? 加首尾加首尾，使结构完整，使结构完整。 可以采取可以采取总分总总分总结构，结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注开头或结尾的句子应注 意简洁，漂亮意简洁，漂亮。 Task3:Can you add the head and tailTask3:Can you add the head and tail？ Its a story about The Tortoise and Rabbit. 首段首段: :
10、明确写什么故事明确写什么故事 末段末段: :故事带来的启示故事带来的启示 In a word, the story told us that we shouldnt be proud or give up. （加）（加） Once upon a time, there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest. One day, they had a race. At first, the rabbit ran very fast .Then he was proud and thought that the tortoise couldnt ca
11、tch up with him. So he stopped and soon fell asleep. But the tortoise didnt stop. Although he was slow, he kept running. Finally, The rabbit woke up but its too late. The tortoise won the race. Its a story about The Tortoise and Rabbit. In a word, the story told us that we shouldnt be proud or give
12、up. Task4:Can you beauty the composition?Task4:Can you beauty the composition? 选好词句，选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情文章。在有把握的情 况下展示自己的语言功底。况下展示自己的语言功底。 Examples: 1. He was proud and thought the tortoise couldnt catch up with him. ( (美美) ) He was so proud that he thought the tortoise couldnt catch up with him. 2. B
13、ut the tortoise didnt stop , he kept running. The tortoise kept running instead of giving up. The tortoise was keeping running while the rabbit was sleeping. 3. The rabbit woke up but its too late. The rabbit didnt wake up until the tortoise got to the finishing line. Once upon a time, there lived a
14、 rabbit and a tortoise in the forest. One day, they had a race. At first, the rabbit ran very fast .Then he was so proud that he thought the tortoise couldnt catch up with him. So he stopped and soon fell asleep. Although the tortoise was slow, he kept running instead of giving up .Finally, The rabb
15、it woke up but its too late. The tortoise won the race. Its a story about The Tortoise and Rabbit. In a word, the story told us that we shouldnt be proud or give up. Task1: Can you check the composition?Task1: Can you check the composition? 检查检查 时态时态 语法语法 人称人称 单词拼写单词拼写 体裁体裁 书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧 审审 列列 连连
16、 加加 美美 查查 请你用英语写一则请你用英语写一则8080 词左右的短文，描述词左右的短文，描述 “皇帝的新装”这则“皇帝的新装”这则 故事。故事。 人称人称 时态时态 体裁体裁 第三人称第三人称 一般过去时一般过去时 讲故事讲故事 1:1:Examine the topic (Examine the topic (审题审题) ) 内容内容 要求要求 字数字数 要求要求 皇帝的新装皇帝的新装 80词左右词左右 2:List simple sentences2:List simple sentences ( (列列简单简单句句 子子) ) How did the story begin? Wh
17、at happened? 1.Once upon a time, an emperor loved new clothes very much. 2.One day, Two brothers came to the city. 3.They planned to make special clothes for the emperor. 4.The emperor had to give them much gold and silk. Whats the end of the story? 5. The special clothes were OK. 6. People couldnt
18、see the new clothes. 7.Everyone said his new clothes were wonderful. 8. One young boy shouted that the emperor didnt wear anything. 3:Connect sentences 3:Connect sentences ( (连连句子句子) ) Once upon a time, an emperor loved new clothes very much. One day, Two brothers came to the city to make special cl
19、othes for the emperor. At first, They asked for much gold and silk, but they kept them for themselves. Then the special clothes were OK. But nobody could see it. Everyone said his new clothes were wonderful. Finally , one young boy shouted that the emperor wore nothing. 4:Add the head and tail.4:Add
20、 the head and tail.（加（加首尾首尾） Its a story about The Emperors New Clothes. 明确写什么故事明确写什么故事: : 故事带来的启示故事带来的启示: : In a word, the story told us that we should be brave to say the truth. Once upon a time, an emperor loved new clothes very much. One day, Two brothers came to the city to make special clothes
21、 for the emperor. At first, They asked for much gold and silk, but they kept them for themselves. Then the special clothes were OK. But nobody could see it. Everyone said his new clothes were wonderful. Finally,one young boy shouted that the emperor wore nothing. Its a story about The Emperors New Clothes. In a word, the story told us that we should be brave to say the truth. 5:Beauty your composition(美美 化作文化作文) 6:Check your composition6:Check your composition （检查检查作文）作文） Practice makes perfect! 1. Continue to finish your compositions. 2. Exchange your compositions and correct them.
