1、人教版八年级下册人教版八年级下册期中考试题型特训之书面表达期中考试题型特训之书面表达 书面表达书面表达(一一) 根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与妈妈发生的故事。 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。 要求：不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；词数：100 左右； 开头已给出。 One day, Xiaoming saw a little girl fall down. _ _ _ _ _ _ 范文： One day，Xiaoming saw a little girl fall down. He wanted to help the girl, but his m
2、other stopped him and said, “Dont do that, or there will be some trouble.” A few days later, the mother saw Xiaoming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiaoming said to his mother，“If I had done something, you would think that it was I who knocked it over.” I disagree with the mother in the stor
3、y. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Everyone should do something good to make our society better, right? 名师点评： 本文
4、行文流畅，层次清楚，准确表达了图片中反映的故事和折射出的深层道理。文章中 运用了宾语从句、定语从句、条件状语从句等复合句式，表现了作者深厚的写作基础。 本文的添彩点： 使用了复合句式： 条件状语从句 If I had done something, you .；宾语从句 I think parents.；定语从句.to help others who are in trouble.动词词组 let.be, knock over, set a good example, care for 等丰富了文章的表现力。 书面表达书面表达(二二) 几天前，Linda 得了感冒，妈妈给她量了体温，发现她发高
5、烧，要求她去医院。在 路上，她发现一个小男孩摔伤了膝盖，一位路过的叔叔正在给小男孩绑绷带。Linda 很 感动，带小男孩一起去了医院。请根据所给材料写一篇文章，描述一下故事梗概，并发 表自己的感慨。 提示词：pass by 路过； be moved(感动) _ _ _ _ 范文： A few days ago Linda had a cold. Her mother took her temperature and found she had a fever. She asked Linda to go to hospital. On the way to Peoples Hospital L
6、inda saw a little boy lying on the road. He fell down and hurt his knee. At that time a man passed by and he bandaged the boy. Linda was so moved that she made a decision to take the boy to the hospital. Thanks to the man and Linda, the boy was saved in time. I think we should help others when theyr
7、e in trouble. 点评：on the way to.意为“在去的路上”。thanks to“多亏了”用在此处给短文 增添了不少文采。这一句是点睛之笔，使短文比较有震撼力。 书面表达书面表达(三三) 假如你是 Shen Yang，参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部”(Saving the Environment Club) 组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括：张贴海报、分发广告、清扫街道、打扫公园等。 请给你的笔友 John 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿 者工作的看法。80 词左右，注意书信格式。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 范文： Dear John， I
8、am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers. Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired b
9、ut felt very happy at the same time. I think its fantastic to be a volunteer. What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon! Best wishes， Shen Yang 名师点评： 本文根据所给提示完成书信，完全符合书信的写作格式，语言规范，条理清晰，用词丰 富，对志愿者活动情况用过去时叙述，无语法错误。 本文添彩点： 本文较好地运用了所学的动词短语，如 put up；hand out；clean up；think of 等，为文 章添彩不少，成
10、为文章得分的亮点。 书面表达书面表达(四四) 你是一名中学生，想成为国际动物救护中心“International Animal Helpers”(IAH)的一名志 愿者，请你用英文写一封自荐信。 内容要点如下： 1. 能参加周末活动； 2. 从家乘地铁到“中心”约十分钟； 3. 喜爱动物，愿意帮助它们； 4. 懂一点医学知识； 5. 补充一两点个人信息和想法。 注意： 1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数：6080； 3. 不得逐条翻译，内容要连贯得体； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：subway n. 地铁 volunteer n. 志愿者 medica
11、l adj.医学的 Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Li Ming._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 范文： Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Li Ming. I think volunteering is of great significance to our society, which can enrich our experience as well as improve our ability. I wan
12、t to join you. Im free on weekends, so I have enough time. It only takes me about ten minutes to go to your center by subway. I know a little about medical knowledge. I love animals and Im willing to help them. Besides, Im good at getting along well with others. Looking forward to your reply. Yours
13、sincerely, Li Ming 点评： 本文运用了“三步法”写志愿活动类作文。1.引出话题 (第一段)；2.展开表述，表 明具体能力(第二段)；3.结尾综述，表达意愿(第三段)。上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 添彩点： 第一段中非限制性定语从句的巧妙运用使读者眼前一亮， 接下来灵活使用连接 词 so, and, besides 等， 使文章的表达更有逻辑性， 更富有条理。 固定短语 be willing to, be good at, get along well with 的使用也为文章增色不少。 书面表达书面表达(五五) 有句话是“帮助他人，快乐自己”。做志愿者活动在中国已经很流行了
14、。你愿意帮助 他人吗？如果你有机会成为志愿者，你愿意做什么工作呢？为什么？ 请根据以上提示，写一篇文章。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：be ready to do sth.; have a chance; would like to; not only.but also. Volunteering is becoming more and more popular in China. We are making ourselves happy while we are helping others. _ _ _ 范文： Volunteering is becoming more an
15、d more popular in China. We are making ourselves happy while we are helping others. If Im a volunteer, I will be ready to help the children in the poor area because they dont have enough money to get education. If I have a chance to teach there, Ill work very hard and teach them knowledge as much as
16、 possible. I will not only raise money and give away it to them but also teach them how to help others . I believe with my help these children will live a better life in the future. 点评：as much as possible 意为“尽可能多地”。how to help others 为“疑问词不定 式”结构，结构简单明了，表意准确。with my help 意为“在我的帮助下”。 书面表达书面表达(六六) 在英语
17、课上，老师组织全班同学开展有关“做家务”的讨论。假设以下是你的小组所做的 讨论记录，请根据这个记录用英语向全班作一个汇报。 Name Housework Wu Jun clean up rooms Jia Mei help her mom cook dinner Wang Ping wash clothes I . 要求： 1. 汇报内容要包括你和同学们所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法； 2. 70 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Now let me tell you about the discussion in our group. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ T
18、hats all. Thanks for listening! 范文： Now let me tell you about the discussion in our group. Wu Jun cleans up rooms on weekends and Jia Mei likes helping her mom cook dinner. Wang Ping sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water flowers. In my opinion, it is nece
19、ssary for us to do some chores. By doing that, we can help our parents and understand them better. We can learn to take care of ourselves. And we can also relax ourselves from hard work and develop our independence. Thats all. Thanks for listening! 点评：本文运用了“一引二答三总结法”写观点看法类作文。1.引出问题(第一段)；2. 回答问题(第二段)
20、；3.归纳总结(第三段)。 添彩点：本文对同学所做的家务以及对做家务的看法表述清晰。一些短语的使用，如 as for me, in my opinion, by doing that，体现了作者较强的英语运用能力。 书面表达书面表达(七七) 现在许多家长认为只要孩子能一门心思学习，就没有必要做家务。孩子们衣来伸手，饭 来张口，但家长认为他们长大了自然会做家务。作为一名中学生，你同意这种观点吗？为什 么？ 要求：语意通顺，书写规范。词数 100 左右。 _ _ _ _ 范文： Now many parents think their children neednt do chores if th
21、ey get good grades.They also think their children can do chores when they grow up.I_disagree_with_them. Firstly, I think as a family member, its_everyones_duty_to_do_housework .Doing housework helps children understand the idea of fairness.Secondly, it can develop childrens independence.Now they dep
22、end on their parents too much.They even never think about how to solve problems alone and cant look after themselves.Thirdly, both parents and children should be clear that its not enough to get good grades.Finally, doing chores is easy, so children should do some chores at home. In_a_word,_doing_ch
23、ores_at_home_ _is_good_for_children. 点评： 开门见山地点明主旨， 使短文表意准确。 使用固定句型增加短文的文采。 用在此处很生动，句意表达更准确。最后一句话照应短文开头，使短文结构合理， 行文流畅。 书面表达书面表达(八八) Teens Feelings 是一个国际青少年网站，以下内容取自其贴吧。假设你是李华，请你用 英语回帖，给 Eric 提出 23 条建议。 要求：1.不要出现考生本人信息； 2. 100 词左右。 Teens Feelings My problem is that Im shy. I feel nervous when I answe
24、r the teachers questions in class. I always hate to talk in front of a big group of people. I prefer to stay at home rather than go out and have fun. Everybody laughs at me. What should I do? Eric, England Hi, Eric._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Li Hua, China 范文： Hi, Eric. I know that you prefer to stay at hom
25、e rather than go out and have fun. Thats because you are shy. You feel nervous when you answer the teachers questions. Please dont worry about what others think of you. Youd better do something to change. First, try to talk with your classmates or help them when they need. Then try to answer one eas
26、y question in front of the class. If you start，you will feel much better. And its a good idea to go out and have fun doing sports with your friends. If you can do this, you will be more confident. Li Hua, China 点评：本文运用了“现象、原因、措施法”写“就烦恼提供建议类”作文。 1. 表述现象，引出烦恼：prefer to stay at home rather than go out
27、and have fun。2.分析 原因：Thats because you are shy. You feel .。3.可行措施，具体建议(第二段)。 添彩点： 1.first, then, and 的使用， 使文章层次分明， 结构完整。 2.Youd better., .its a good idea to.语气委婉，亲切自然。3.两个 if 条件状语从句的使用，使文章句式丰富。 书面表达书面表达(九九) 假如你是 Kate，下面是你的笔友 Alice 给你发来的一封 e- mail,请根据内容给她回复。 提示词：listen to, communicate with, get along
28、 with, smile 等 Dear Kate， Now I have a problem.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school？” and so on.Im annoyed.What should I do? Alice Dear Alice， _ _ _ Yours， Kate 范文： Dear Alice， As a teenager
29、, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get on better with my mother.Here_is_some_advice_for_you. Your mother talks much because she cares about you.Maybe its not a good way, but it shows your mothers love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mothers, yo
30、u can communicate with her, and tell her what youre thinking about.If your mother doesnt take your advice, just keep quiet and give her a smile. I_hope_what_I_say_here_can_help_you_a_lot. Yours， Kate 点评：用 but 一词使前后文衔接更紧密。用一个过渡句为后文的陈述作铺垫，逻辑 关系更合理。 连续用两个条件状语从句使句意的表达更生动。 在邮件或信件的结尾提出 希望，使文意的表达更加完美。 书面表达
31、书面表达(十十) 上周六你们班去了公园。请根据下面的提示， 写一篇不少于 80 词的短文， 介绍 一下这次活动。 提示： 1) 上个星期六上午， 我们去了公园。 我们是坐公交车去的。 我起床晚了。 当我赶到车站的时候， 同学们正在等我。 2) 当我们到达公园的时候， 一些人正在公园里跳舞。 3) 在公园里看到老虎正在吃肉， 猴子在爬树， 熊猫在树下睡觉。 4) 当我们闲逛的时候， Kate 拍了一些照片。 _ _ _ _ 范文： Last_Saturday_morning,_we_went_to_the_park. I got up late.When I got to the bus sta
32、tion, my classmates were waiting for me.We went to the park by bus.When we arrived at the park, some people were dancing. In the park we saw some animals.The_tiger_was_eating_meat.The_monkeys_were_climbing_the_tree.The_pa ndas_were_sleeping_under_the_tree. Perhaps they were tired.While we were walking around the park, Kate took some photos.We_had_a_good_time_in_the_park. 点评：短文开始点明了事情发生的时间和地点，为以后的描写作铺垫。连续用过去 进行时描述动物的形态，使短文生动形象。最后点明了自己的感受，锦上添花。
