1、Unit5 Music 重点归纳重点归纳 mobile phones only vibrations; streets only noisy crowds; cafes, western restaurants only depressed meals. What a terrible world it is! As a student, I hope we all can enjoy the fun brought by music in our spare time. Instead of just listening to music, we can even make our own
2、music. Lets enjoy the fun of music! Thanks again for your attention! 总评 本篇范文， 结构上采用提出主题阐述主题再次强调主题的方 式；其中四处排比的运用，可以调动听众的情感，与听众形成共鸣，达到了演讲 的目的。 亮点呈现 (1)Music is like the air we need .，使用比喻的修辞手法，使表达生动形象。 (2)What a terrible world it is！使用 what 引导的感叹句式，充满感染力。 典例分析二：典例分析二： 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Li
3、stening_to music can help me focus better. Since I discovered it two years ago, Ive used music to get through boring_work or to focus creatively. Ive found that it can make even the dullest jobs enjoyable and help clear mental blocks to creativity. I first noticed the good effects of music while pla
4、ying video games. It was a few days before Christmas in 2008 and I was playing online video games. My parents had just given me a new MP3, so I decided to listen to music through the headphones while I played. After a few minutes I noticed a great change in my style of play. I was playing more natur
5、ally. The music relaxed me, and, to a certain extent, distracted me from the game, allowing my subconscious (潜意识的) talent to come through. The music also helped me block_out the outside world. With those headphones on I was like a machine, moving from one task to the next without unnecessary thought
6、s or actions. 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： Music can also have a great effect on mood. Paragraph 2： Listening to music with relaxing rhythms and a positive message helps you forget your work and think happy thoughts. 精彩范
7、文 Paragraph 1： Music can also have a great effect on mood. If Im in a bad mood at work, Ill listen_to some of Bob Marleys and get down to business. It always takes my mind off what Im doing and makes me a happier person. The same is true for classic rock. One summer, I did a boring_job collecting bo
8、ttle openers by hand. Without a radio playing classic rock in the background, I would have hated life. The background music helped me block_out everything outside besides the tiredness and bored feeling. Paragraph 2： Listening to music with relaxing rhythms and a positive message helps you forget yo
9、ur work and think happy thoughts. But the results you see will depend heavily on your personal tastes. Experiment with the types of music you listen to during certain tasks. By trial and error youll finally discover your best choice, Im always looking for new concentration aids, so Id love to know w
10、hat type of music works best for me. In some cases, Id like relaxing music, while in other cases I might choose Rock, or hip hop, or songs with great lyrics. 【总评】 本文能抓住原文中提及的“听音乐能有助于顺利完成乏味的工作，并有利于 创造性思维”这一关键线索，恰当安排情节，按照要求完成了对本文的续写。同 时续写部分细节描述合理，语言运用得体简洁。 【亮点呈现】 (1)If Im in a bad mood at . if 引导的条件状语
11、从句以及虚拟语气的运用，使 得语言流畅优美，富有表现力。 (2)but, so 等连词以及 The same is true for classic rock 过渡句的运用，既简化 了语言铺陈内容，又使得上下文衔接自然，结构严谨。 (3)in some case, while 等词汇用于举例和对比，凸显了所举事例对文章主题 的呼应。 跟踪演练一：跟踪演练一： 假如你是李华，你所在学校的演讲社团要招新的社员，要求想要入社的同学 准备一篇演讲稿。 要求：与音乐有关； 注意：词数 100 左右。 精彩范文 跟踪演练二：跟踪演练二： 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I g
12、ot a piano when I was 26 years old.I had been longing to play the piano since I was a little girl. My grandmother had a piano in her house.But she gave it away to my aunt when I was still little. After I got married, someone offered a piano to us for $280.We bought it immediately, even though it mea
13、nt that we had to live off our food storage for a couple of months. Paying a teacher was out of the question, so I set out to teach myself the piano.First, I set out to learn to read_music. I got any music I could find and played songs by looking at notes. The problem was that I couldnt play any pie
14、ce of music if I didnt look at notes. I had always thought that playing the piano by_ear was reserved for a few select pianists who were born with the gift. However, what a pianist told me changed my opinion.One day, I went to a concert. Luckily, after the concert, I could talk with the pianist for
15、a while. He told me that everyone was_able_to play the piano by ear if he or she tried hard enough. He meant that to learn to play the piano by ear, I would have to practice it. 注意： 1所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： So I started
16、playing jingles (短曲) from advertisements. Paragraph 2： “Remember, you can learn to play the piano by ear, too.” 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了自己在拥有一架钢琴后如何开始 学习弹钢琴并逐步取得进步的过程。 精彩范文 Paragraph 1： So I started playing jingles (短曲) from advertisements. Before long, I was_able_to pick out simple tunes of songs that w
17、ere very familiar to me, and even to add accompaniments. When I started practicing playing by_ear,_I also realized that my sight of reading skills improved greatly. Its because rather than reading every note,_I was able to put my fingers where they should be according to the feel of the music. Parag
18、raph 2： “Remember, you can learn to play the piano by ear, too.” The famous pianist,_singer, composer, actor- Harry Connick, Jr., shares his love of music and tells me the statement. Harrys performances include a wide range of topics and he teaches me a lot, toofrom the fundamentals of the piano, re
19、ading music, and playing chords, to more advanced topics like jazz and improvisation. Harrys advice makes playing the piano fun and easy. He has a gifted ability to connect with audiences worldwide. But to me, learning to play the piano by ear is just a start. The goal is to make music a fantastic life full of colours and dreams.
