1、Civilized Etiquette with me!文明礼仪伴我行,Writing class(写作课),Incivilization,不文明现象,Collect materials我思？,请大家根据这个小短片而头脑风暴，以4-5人为一个小组，讨论你身边的文明现象以及不文明现象并写在老师备好的纸条上，每组派一个同学迅速把相关短语列在黑板上进行文明与不文明分类。 大家只有三分钟哦！,2. Make sentences我编,根据所给的图片联系所归纳的短语造句。可以用到的句型：Dont We cant We can We have to We must,We cant fight in the
2、classroom.,Dont fight in the classroom.,We cant talk in class.,Dont talk in class.,Dont eat in class.,We cant eat in class.,We cant run in the hallways.,Dont run in the hallways.,We cant listen to music in class.,Dont listen to music in class.,We can eat in the dining room.,We have to /must eat in t
3、he dining hall.,dining hall,We can run outside.,We have to/ must run outside.,outside,We have to/must listen to music in the music room.,We can listen to music in the music room.,music room,3. How to combine? 我赏,范文赏析： 这是一篇关于校规的作文，请大家大声朗读并发掘其中的奥秘。,We have many rules in our school. First, we cant be l
4、ate for school. And we must get to school on time. Second, we must listen to the teacher carefully(认真地)in class. So we cant talk or eat in class. Third, dont run in the hallways. Because its not safe. At last, we cant fight with each other, either. How about your school rules?,Our school rules,We ha
5、ve many rules in our school. First, we cant be late for school. And we must get to school on time. Second, we must listen to the teacher carefully(认真地)in class. So we cant talk or eat in class. Third, dont run in the hallways. Because its not safe. At last, we cant fight with each other, either. How
6、 about your school rules?,Our school rules,如果我们恰当的使用了关联词，这将会使我们的作文行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。,4. Let me have a try. 我写,请大家根据要求完善作文。时间8-10分钟。,Writing(写作) （8-10分钟）,近日来我校在正在进行“洁雅行动，靓我青春铜梁巴中文明礼仪伴我行主题活动”。请以 Civilized Etiquette with me(文明礼仪伴我行)为主题向广大学生发起倡议，争做文明中学生。字数不得低于60词。（文段首尾已经给出，不计入总数）参考内容如下：,Dear classmates, Our s
7、chool has an activity called Civilized Etiquette with me these days. But what can we do to be a good student? (我们学校近日来正在进行文明礼仪伴我行的活动.但我们应该怎么做才能成为一个文明的中学生呢?） . . These rules can help us a lot . Lets act right now!（让我们立即 行动吧！） . Mike,5. Comment 我评,内容是否完整、字数是否充足？语法是否出错？拼写是否出错？关联词是否运用恰当？卷面是否整洁、书写是否漂亮？,6
8、. Summary 我总结,初一年级英语作文写作要领：（1）素材充分，打好基础（2）认真审题，明确要求（3）遣词造句，表达规范 要学会善于运用适当的关联词，比如：and, or, but, so，because, also等。（4）认真书写，卷面整洁,Homework:Talk about the rules in your home.,Thank you!,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
