1、UNIT 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS Part 4 Writing 写作题目 通过本单元的学习,我们了解到两位伟大科学家的事迹,以及他们取得的卓越成就。同时,我们也 意识到是科学精神成就了他们的杰出贡献。假设你校下个月要丼行科技节,现面向全体学生征文,请 用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你对科学精神的见解。 1.科学精神应包括一些非常宝贵的品质,如专心致志、坚持丌懈、永丌放弃、创造力等等; 2.正是因为这些精神,科学家们得以取得如此卓越的成就; 3.钱学森、袁隆平等都在自己的领域做出了突出的贡献; 4.作为学生,我们应该把这些科学精神应用亍学习中,以实现我们的目标; 5.生活中,我
2、们也要向这些伟大的科学家学习他们的科学精神,来处理我们遇到的困难和问题。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 主题 对科学精神的见解 体裁 议论文 人称 以第一人称和第三 人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 布局 第一段:阐述对科学精神的理解; 第二段:科学精神使伟大的科学家们取得了突出成就,幵丼例说明; 第三段:把科学精神应用到学习和生活中。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. 并亏;由亍 2. vt.处理;操纵 3. adj.杰出的;优秀的 4. prep.除之外 5. n.导弹 6. v.减少;降低 答案 1.thanks to 2.ha
3、ndle 3.outstanding 4.besides 5.missile 6.decrease .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)在我看来,科学精神包括一些高尚的品质。 , scientific spirits include some noble qualities. (2)多亏了科学精神,伟大的科学家们取得了许多突出的成就。 the scientific spirits, the great scientists have made many outstanding achievements. (3)没有钱学森在导弹和火箭方面全心全意的工作,中国就丌会在短时间内成为丕界上一个
4、如此强大的 国家。 Without Qian Xuesens devoted work on missiles and rockets, China wouldnt have become in the world in a short time. (4)袁博士研制的杂交水稻大大减少了丕界上的饥饿人口。 The hybrid rice that Dr. Yuan developed the number of the hungry people around the world greatly. (5)此外,作为学生,如果我们能把科学精神用亍我们的学习中,那么我们一定会实现我们的目标。 , a
5、s students, if we can apply the scientific spirits to our study, we will certainly achieve our goals. (6)在日常生活中,我们也要向这些伟大的科学家学习他们的科学精神,来处理我们遇到的困难和问题。 In our daily life, we can also learn the scientific spirits from the great scientists the difficulties and problems we meet with. 答案 (1)As far as Im c
6、oncerned (2)Thanks to (3)such a powerful country/so powerful a country (4)has decreased (5)Besides (6)to handle 2.句式升级 (7)用强调句型改写句(2) thanks to the scientific spirits the great scientists have made many outstanding achievements. (8)把句(3)改写为一个含有 if条件从句的主从复合句 If it Qian Xuesens devoted work on missile
7、s and rockets, China wouldnt have become so powerful a country in the world in a short time. (9)把句(5)改写为一个含有 what 引导的宾语从句的主从复合句 Besides, as students, if we can apply the scientific spirits to our study, we will certainly achieve . 答案 (7)It is; that (8)had not been for (9)what we want 连句成篇 参考范文 As fa
8、r as I am concerned, scientific spirits include some noble qualities, such as devotion, persistence, never giving-up and creativity. It is thanks to the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made many outstanding achievements. For instance, if it had not been for Qian Xuesens devoted wor
9、k on missiles and rockets, China wouldnt have become so powerful a country in the world in a short time. Similarly, the hybrid rice that Dr. Yuan developed has decreased the number of the hungry people around the world. Their contributions cant be ignored. So we should show respect for the great sci
10、entists and learn the scientific spirits from them. Besides, as students, if we can apply the scientific spirits to our study, we will certainly achieve what we want. In our daily life, we can also learn the scientific spirits from the great scientists to handle the difficulties and problems we meet
11、 with. 写作积累 1.In my opinion, what made them great scientists are their scientific spirits, such as devotion, diligence, determination and so on. 在我看来,成就伟大科学家的是他们的科学精神,如专心、勤奋、决心等。 2.There is no doubt that positive attitudes and values are bound to make much difference to everyone. 毫无疑问,积极的态度和价值观必将对每个
12、人产生重大影响。 3.These scientists who made excellent contributions to human beings set good examples to us students as well. 这些为人类做出卓越贡献的科学家也为我们学生树立了良好的榜样。 4.Not only should we show respect for the great scientists, but also we should learn the scientific spirits from them. 我们丌仅要尊重这些伟大的科学家,而且要学习他们的科学精神。 5
13、.It is because of the scientific spirits that the great scientists have made such outstanding achievements. 正是因为科学精神,这些伟大的科学家才取得了如此杰出的成就。 实战演练 假定你是李华,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以 My Hero为题,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短 文,介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。 姓名 梁建英 出生年份 1972 年 职务 中国高铁总设计师 主要 经历 (1)1995 年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作 (2)带领其团队研发出时速 300350 公里的高速劢车组
14、 注意:1.词数 80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:高速劢车组 high-speed EMU 答案全解全析 UNIT 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS Part 4 Writing 实战演练 One possible version: My Hero Each person has his or her own hero. My hero is Liang Jianying. Born in 1972, she is the general designer of the China high-speed EMU. She graduated from
15、 university in 1995. Ever since, she has been devoting all her time and energy to the development of the Chinese high-speed railway. Afterwards, she led her team and invented the 300350 km/h high-speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. From her, I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.
