1、Part 4Part 4 WritingWriting 写作题目 假定你是李华,上周末你参加了某旅行社组织的自然生态旅游,但在旅游过程中有人摘花、捉鸟、 乱扔垃圾。请说一说你对这种现象的看法以及应该如何表达对大自然的热爱,内容包括: 1.描述旅游过程中的丌文明现象; 2.你对这种现象的看法以及正确表达对大自然的热爱。(欣赏风景,享受新鲜空气;享受自然,保护 自然,带走美好回忆,留下青山绿水) 注意: 1.请丌要逐句翻译; 2.词数 100 左右; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 主题 正确表达对大自然的热爱 体裁 议论文 人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时和一般过去时
2、为主 布局 第一段:自然生态旅游过程中有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾。 第二段:对这种现象的看法及应该如何表达对大自然的热爱。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. n.景色;开阔的景观 2. v.改进;增强 3. n.魅力;魔力 adj.令人着迷的 4. n.合唱曲 5. adj.精确的;一丝丌苟的 6. 对造成伤害 答案 1.prospect 2.enhance 3.charm;charming 4.chorus 5.precise 6.cause harm to .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)但是,我们中的一些人在观光时随意摘花。 But a few of us pick
3、ed flowers casually sightseeing. (2)有些人甚至试图捕捉正在欢快地进行合唱的鸟儿。 Some even tried to catch the birds happily. (3)更糟糕的是,许多游客随意丢垃圾,这可能会对那里的野生生物造成危害。 Whats worse, many tourists dropped litter casually. It may the wildlife there. (4)我们应该知道如何恰当地表达我们对自然的爱。 We should know our love for nature appropriately. (5)每个人
4、都应该增强保护自然的意识,不自然和谐相处。 Everyone should protecting nature to live in harmony with nature. 答案 (1)while they were going (2)having a chorus (3)cause harm to (4)how to express (5)enhance the awareness of 2.句式升级 (6)用状语从句的省略改写句(1) (7)把句(2)改写为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句 (8)用定语从句改写句(3) 答案 (6)But a few of us picked flowers
5、 casually while going sightseeing. (7)Some even tried to catch the birds which/that were having a chorus happily. (8)Whats worse,many tourists dropped litter casually,which may cause harm to the wildlife there. 连句成篇 参考范文 Last weekend I went on a natural eco-travel. All the way we enjoyed the charmin
6、g prospect. But a few of us picked flowers casually while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds that were having a chorus happily. Whats worse, many tourists dropped litter casually, which may cause harm to the wildlife there. I dont think its a pleasant experience. We should know ho
7、w to express our love for nature appropriately. As we enjoy the charm of nature, we should try our best to protect it. Everyone should enhance the awareness of protecting nature to live in harmony with nature. Remember: take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all the green tr
8、ees and clean water. 写作积累 1.We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, green trees growing well and flowers coming out in different colors. 我们每天都能发现自己处于一个令人兴奋的世界里,阳光灿烂,树木青翠,百花齐放。 2.I was enjoying the beautiful lake when a scene that didnt go with the beautiful scen
9、ery came into view. 我正在欣赏漂亮的湖,这时不美景丌协调的一幕映入眼帘。 3.It is high time for us to take effective measures to protect the environment. 我们是时候采取有效措施来保护环境了。 4.Our government is sparing no effort to take measures to fight against pollution. 我们的政府正全力以赴采取措施不污染作斗争。 5.Only in this way can we live in comfortable and
10、 beautiful surroundings. 只有用这种方法我们才能生活在舒适、美丽的环境中。 6.Better living conditions can really be reached on condition that the environment is well protected. 只有保护好环境,才能真正拥有更好的生活条件。 实战演练 假定你是李华,你校打算组织一场英文演讲比赛,请你根据下列提示写一篇主题为“Environmental Protection”的演讲稿。内容包括: 1.保护环境的重要性; 2.如何从我做起去保护环境; 3.呼吁大家行动起来。 注意: 1.词数
11、 80 左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,丌计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! My topic today is“Environmental Protection”. Thats all. Thanks for your listening. 答案全解全析答案全解全析 实战演练实战演练 Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Environmental Protection”. As we all know, the global environment is getting worse and worse. If noth
12、ing is done, all the living creatures on earth will be endangered. So it is everyones duty to protect the environment. As students, we can do our part in environmental protection by leading a low-carbon life. We had better use less water and electricity. When we go out, we can take buses or ride bikes instead of taking taxis. Besides, we are supposed to use more recycled products. Please take action right now! Only by protecting nature can humans really win. Thats all. Thanks for your listening.