1、Continuation Writing 第 2 页 Lead-in Have a free talk 第 3 页 1.grasp how to read for writing materials. 2.master some tips to construct the plot. plete and assess the continuation story Learning aims After this period,you are expected to 第 4 页 why What when/where Who The storys six elements main charac
2、ter setteing Main events Theme How Missus Sommers a large department Explore the main events Explore the theme 第 5 页 Read for the plot Detective Beginning ? Climax Ending Development Paragraph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3&4 Missus Sommers got 15$ unexpectedly and planned to go shopping with the money. Mis
3、sus Sommers did housework and then went to the department. Missus Sommers firstly tried a pile of stockings and then tried on a pair of boots for herself . 第 6 页 Explore the character Detective Beginning Paragraph1 Missus Sommers one day found herself the unexpected owner of fifteen dollars. It seem
4、ed to her a very large amount of money. For a day or two she walked around in a dreamy state as she thought about her choices. Her daughter Janie was wearing worn hoes and needed new ones. She would buy cloth for new shirts for the boys. Her daughter Mag should have another dress. And still there wo
5、uld be enough left for new stockings for her children. The idea about how to spend the dollars made her restless with excitement. _ _ _ _ _ excited additional details action feelings 第 7 页 Detective Beginning Development Paragraph1 Paragraph2 Development Paragraph2 On the day she planned to go shopp
6、ing with the money, she ate a light meal- no! Between getting the children fed and the house cleaned, and preparing herself to go shopping, she forgot to eat at all! _ _ busy Action _ Explore the character 第 8 页 facial expression language facial expression Detective Beginning Climax Development Para
7、graph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3&4 Climax Paragraph3&4 When she arrived at the large department store, .She smiled as if she had been asked to inspect diamond jewelry, and started to feel the soft, expensive items. Missus Sommers picked up a black pair and looked at them closely. Two red marks suddenly
8、showed on her pale face. She looked up at the shop girl and said proudly, well, I will buy this pair.” Missus Sommers .She had let herself be controlled by some machine-like force that directed her actions and freed her of responsibility. Next ， she went to the shoe department.How good was the touch
9、 of the silk on her skin! . Her foot and ankle looked lovely. She could not believe that they were a part of herself adverb _ _ _ delighted satisfied action action feelings free enjoyable Explore the character 第 9 页 Detective Beginning ? Climax Ending Development Paragraph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3&4 e
10、xcited Missus Sommers got 15$ unexpectedly and planned to buy the necessities for children with the money. busy Missus Sommers did housework and then went to the department. delighted/satisfied /free /enjoyable Missus Sommers firstly tried a pile of stockings and then tried on a pair of boots for he
11、rself . conflict Explore the character 第 10 页 Writer Make predictions with logic and imagination Paragraph 1 After buying a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department. Paragraph 2 She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something. Q1:Why did Missus
12、Sommers walk into the clothing department? Q2:What did she do there? Q3:How did she feel? Q1:What did the kid remind her of? Q2:How did she feel at the moment? Q3:What did she do then? Tip1:Infer the development from the given sentences Tip2:Raise questions about the development Ending Missus Sommer
13、s went back with stockings and boots for herself. Missus Sommers went back with clothes for her children. Reasonable ? 第 11 页 Writer Paragrah 1 After buying a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department. Paragraph 2 She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded h
14、er of something. Settle four important sentences in the continued paragraphs 1. 敲定续写第一段第二句的写法敲定续写第一段第二句的写法_ 2. 敲定续写第一段最后一句的写法敲定续写第一段最后一句的写法_ 3. 敲定续写第二段第二句的写法敲定续写第二段第二句的写法_ 4. 敲定续写第二段最后一句的写法敲定续写第二段最后一句的写法_ A. 衔接首句衔接首句 B.承上启下承上启下C. 呼应原文，升华主题呼应原文，升华主题 connecting with the first sentce connecting with th
15、e next paragraph echo to the given passage & sublimate the theme connecting with the first sentce Add vivid and detailed description 第 12 页 Tips to the given passage and the beginnings of the two paragraphs. Well-connected vocabulary, grammar items and sentence patterns. Colourful Coherent, logical
16、and reasonable Positive and meaningful Writer complete your own story plot theme 第 13 页 Scoring standards 山东续写山东续写 总则 总分为25分，按七个档次评分量 维度 内容质量、完整性、与原文情节融洽 词汇和语法结构恰当多样 上下文衔接和全文连贯性 词数 词数少于120的，酌情扣分 优 秀 档 要 求 22-25 1.创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文 融洽度高； 2.使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少， 且完全不影响理解； 3.自然有效地使用
17、了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后 呼应，意义连贯。 Assessor 第 14 页 Appreciator Appreciate the beauty After buying a pair of new boots, she walked into the clothing department. Missus Sommers was amazed by the shiny clothes there. Upon seeing a white dress, her eyes shined with excitement. She couldnt help saying, “How
18、 beautiful! ”. There was no dubt that she tried on the dress. Standing in front of the mirror, She couldnt belieave that she was so elegant. She packed the dress and walked to the counter without hesitation. Facial expressions 衔接首句衔接首句 承上启下承上启下 不同句式不同句式 Action Feelings Language 第 15 页 Appreciatior A
19、ppreciate the beauty She was about to leave the store when a kid runing around reminded her o something. Is this your note? I see it fall out from your bag. the kid said. And the note said New shoes for Janie. New shirts for the boys. Another dress for Mag New stocking for the Chidren. How could she
20、 forget all this? her cheeks was burning with shame. Missus Sommers thanked the boy and rushed to the stores where she bought clothes. She returned what she bought and purchased what children needed. Leaving the store, Missus Sommers was no longer elegant but relived. After all, it was her responsib
21、ility to take good care of her dear children. Facial expressions 衔接首句衔接首句 呼应原文呼应原文 不同句式不同句式 Action Feelings Language 升华主题升华主题 The first meaning of freedom is to assume his own responsibility. 第 17 页 Polish up your writing Share your writing with classmates and try to learn from them Assignment Practice makes perfect! You do, you get! Thank you!Thank you!
