1、书面表达专题 江苏省扬州高中 2020-2021 学年高一下学期开学检测英语试题 第四部分第四部分 书面表达书面表达(满分满分 15 分分) 66. 假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot） 。给开网店的美国朋友 Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点 包括： 1. 外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） ； 2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? _ _ _ Yours Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, How are you d
2、oing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can eit
3、her give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Do let me know if you need further information. Thank you! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给开网店的美国朋友 Tom 写封信，请他代卖自制的一些中 国结。 【详解】第一步：
4、审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 介绍外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） ； 2. 介绍象征意义； 3. 介绍价格 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） sell some Chinese knots; in the shape of a diamond; 5 inches long and 4 inches wide; stand for friendship, love and good luck; 12.99 US each; further information
5、;eitheror. 第三步：连词成句 1. I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. 2. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. 3. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. 4. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and
6、 good luck. 5. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. 6. They are only 12.99 US each. 7. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. 8. Do let me know if you need further information. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） （供参考） 1.
7、表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one han
8、d,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.（if 引导的宾语从句） 高分句型 2 People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their h
9、ouses.（eitheror.句型） 高分句型 3 Do let me know if you need further information.（强调句以及 if 引导的条件状语从句） 江苏省泰州市第二中学 2020-2021 学年高一下学期期初检测英语试题 第二节第二节 应用文写作应用文写作 ( (满分满分1 15 5分分) ) 假定你是李华， 受学生会委托， 围绕“垃圾分类， 保护环境”这一主题， 为校宣传栏“英语天地” 写一封倡议书， 内容包括： 1. 倡议的原因和目的；2. 倡议的具体内容；3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯
10、。 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage sorting；区分 differentiate Dear friends, _ _ _ _ _ _ The Students Union 应用文写作 Dear friends, Our school produces a lot of rubbish every day, such as leftover food, waste paper and plastic bottles, which brings a wide range of environmental problems as well as the waste of resources.
11、 Therefore, its time we took immediate action to change the situation. First of all, it is necessary for us to raise awareness of environmental protection and develop the good habit of garbage sorting. Whats more, we should voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from non-recyclable in our dail
12、y life. In a word, if everyone does his bit responsibility in garbage sorting, our school will become better and better. The Students Union 江苏省镇江市第一中学 2020-2021 学年高一英语下学期期初考试试题 假定你是校学生会主席李华， 你校交换生 Peter 在校乒乓球比赛中取得了第二名的好成绩。 请你给他写一 封电子邮件表示祝贺，内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.肯定其付出。注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作
13、答。 Dear Peter, Yours, Li Hua 第四部分第四部分 应用文应用文写作写作（满分（满分 15 分）分） One possible version: Dear Peter, What exciting news that you have won the second prize in the Ping-pong Match held in our school last week! Im writing to convey my heart-felt congratulations to you. As the old saying goes, “God helps th
14、ose who help themselves.” It is your pains-taking effort and constant practice that contribute to your remarkable success. Seeing you playing the table tennis day after day before the competition, I was always convinced that you would make it. Obviously, it wont be the last prize you gain. Therefore
15、, keep fighting and moving! Looking forward to your greater progress in the future. Yours, Li Hua 江苏省清江中学 2020-2021 学年高一下学期入学考试英语试卷 第二节第二节 书面表达书面表达(满分满分 25 分分) 52.假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Tim 想要在暑假时到中国旅游， 发邮件向你征求建议。 请你回复一封邮件， 内容包括： 1. 推荐一个城市。 2. 给出推荐理由。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tim, _ _ _ _ _ Y
16、ours LiHua 【答案】Dear Tim, Im glad to recommend a tourist city for you to spend your coming summer holidayAs far as Im concerned， Beijing is the best choice for you To start with， Beijing， the capital of China， is a very attractive city with a long history It lies in the north of China and is not too
17、hot at this time of the yearYou can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duckI hope you will enjoy itBesides，there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting，such as the Great Wall，the Summer Palace and the Forbidden CityThese scenic
18、 spots have attracted millions of tourists every yearI promise you will have a wonderful time here in Beijing I can act as your guide if you like， and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours LiHua 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。 【详解】第
19、一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假 定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tim 想要在暑假时到中国旅游，发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件，内 容包括： 1. 推荐一个城市。 2. 给出推荐理由。 第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，推荐一个 城市。第二段， 给出推荐理由。第三段，表达期望。 第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend ，attractive，the roast Beijing duck，enjoy，a great
20、number of，be worth visiting，be ready to do sth. 第四步：确定较为高级的句子:of which 引导的定语从句 You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck 省略that的宾语从句I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in BeijingIf 引导的条件状语从句 I can act as your guide if you like.
21、 第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: To start with, Besides, Finally. 第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:of which 引 导的定语从句 You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck省略 that 的宾语从句 I promise you will have a wonderfully
22、time here in BeijingIf 引导的条件状语从句 I can act as your guide if you like. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 江苏省如皋市 2020-2021 学年高一下学期期初调研测试英语试题 第一节第一节 应用文应用文 （满分（满分 15 分）分） 46. 假如你是李华，你的美国交流生同桌 Zack给你发了一封 e-mail，请根据信中的内容，用英语给他回信。 内容包括：1.你对这件事的看法；2.你的建议。 Dear Li Hua， Im writing to you for some advice.
23、1 played a bad joke on my best friend Charlie the other day.1 didnt realize that it was too much until he started to ignore me and refuse to talk to me. It made me very upset. However，I dont want to apologize because I think it was only a joke，but I dont want to lose the friendship cither. What shou
24、ld I do? Yours sincerely, Zack 注意： 1. 词数 80100； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Zack， _ _ _ _ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Zack， Im sorry to hear that youre having trouble with your best friend and I know how it feels. It seemed that you just wanted to play a joke rather than hurt Charlie on p
25、urpose. However，he took it seriously and felt hurt. I guess neither of you is wrong. Anyway，it was you who first caused the misunderstanding and I think youd better reach out to apologize to break the ice if you cherish your friendship. How about writing a card to express your apology? Hope you will
26、 get along well again. Yours， Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国交流生同桌 Zack 写封邮件，就其与好朋友开玩笑后， 好朋友不理他一事，谈谈自己的看法和提出相关建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,少量现在进行时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 你对这件事的看法； 2. 你的建议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） have trouble with sth.; on purpose; take
27、 sth. seriously; apologize to do sth.; break the ice; get along well 第三步：连词成句 1. Im sorry to hear that youre having trouble with your best friend and I know how it feels. 2. It seemed that you just wanted to play a joke rather than hurt Charlie on purpose. 3. However，he took it seriously and felt hu
28、rt. 4. Anyway，it was you who first caused the misunderstanding and I think youd better reach out to apologize to break the ice if you cherish your friendship. 5. Hope you will get along well again. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表转折对比关系：However 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 I guess neither of you is wrong. 用了省略 that引导的宾语从句。 高分句型 2 Anyway，it was you who first caused the misunderstanding and I think youd better reach out to apologize to break the ice if you cherish your friendship. 用了“it is/was +被强调部分+ who +句子的其他成分”强 调句型结构。
