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3、成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,学习目标,1.品味文章优美的语言,把握作者主要观点。(重点) 2.理解“精神的三间小屋”的深刻内涵,体会本文“以小见大”的精巧构思。(重点、难点) 3.学会关注自己的心灵,构建自己的精神空间。(重点),作者名片,毕淑敏,祖籍山东,1952年生于新疆伊宁。17岁赴西藏高原阿里地区当兵,在海拔五千米的高原部队服役11年。从医20多年后,开始专业写作。主要有中、短篇小说集女人之约昆仑殇预约死亡,散文集素面朝天提醒幸福保持惊奇,
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7、,hi,r,hu,d nn,tn,jn,ln,q,zhu,jin,hu,jin,ji,zhn,生难字,预习测评,形似字,弋( )游弋戈( )戈壁,坍( )坍塌 彤( )彤云,僵( )冻僵疆( )边疆缰( )缰绳,y,tn,tn,jin,jin,jin,词语解释,自惭形秽:原指因自己的举止容貌不如别人而感 到惭愧,后来泛指自愧不如别人。 广袤:开阔,广阔。广,从东到西的长度。袤,从南到北的长度。 积攒:一点(儿)一点(儿)地聚集。 可望而不可即:只能够望见而不能够接近,形容看来可以实现而实际难以实现。 宽宥:宽恕,原谅。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状
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9、元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,间不容发:两物中间容不下一根头发,形容事物之 间距离极小。 游弋:在水中游
10、动。 形销骨立:形容身体极其消瘦。 轻觑:轻视,小看。 濡养:滋养。 俯拾即是:只要弯下身子来捡,到处都是。形容地 上的某一类东西、要找的某一类例证、文章中的错别字等很多。也说俯拾皆是。,自由地朗读课文,思考:本文可以分为哪几个部分?,整体感知,第一部分(16):引出话题如何布置我们的心灵空间。,第二部分(717):分析人们的精神世界里应该建立“三间小屋”。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路
11、,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路
12、,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,第1层(7、8):分析如何建立第一间精神小屋,即盛放着爱和恨的小屋。 第2层(913):分析如何建立第二间精神小屋。即盛放着事业的小屋。 第3层(1417):分析如何建立第三间精神小屋,即安放我们自身的小屋。 第三部分(18、19):指出
13、我们能够建筑精神的三间小屋并扩建成精神大厦。,课文解读,作者认为应该修建三间精神小屋的原因是什么?,为了给精神建立栖息地,使人生健康、美丽、庄严、伟大、真诚、完满、永恒。,16自然段写的是什么?与后文写的精神的三间小屋有什么关联?,13段是全文的引子,由两句名言引出对精神空间的理解。 46段由身体活动的空间引出人心灵活动空间的思考。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,
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15、状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,第1自然段里的“每一粒泥土,每一朵浪花,每一朵云霓”三个短语能不能互换位置?为什么?,不能。因为它们对应上文的“大地,海洋,天空”。,走进第一间小屋,作者认为第一间精神小屋应该怎样布置才是美的?是怎样的美?,给爱留下足够的空间。 如果这样,“小屋就光明温暖,像一座
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24、所同化了,,常常随波逐流,用他人的观点来肯定事物的价值,常常以为众人所追求的就是他们自己想要的。于是别人的思想、外在的信息代替了他们自己的思想,使他们成为缺乏思想和思考的群体。,如果我们的精神小屋不住着自己,会出现什么情况?,如果真是那样,我们的精神小屋,不必等待地震和潮汐,在微风中就消无声息的坍塌了。我们的精神,将会孤独地在风雨中飘零。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成
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26、才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,如何理解“三间小屋,说大不大,说小不小”这句话?,因为相对于人类而言,它涉及的都是个人的喜怒哀乐、事业与生活;相对个人而言,它的意义可能比大地、海洋、天空都要宽广。,根据你的理解,谈谈“精神的三间小屋”之间的内在联系。,三间小屋是一个整体,其中盛放我们自身的
27、小屋是根本,是心灵大厦的基础,我们只有拥有自己的主见,才能明确自己所爱和所恨的,才懂得什么样的事业才能带给我们真正的快乐。,结构梳理,精神的三间小屋,一颗大心才能盛得下喜怒,输得出力量,引论,结论,如何让人的心灵博大,第一间小屋,第二间小屋,爱恨,美好人性 健康人格,建筑三间小屋 扩建精神大厦,事业,第三间小屋,自身,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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30、淑敏素面朝天,艺术特色,1.引用名言,巧妙开篇。 本文开头第自然段,分别引用了雨果的名言及俗语“宰相肚里能撑船”,从两句名言写起,为下文写人需要修建精神的三间小屋作好铺垫,水到渠成地提出自己的观点。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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