1、Section Writing有关旅游的电子邮件 技法指导 电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。 它与 一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分； 电子邮件写作 要简单明了，便于阅读；电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的 具体内容来确定。 增分佳句 It would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spa re time. 如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。 How is everything going with you？/How are you gettin g on with everything? 你最近一切
2、都好吗？ Id like to be your guide and sincerely invite you to co me to my house. 我很乐意做你的向导，并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。 As a native here, Id like to give you some recommend ations of the scenic spots here. 作为当地人，我很乐意就这儿的景点向你提一些建议。 Id like to share my travel experience with you. 我很乐意与你分享我的旅游经历。 电子邮件模板 Dear ， How happy
3、 I am to _ (表明收到来信). I m much pleased to inform you _ (简述个人 的近况) Last week, we _ (描述具体事情). The la ndscape was _ (描写具体的景物)I felt _ _ (描写感受) By the way, Im going to _ (表明意愿与 期望) Best wishes. Yours sincerely， 精品展示 2019襄阳高一检测假设你是王涛， 暑假期间你和父母一起 外出旅游玩得很开心， 你想将你的旅游经历用邮件形式与你的英 国笔友 Tom 分享。 注意： 词数 100 个左右， 开头
4、和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 审题谋篇 第一步：明确要求 该写作属于应用文旅游话题的电子邮件， 主要是分享旅游经 历，故应该以第一人称为主；介绍旅游经历时用一般过去时；期 望和祝福时应该用一般现在时。 第二步：确定段落 第一段：引入话题(暑假旅游) 第二段：旅游的过程及收获 第三段：希望与祝福 第三步：提炼要点 1originally原本；起初 2appreciate欣赏 3historical历史的 4travel_experience旅游经历 5a_collection_of收集 6cultural_treasures文化财富 7natural_scenery自然景观 8have_a_w
5、onderful_time过得愉快 9go_on_a_trip旅行 第四步：句式升级 1我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。拉萨也是这个地区 政治、经济和文化中心。 (一般表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa. Lhasa is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region. (高级表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lha
6、sa, which_is_also_the_political,_economic_and_ cultural_center_of_the_region.(定语从句) 2我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊， 那儿的自然景观让 我们感到平静祥和。 (一般表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery th ere. The natural scenery there made us feel peaceful and quiet. (高级表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery th ere, wh
7、ich_made_us_feel_peaceful_and_quiet.(定语从句) 3我们首先参观了布达拉宫，它始建于七世纪。 (一般表达)We first visited the Potala Palace which was or iginally built in the 7th century. (高级表达)We first visited the Potala Palace originally buil t_in_the_7th_century.(分词作定语) 连句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文： Dear Tom， Id like to share my tra
8、vel experience with you. During th is summer holiday, my parents and I went on a trip to the cap ital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region. We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7t h century. And then, we appreciated a ric
9、h collection of cultura l treasures in Tibet Museum where we learned some useful his torical knowledge about Tibet. During those days, we were all surprised by the natural scenery there, which made us feel pea ceful and quiet. I strongly suggest that you travel to Tibet wit h me next time and Im sure you will have a wonderful time. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Wang Tao
