1、Unit6 Earth first 单元核心考点梳理单元核心考点梳理 on the other hand, . 一方面另一方面 Arecent study suggests/shows that . 最近一项研究表明 We may take a common example to show . 我们可以举一个常见的例子来说明 There is good evidence to show that . 有充分的证据表明 According to the statistics provided by ., it can be seen that . 根据提供的数据，我们可以看到 No one ca
2、n ignore the fact that . 没有人能忽视这一事实 3结尾常用句式 In conclusion, . 总之 In short, . 简而言之 As far as Im concerned, . 就我个人而言 Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Takingallthesefactorsinto consideration, we may safely come to/reach the conclusion that . 从上述讨论来看/考虑到所有这些因素，我们完全可以得出结论 *典例示范典例示范 假如你是李华，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们不能合理利
3、用网络，关闭了 教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长 同意开通教室内的网络。 事由：教室内的电脑不能上网，建议学校开通网络。 原因：1.有利于查找资料； 2浏览新闻，了解信息； 3作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Headmaster， Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. _ _ _ I do hope you can take my suggestion int
4、o account and make a final decision. Yours， Li Hua 精彩范文 *实战演练实战演练 假设你是 David，你北京的朋友李华最近写信告诉你他想放弃申请 2020 年 北京冬奥会志愿者的想法。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，劝他不要放弃， 继续参加这项活动。 1李华英语好，善于交际，熟悉北京的情况，适合做志愿者； 2做志愿者是展示国家形象、锻炼自己的一次难得机会； 3要抓住机会，争取做一名优秀的奥运志愿者。 注意：1.80 词左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：2020 年北京冬奥会 the 2020 Beijing Winter
5、Olympic Games Dear Li Hua， I am surprised to learn _ _ _ Yours， David 精彩范文 Dear Li Hua， I am surprised to learn you want to give up applying to work as a volunteer for the 2020 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. After all, you have many advantages. First of all, you are a native of Beijing and thus know
6、it very well. In addition, your English is very good and you can talk with international friends freely in English. Also, you are easy to get along with, which is especially useful to a volunteer. Most importantly, it is a good opportunity to improve yourself and help display a good image of your co
7、untry. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can seize the chance and make every effort to become a good volunteer. Yours， David 总评本文使用了正确的书信体格式，范文内容涵盖所有要点，结构严谨， 观点明确，给出的理由充分合理，具有说服力。 亮点呈现 (1)使用 first of all, in addition, also, most importantly 等衔接词分条阐述理由， 逻辑性强；尾段使用 therefore 进行总结概括。 (2)范文中多处使用高级句式，如定语从句 which is especially useful to a volunteer 及 it 作形式主语 it is a good opportunity to improve yourself and help display a good image of your country 等，使句式更加灵活多变，不落俗套。
