1、Section Writing建议信 技法指导 建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。 有 可能是写给个人， 就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建 议忠告。 提出建议时，多用祈使句，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多 用第二人称。 谋篇布局 建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信 头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。因为本写作任务开头和结尾已 给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。 建议信的正文部分分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题； 第二部分：提出建议； 第三部分：表达祝愿。 增分佳句 1建议信开头常用句式： I kn
2、ow you are now having trouble communicating wi th others, and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦， 你也可能经常感到 孤独。 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。 Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有一些建议可以帮到你。 I think you can make it if you follow the a
3、dvice belo w. 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。 2表达建议常用句式： First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会 交到朋友。 Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. The n/That way，you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 Third(ly), it would be a good idea if
4、you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself dow n. 第三，看书或听音乐是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使 自己平静下来。 Last but not least, you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。 As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。 3建议信结尾常用句式： I hope you
5、will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above. 如果你听从以上建议， 随着时间的推移， 人们会更加理解你， 会愿意和你交朋友的。 I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同
6、学们相处好的。 I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overco me these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你会克服这些困难的。 建议信模板 (一) Dear _， Im glad/sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出主题). Here are a few suggesti ons. First, it is important to _. Then, it also h elps to _. Besides, it sho
7、uld be a good idea t o _. You can also _.(此三句 不同的句式提出建议) As to _， I suggest _ _ (有时根据需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _ (其他建议). Im sure _ (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心) Im looking forward to _ (表达愿望) Sincerely yours， Miss Wang (二) Dear _，(问候语) You wrote that _.(你知晓对方面临的问题) I understand that _. (你理解对方的处境或想法)I think
8、_， be cause _.(告知对方如何去做并如此做的理由) I am sure that _.(表达自己的期望) Best wishes， _ 精品展示 假设你是你校英语报社的编辑 Miss Wang， 现在小冬因不善 于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难， 请你用英语给他写一封 100 词 左右的回信，给他提出一些建议或意见。 审题谋篇 第一步：明确要求 该写作属于应用文类的书信，故要用第一人称来写；信的主 要内容是写建议，根据题意，首先明确书信双方的身份，自己为 报社编辑，对方是寻求建议的小冬，主题是关于交友中遇到的困 难。需要给对方提出下一步的意见和建议，故用一般将来时，同 时兼顾书信的特点
9、，会用到表达愿望的情态动词。 第二步：确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para. 1首先要陈述自己的关心 Para. 2指出问题产生的原因，并提出建议 Para. 3表达自己的希望与祝福 第三步：提炼要点 1have_trouble_in_making_friends交友有困难 2likes_and_dislikes好恶 3get_along_well_with与相处得好 4in_trouble处于困境中 5take_an_active_part_in积极参加 第四步：句式升级 1听说你交友困难，我很难过。 (一般表达)Im sorry to hear that you cant
10、make friends. (高级表达)Im sorry you are having trouble in making frie nds. 2首先，了解你同学的喜好。 (一般表达)First, get to know what your classmates like an d what they dont like. (高级表达)First,_why_not_learn_about_your_classmates_likes _and_dislikes? 3第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示你的友好。 (一般表达)Second, taking an active part in the d
11、iscussions in your class helps to show you are friendly. (高级表达)Second,_it_will_help_you_to_show_you_are_frien dly_if_you_take_an_active_part_in_the_discussions_in_your_class. 连句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文： Dear Xiao Dong， Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. Howe ver, the situation is
12、easy to change if you take my advice. Her e are some tips to help you. First, why not learn about your classmates likes and dislik es? Then you can have much in common with them, which he lps you get along well with them. Second, it will help you to show you are friendly if you take an active part in the discuss ions in your class. Third, it would be a good idea to help oth ers when they are in trouble. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you follow the tips above. Yours， Miss Wang
