1、写作园地写作园地 概要写作概要写作剧本片段类的概要剧本片段类的概要 本单元的写作项目是概要写作，写作主题为剧本片段类的概要。对于此类型 的概要写作，我们在写作时除了要秉承概要写作一以贯之的凝练和不丢失要点之 外，还要注意原文中的同义词和句式的转换，因为剧本片段不同于实际生活，会 出现一些不常用的英语词汇，在进行写作时要格外注意。 写作时要注意以下几点： 1在进行剧本片段概括时，要注意的是，不必对剧本的大段台词一一对应概 括，要精简人物表述。 2对于剧本片段中的某些专有名词，不必执着一定要转换为同义词，直接使 用即可。 3写完文章后，要重新捋顺线索，做到没有重复也没有遗漏。 1开头常用句式 Je
2、nnys writing a film script. 珍妮在写一个电影脚本。 That line isnt in the original script. 原剧本中没有那句台词。 He had always wanted to play Othello. 他一直想扮演奥赛罗。 2主体段落常用句式 Her work is a masterpiece of simplicity. 她的作品是朴实的典范。 I have been reading Shakespeares works lately; I have read all the comedies and some of the histo
3、ries. 我最近一直在读莎士比亚的作品， 已经读完了他所有的喜剧和一部分历史剧。 There is a wealth of young talent in British theatre. 英国戏剧界年轻一代人才辈出。 Many lines from Shakespeares play are misquoted and misapplied. 莎士比亚戏剧中的许多诗句被误引误用了。 All my suggestions about the script were adopted. 我有关该剧本的所有建议都被采纳了。 He is a professional scriptwriter and
4、 is deeply interested in modern China and its youth culture. 他是一名专业的编剧，对当代中国和其青年文化有着浓厚的兴趣。 3结尾常用句式 The result of the script is miserable. 这个剧本的结局是悲惨的。 The critics compared his work to that of Martin Amis. 评论家把他的作品和马丁艾米斯的相提并论。 Shakespeares work was popular among the common people in his day. 莎士比亚的作品在
5、那个年代很受平民百姓的欢迎。 阅读下面剧本片段，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Narrator： Tomorrow will be Christmas. But Della feels very sad, because she has no money to buy a present for her husband Jim. She has only one dollar and eighty seven cents. They have only 20 dollars a weekit doesnt leave much for saving. In fact, Della
6、 and Jim have two possessions in which they both take very great pride. One is Jims gold watch, which has been his fathers and his grandfathers. The other is Dellas long beautiful hair. Della：Life is so hard for me. Though I saved the money for many months, I still have only one dollar and eightysev
7、en cents. III have to have my hair cut and sold it. In that way I can get some money and I can buy a beautiful present for Jim. (At the shop“Madame Sofronie. We Buy Hair Goods of All Kinds”) Della：Will you buy my hair? Madame：Yes, I buy all kinds of hair. Sit down, please. Take your hat off and let
8、me have a look. Oh, very beautiful. Very good! Twenty dollars, OK? Della：All right. But please give it to me quickly. Madame：Here you are. Twenty dollars. Della：Thank you. Bye. Madame：Bye. Narrator：Della spent two hours in the streets. Then she stopped at a gold shop and bought a gold watch chain. N
9、ow, Della is at home. Della：Oh, what a beautiful gold watch chain. I think it must match Jims watch. When he sees it he must be very happy. (Suddenly the door opened and in came Jim.) Jim：You？ Della：Jim. Dont look at me in this way. I had my hair cut off and sold it because I couldnt have lived thro
10、ugh Christmas without giving you a present. Jim, it will grow quickly. You dont mind, do you? I just had to do it. My hair grows very fast, you know. Say “Merry Christmas！” Jim, and lets be happy. Jim：Youve cut off your hair? Della：Ive cut it off and sold it. Its sold. I tell you sold and gone, too.
11、 Its Christmas Eve, Jim. Be good to me, for it went for you. Jim：Well, Della. Dont make any mistake about me. I dont think theres anything about a hair cut that could make me love you any less. I know. It went for me. Look at this package. Della：What? Jim：Look at it yourself. Youll see. Della：Ah! Th
12、e combs. They were in the shop windows for many months! Jim：Yes, the beautiful combspure tortoiseshell, with jewelry rims, just the color to wear in your beautiful hair. Della：Jim. They are expensive combs. I know, my heart had longed for them without the least hope of possession. Now they are mine.
13、 Thank you, Jim. Jim：Now, you will see why I was upset at first. Della： Jim, you dont know what a nice, what a beautiful, nice gift Ive got for you. Can you guess? Jim：Im sorry. I wont guess. Della：Look.Agold watch chain. Isnt it lovely, Jim? I hunted all over the town to find it. Youll have to look
14、 at the time a hundred times a day now. Give me your watch. I want to see how it looks on it. Jim： Della, Lets put our Christmas gifts away and keep them a while. Theyre too nice to use just at present. I sold the watch to get the money. And I bought the combs. Now, lets have our supper. _ _ _ _ 精彩范
15、文 Christmas would come. Due to poor money, Della had to sell her long beautiful hair. (要点 1) She used money to buy a gold watch chain that matches Jims watch. (要 点 2) However, to her surprise, Jim sold his precious watch to buy the combs for her. (要点 3) They did it to prepare Christmas presents for
16、each other. Both are the best gifts for them. (要点 4) 总评本篇范文将原文概括为四个要点，将麦琪的礼物高度概括，作者 并没有大量照搬台词，总结到位。 亮点呈现 (1) . a gold watch chain that matches Jims watch 使用定语从句，that 作为连接 词，从句修饰 a gold watch chain，呈现不同的句式。 (2)运用 due to, use . to do, to ones surprise, prepare for 等短语增加文章表达， 灵活多变。 阅读下面剧本片段，根据其内容写一篇 60
17、 词左右的内容概要。 (In Beasts lair (兽穴). He is in the tub getting washed up for the big night with Belle. Lumiere is there with him.) Lumiere：Tonight is the night! Beast：(Hesitantly) Im not sure I can do this. Lumiere：You dont have time to be timid. You must be bold, daring. Beast：Bold. Daring. (Beast has e
18、merged from the tub and shakes himself dry.) Lumiere：There will be music. Romantic candlelight, provided myself, and when the time is right, you confess your love. Beast：(Inspired) Yes, II canNo, I cant. Lumiere：You care for the girl, dont you? Beast：More than anything. Lumiere：Well, then you must t
19、ell her. (Coatrack has been cutting Beasts hair. It finishes and steps back.) Voila. You look so . so . Beast：Stupid. Lumiere：Not quite the word I was looking for. Perhaps a little more off the top. (Coatrack begins to cut and chop again. Cogsworth enters.) Cogsworth：Ahem ahem ahem. Your lady awaits
20、. . (Belle and Beast have adjourned (休会) to the balcony under a starry night.) Beast：Belle?Are you happy here with me? Belle：(Hesitantly) Yes. (She looks off into the distance.) Beast：What is it? Belle：(Looks at him desperately.) If only I could see my father again, just for a moment. I miss him so
21、much. Beast：(Looks disappointed for a moment, then excited.) There is a way. (The pair adjourn to Beasts lair, where Beast hands Belle the magic mirror.) Beast：This mirror will show you anything, anything you wish to see. Belle：(Hesitantly) Id like to see my father, please. (The magic mirror shines
22、into life, and Belle turns her head away as it flashes. Then it reveals Maurice fallen in the woods, coughing and lost. Belle is shocked. Beast looks at her with concern.) Belle：Papa. Oh, no. Hes sick, he may be dying. And hes all alone. (Beast turns, then looks at the rose, deep in thought.) Beast：
23、Then . then you must go to him. Belle：What did you say? Beast：I release you. You are no longer my prisoner. Belle：(In amazement) You mean . Im free? Beast：Yes. Belle：Oh, thank you. (To magic mirror)Hold on, Papa. Im on my way. (Belle turns to leave, then turns back and pushes the magic mirror back t
24、o Beast.) Beast：Take it with you, so youll always have a way to look back, and remember me. Belle：Thank you for understanding how much he needs me. (Belle turns to leave and Beast looks down in depression. She touches her hand to his cheek and rushes out. We see Belles skirt fly past Cogsworth, who
25、has entered the room.) Cogsworth：Well, your highness. I must say everything is going just peachy (很 好的). I knew you had it in you. Beast：(Very sad) I let her go. Cogsworth ： Ha ha ha, yes. Splend(Cogsworth stops in the middle of his sentence.) You what? How could you do that? Beast：I had to. Cogsworth：(Still amazed) Yes, but why? Beast：Because, I love her. _ _ _ _ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章摘自美女与野兽 ，描述的是野兽对贝 儿的爱使得野兽决定放她自由去寻找患病的父亲。 精彩范文
