1、1 教学目标 1.语言知识目标： (1)让学生学会描写过去的回忆和经历。学会运用句型: I remember doing sth.I used to do sth.I have done sth. (2)引导学生修改句子，学会正确运用词汇和语法结构，适当使用连接词和主从复合句。 (3)综合运用多种时态，如一般过去时，一般现在时和现在完成时。 2.语言能力目标： 通过情景提示让学生回忆学校生活，学会借助思维导图列举作文要点，用英文描写自己对 学校生活的回忆，并谈论对未来生活的展望。 3.情感态度目标： (1)通过小组活动培养合作精神，共同完成学习任务。 (2)和大家分享初中生活的记忆和经历，懂得
2、珍惜友情，学会感恩，并展望美好未来。 教学重难点 重点：综合运用多种时态,如一般过去时，一般现在时和现在完成时。 在书面表达中正确运用连接词和主从复合句。 难点：在书面表达中正确运用连接词和主从复合句以及书面表达的布局合理，逻辑结构紧凑。 教学对象分析 对于九年级的学生来说，大部分学生已经具备了一定的英语语言基础。本节课是一堂写作练 习课，学生在写作的实际运用中错误较多，主要体现在不能在书面表达中准确熟练地运用连 接词和主从复合句，以及对篇章的逻辑结构把握不准。本节课主要是引导学生综合运用所学 的多种时态和语法结构分享初中生活，懂得珍惜友情，学会感恩，并展望美好未来。学校生 活的回忆是学生熟悉
3、的话题，学生可以结合自身的经历展开话题讨论。 教学策略小组合作探究，思维导图，归纳总结。 教学步骤设计说明和设计意图 Step 1 Greetings S: Good morning, Miss Liang. T: Good morning, boys and girls. Nice to meet you! S: Nice to meet you, too! 【设计说明】在欢快的背景音 乐声中师生互相问候。 【设计意图】师生轻松愉快地 进入本节课的学习。 Step 2 Leading in T: Boys and girls, our school life will be over. Do
4、 you have any special memories? S: Yes. T: Can you share them with us? S: Yes. T: OK, today well talk about your memories of school life. T: Have you finish your homework on the paper? S: Yes. T: Now check your answer. Task1:Examine the topic. T: Now lets examine the topic. Whats the style and whats
5、 the topic? S. T: Whats the person? S. T: How about the points? S. T: How many words? S. 【设计说明】教师提出两个简 单的问题，以开门见山的方式 导入本节课的主题谈论对 学校生活的记忆。课前已经让 学生们根据写作任务完成审题 和列提纲。询问学生课前导学 案完成情况， 并检查完成情况， 同时板书相关内容。由此引入 本节课的写作任务。 【设计意图】让学生明确本节 课的学习任务，调动学生学习 积极性。 2 Task2:Write an outline. T: How to write your outline?
6、S. Step3 Presentation Task1 Watch the video. T: We have many memories about our school life. Do you want to know Miss Liangs memories about your school life? S. Yes. T: Now Ill share with you. Lets watch the video. 视频中的文本： My boys and girls, How time flies! I cant believe its been three years since
7、you came to our school. There are many sweet memories of ours. I remember walking into your classroom for the first time in Grade 7. I remember cheering for your basketball game. I remember the excitement of the school sports day each year. I remember your lovely smiles, your wonderful performance,
8、your good handwriting We used to sing English songs together before class. We used to discuss the questions together. You have improved your English level by working hard since you came here. You have grown up and can be responsible for yourselves. Im proud of you. All good things come to an end. Yo
9、u will set out on your new journey. I hope you remember where you came from. The future is yours. Best wishes to you! Task2 Complete the mind map according to the passage. T: Complete the mind map according to the passage. Write on the paper. You can use the key words or key sentence patterns. Task3
10、 Pair Work T: Whats the structure in the sentence? Write on the paper. Read and think. 1.I remember cheering for your basketball game. 2.I remember the excitement of the school sports day. 【设计说明】任务一，课前收 集学生们的学校生活照片，制 作成一个短视频，配上时间 都去哪儿了的音乐伴奏，以 教 师 自 身 的 视 角 展 现 memories, 并配上文字说明。 文字说明中就有写作任务中会 用到的句型，
11、让学生们在观看 视频的同时直观地感受一定的 文本输入，为后面的写作环节 做好铺垫。 【设计意图】这个视频就是学 生们学校生活的真实场景的 再现， 通过观看视频引起学生 们的情感共鸣， 调动学生们学 习积极性。 【设计说明】任务二，学生们 在观看视频后，获得了一定的 文本输入，让学生根据视频完 成思维导图，可以填关键词， 关键句型。 【设计意图】任务二为后面的 写作做好词汇准备。 【设计说明】任务三，给学生 提供视频文本中的句子，让学 生两人一组合作找出句子中的 句型结构。提醒学生注意现在 完成时的时间状语。 memories 3 3.We used to discuss the questio
12、ns together. 4.You have improved your English level since you came here. 【设计意图】任务三为后面的 写作做好句型准备。 Step4 Group Work Task1: Describe the picture in a group. (One picture, one sentence.) T: Describe the picture in a group. Write the sentence on the paper. And put your picture on the blackboard if you fi
13、nish. Task2: Show and Share 1. Show the sentence. 2. Evaluate the sentence and give the star. 3. Correct the mistakes in the sentence. T: Now show your sentence and make it correct. How many stars can be given for each sentence? Is it right? Whats the mistake? Task3: Put the sentences in the correct
14、 order. T: We make the sentences correct. Can we put them in such an order one by one? S: No. T: Why? S: T: Yes, we should make the sentences logical. Now Put the sentences in the correct order. Write on your paper.You can find the key word in the sentence. T: Now check the answer. S: T: We put the
15、sentences in the correct order and make the sentences logical. We put the sentences into a paragraph. Is it good? S: Yes./No. T: Why? S: T: How to make the sentence better? S: 句子排序。 ()1. Since I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab. ()2. I remember tr
16、ying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago. ()3. I remember performing well in the new year performance in Grade 7. ()4. In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. ()5. I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth birt
17、hday last term. Task4: Beautify the sentences. 1. Use the proper conjunctions. 【设计说明】任务一，把学生 的学校生活照片打印下来，让 学生们小组合作，用一句话描 写这张照片。 【多媒体技术的运用】在任务 一这一环节，借助希沃授课助 手把学生们小组讨论的现场画 面实时拍照上传，在学生完成 句子后，把学生写的句子用手 机拍照上传， 同屏到大屏幕上， 向全体同学展示。 【设计意图】任务一用学生自 己的照片， 学生有真实的体验， 有话可写。 【设计说明】任务二，学生展 示句子，其他组的同学根据评 价小贴士判断句子正误，并纠
18、 错。 同时评价可以得到几颗星。 【多媒体技术的运用】在任务 二这一环节，借助希沃授课助 手的画笔功能，学生现场判断 句子正误，找出错误之处，用 红色画笔改正。 【设计意图】任务二通过小组 展示，其他同学评价，纠错， 及时反馈句子信息。提醒学生 们在写句子时要注意时态，语 法的正确， 避免出现固定结构， 拼写错误，并注意英文书写的 工整和卷面的整洁。课堂评价 可以激励学生思考并积极参与 课堂活动，积极展示自我。 【设计说明】任务三，让学生 给句子排序，注意时间状语， 按照一定的逻辑顺序排列句 子。 【设计意图】任务三是让学生 明白在写作时要注意句子的逻 辑顺序，使句子连贯通顺。 4 Since
19、 I was in Grade 9, I have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab. I havelearned a lot from them. Since I was in Grade 9, I _ have made some successful experiments with my classmates in the lab, _ have learned a lot from them. 2. Use the proper complex sentences. (1) I remembe
20、r trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago. I was tired. (改为让步状语从句) I remember trying to run for the honor of our class in the school sports meeting two years ago _ I was tired. (2) I remember performing well in the new year performance in Grade 7. We won t
21、he first prize. (改为结果状语从句) I remember performing _ well in the new year performance in Grade 7 _ we won the first prize. (3) In Grade 8, I used to practice playing basketball with my friends after school. Its a good way to develop our team spirit . (改为宾语从句) In Grade 8, I used to practice playing bas
22、ketball with my friends after school. _ its a good way to develop our team spirit . (4) I still remember the birthday cake on my fifteenth birthday. The birthday cake was delicious. (改为定语从句) I still remember the birthday cake _ was delicious on my fifteenth birthday last term. T: Finish the sentence
23、s in a group. T: Check the answer. S: T: Now lets compare the two parts, which is better? S: T: Why? S: Task5:Free Talk T: Part1 is given. We have finished Part2 together. What will you write in Part 3? T: Boys and girls, we have spent much time together and had a great time. Thank you, boys and gir
24、ls. S: T: Different people have different ideas. Lets have a free talk. What do you want to write in Part 3? S: T: If you have new ideas, you can write it. Task6: Use a proper proverb T: We can choose a proper proverb to write in our composition. It can make our writing colorful. 【设计说明】任务四，采取任 务型教学和
25、小组合作学习相结 合共同对句子进行优化。让学 生在合作探究中解决问题。 【设计意图】任务四通过小组 讨论学习，让学生理解并学会 添加连接词使句子结构紧凑。 学会适当运用复合句等高级句 型。 【设计说明】任务五，在写作 的结尾部分，教师首先发表感 言，感谢同学们三年的陪伴， 抛砖引玉设计了一个 Free Talk 的环节，这是一个开放性的话 题，让学生自由谈论他们的想 法。 【设计意图】任务五教师用开 放性的话题引导学生学会思 考，自由谈论，拓展学生的思 维广度，培养学生的创造性思 维。 【设计说明】任务六，展示几 句与本次写作相关的谚语，在 写作中选用适当的句子。 【设计意图】任务六建议学生
26、在写作中选用恰当的谚语，为 写作添彩。鼓励学生在平时注 意谚语的积累。 Step5 Summary T: What have we learned today? 【设计说明】让学生自己回顾 并归纳本节课所学内容，老师 5 板书设计板书设计 Writing 1.Person- the First Person 2.Tense- Simple Past Tense Simple Present Tense Present Perfect Tense S: T: Yes. When we practice writing, we should follow the writing steps one
27、 by one. And we should pay more attention to the sentences. How to make the sentences better? S: T:And we can follow the writing tips. 帮助理清写作思路，提出写作 建议，在 PPT 上展示。 【设计意图】培养学生归纳总 结的学习习惯， 巩固所学知识， 帮助学生构建书面表达的写作 支架，并在写作中重点关注句 子的优化。 Step6 Homework T: Practice makes perfect. Write your own composition after class. Finish it on the correcting net and try to make your article perfect. 【设计说明】学生课后用手机 在句酷批改网上完成写作。 【设计意图】教师已经在句酷 批改网上布置作文，并已经设 定了作文要求，学生在句酷批 改网上写作，可以采用朗读输 入或者文字输入的方式。学生 提交作文后，批改网可以马上 显示作文分数并对学生在作文 中的错误和不足作出提示，学 生可根据提示多次修改，使文 章更完美。
