1、1 记叙记叙文概要写作文概要写作 I.真题再现 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 1 That cold January night, I was growing sick of my life in San Francisco. There I was, walking home at one in the morning after a tiring practice at the theatre. With opening night only a week away, I was still learning my lines. I was having tro
2、uble dealing with my part-time job at the bank and my acting at night at the same time. As I walked, I thought seriously about giving up both acting and San Francisco. City life had become too much for me. 2 As I walked down empty streets under tall buildings, I felt very small and cold. I began run
3、ning, both to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. Very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets. 3 About a block from my apartment, I heard a sound behind me. I turned quickly, half expecting to see someone with a knife or a gun. The street
4、was empty. All I saw was a shining streetlight. Still, the noise had made me nervous, so I started to run faster. Not until I reached my apartment building and unlocked the door did I realize what the noise had been. It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk(人行道). 4 Suddenly I wasnt cold or tire
5、d anymore. I ran out of the door and back to where Id heard the noise. Although I searched the sidewalk anxiously for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found. 5 Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck pull up to the sidewalk next to me. When a voice called fro
6、m the inside, “Alisa Camacho?” I thought I was dreaming. How could this man know my name? The door opened, and out jumped a small red-haired man with an amused look in his eye. “Is this what youre looking for?” he asked, holding up a small square shape. 6 It was nearly 3 A.M. by the time I got into
7、bed. I wouldnt get much sleep that night, but I had gotten my wallet back. I also had gotten back some enjoyment of city life. I realized that the city couldnt be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other. Step 1: Read for text type and structure 1)The text is a(n) _. 2)Structure
8、: 六要素: _ +主题(theme) Step 2: Find out the elements of the narration 2 time place character causepara. 1 processpara. 2 para. 3 para. 4 outcomepara. 5 themepara. 6 Step 4: Link the sentences by conjunctions(连词)(连词)if necessary: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Step 3: Restate/ rewrite to make it shorter _ _ _ _ _ _ _ St
9、ep 5: Check and revise 3 Step 6: Copy your draft II.实战演练 I received a call today asking if I would be ready to bring food to a family in need. The mother was having a major operation and would be lying down for several weeks. Of course, I responded with an immediate “Yes!”. As I planned the meal in
10、my head, I reflected on how many times over the years I had been asked to prepare food. I have done so countless times with a very open heart. But the truly amazing thing is that I have received double over the course of my life. When my mother passed away, our house was filled with fresh dinners fo
11、r weeks. A woman from the church of our community stopped by each evening with some food. The gift of food was her small way of trying to relieve our pain. Later in my life, when I was on bed rest during my pregnancy with twins, men of the church again stepped in to help. They arranged babysitting f
12、or my two-year-old daughter, and brought lovely dinners to our house. Even when I was put in the hospital, my husband would bring cooked meals to my hospital room. How we relied on these dinners to feed my tired husband and young daughter. Food is all about comfort. It feeds our bodies, but it can a
13、lso feed our souls. When you hear people talking about their favorite holidays, it usually includes their feelings connected with sharing food. I know that I will have many more opportunities in my lifetime to prepare food for others. It is truly a gift I want to prepare and deliver to someone in need. time place character cause process outcome theme 4 Final draft: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _