1、1 1 / 1313 同步单元话题书面表达归纳同步单元话题书面表达归纳 Unit 1 People of Achievement 请你根据提示，用英语写一篇关于著名科学家钱学森的简介。 钱学森，1911 年生于上海，1935 年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉；1938 年在美国获航空、数学博士学位；1950 年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国 政府的百般阻挠，于 1955 年回到祖国；从 1958 年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事 业做出了巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”；2009 年于北京去世。 参考词汇：航空航天科学技术 ae
2、rospace science and technology _ _ _ _ _ _ 题目分析题目分析 一、构思谋篇 时态:过去时为主； 人称:第三人称。 结构:首先介绍其基本信息,其次介绍其主要事迹,最后作出评价。 二、关键词语 be regarded as 被认为是be born in 生于 go toAmerica for further study 赴美留学be highly thought of 受到赞誉 be devoted to 全身心地投入到contribute a lot to 做出巨大贡献 because of/as a result of 由于receive the re
3、spect and admiration from 受到热爱和尊敬 三、连词成句 1.钱学森被认为是中国航天之父。 Qian Xusen is regarded as the father of Chinas space program. 2.钱学森于 1911 年出生于上海。 Qian Xusen was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 3.1935 年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯卡门(Von Karman)的赞誉。 In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought
4、of by Von Karman because of his 2 2 / 1313 great achievements. 4.1950 年获悉新中国成立的消息，并于 1955 年成功回到祖国。 In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in returning to his homeland in 1955. 5.由于他对祖国的热爱以及所做出的巨大贡献，钱学森受到了人们的热爱和尊敬。 Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he
5、 has received the respect and admiration from people. 6.用过去分词作状语合并句 1 和句 2。 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of Chinas space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. 佳文欣赏佳文欣赏 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of Chinas space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. In 1935, Qian went to America for
6、 further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. In 1938, he obtained his doctors degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in returning to our homeland in 1955 though the American govern
7、ment tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to the research into aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of Chinas aerospace. In 2009, he passed away in Beijing. Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and adm
8、iration from people. 写作分析写作分析 人物写作侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称。时态常常用一般现 在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的 问题： 1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性 格等多个方面，但英语写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，要包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也 不能随意添加。 2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的 目的所在，比如求职信要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍
9、自己的老师、朋友要 突出他们的特点等。 3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 4.注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、 教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。 3 3 / 1313 Unit2 Looking into the future 互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通信工具，在人们的生活中起着重要的作用，但也 有一些负面影响。请就互联网的利与弊发表你的见解，并阐述你的理由。内容包括： 好处 提供大量的信息，促进人际交流； 网上购物便捷。 弊端 损害视力； 长时间上网影响工作和休息； 网瘾影响学生的学习。 你的观点 词数： 80 左右
10、。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 题目解析题目解析 一、构思谋篇 体裁议论文时态一般现在时 主题互联网的利弊人称第三人称 结构 第一段：引出话题； 第二段：互联网的好处和弊端； 第三段：自己的观点。 二、关键词语 1play an important part in 起重要作用2advantage 优点 3disadvantage 弊端4contribute to 有助于,促成 5do harm to 对有害6be addicted to对上瘾 7make full use of充分利用 4 4 / 1313 三、连词成句 1.如今互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通讯工具。 Nowaday
11、s，the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people. 2.互联网在人们的生活中起着重要的作用并给我们带来很多益处，但也有一些负面影响不容忽略。 The Internet plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits，but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. 3.互联网给我们提供大量的最新信息。 The Internet can provid
12、e a great deal of the latest information for us. 4.我们可以给朋友发送电子邮件从而促进人际交流。 We can send emails to our friends，contributing to promoting social communication. 5.互联网很容易让身体出问题，损害视力。 The Internet can easily lead to physical problems and do harm to our eyesight. 6.用非限制性定语从句合并句 1 和 2。 Nowadays， the Internet
13、 has become an essential means of communication to modern people， which plays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits， but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. 7.用 not only.but also.合并句 3 和 4。 Not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information f
14、or us but also we can send emails to our friends，contributing to promoting social communication. 8.用现在分词短语作结果状语升级句 5。 The Internet can easily lead to physical problems，doing harm to our eyesight. 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Nowadays， the Internet has become an essential means of communication to modern people， which p
15、lays an important part in our daily life and brings us many benefits，but its disadvantages should also not be ignored. The Internet brings us many advantages. Firstly， not only can the Internet provide a great deal of the latest information for us but also we can send emails to our friends ， contrib
16、uting to promoting social communication. Secondly，the Internet makes shopping online convenient. However，the Internet has many disadvantages. It can easily lead to physical problems，doing harm to our eyesight. Surfing the Internet for a long time may affect our work and rest. 5 5 / 1313 In my view，t
17、he most important is that we should learn how to make full use of its advantages while avoiding its disadvantages. 写作分析写作分析 正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明某个观点。此类议论文应注意以下几点： 1此类文章的结构一般为：引语正方观点反方观点结论。 2文章要做到要点完整、条理清晰。各段之间层次清楚，以使文章显得有条理。从段落内部的层次 上讲，每一段一般又分为三部分：主题句、扩展句和总结句。 3常用一般现在时。 亮点句式 1开头用语 We have a discussi
18、on about.Recently，we had a heated discussion on. According to a recent survey.When it comes to. 2论证用语 Opinions are divided on the question. Others have different opinions. Some students are for the idea，while others think otherwise. On the one hand.On the other hand. First/Second/Third/Whats more/Be
19、sides/In addition. 3表达观点 But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who. However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case. However, some others argue that. At present, some people think.while others think. It has more disadvantages than advanta
20、ges. 4结束用语 To sum up/In a word/In conclusion/In short/Above all/In general/Generally speaking. I still hold the view that. Therefore，it is easy to draw the conclusion that. Unit3 Fascinating Parks 6 6 / 1313 请根据以下要点，写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文，介绍香港海洋公园。 1.香港海洋公园，位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园。 2.面积超过 87 万平方米，是世界上最大的海洋公园之一。
21、 3.有 30 多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一；是香港最受人们喜欢的公园。每年吸引了大量的 游客。 4.游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。 5.香港海洋公园还为它所提供的教育项目而自豪。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 题目分析题目分析 一、构思谋篇 二、关键词语 1.坐落在 lie in/be situated/located in2.占面积 cover 3.旅游胜地 tourist attractions4.吸引 attract 5.各种各样的 a variety of6.以为荣 take pride in/be proud of 三、连词成句 1.香港海洋公园，一个著名的主题公园，位
22、于香港的南部。 Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated/located in the southern side of Hong Kong. 2.有 30 多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一。 7 7 / 1313 With a history of over 30 years, Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions inAsia. 3.它是世界上最大的海洋公园之一。 It is one of the largest marine parks
23、in the world. 4.它占地面积 87 万多平方米。 It covers more than 870,000 square meters. 5.它是香港最受欢迎的公园。 It is Hong Kongs favorite park. 6.它吸引的游客最多。 It attracts the most visitors. 7.游客们可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。 Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows. 8.用非谓语动词合并句 3 和句 4。 It is one of the
24、 largest marine parks in the world, covering more than 870,000 square meters. 9.用非限制性定语从句合并句 5 和句 6。 It is Hong Kongs favorite park, which attracts the most visitors. 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong. It is one of the largest marine pa
25、rks in the world, covering more than 870,000 square meters. With a history of over 30 years, Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions inAsia. It is Hong Kongs favorite park, which attracts the most visitors. Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of show
26、s, such as dolphin shows. The park also takes pride in its educational programs. Hong Kong Ocean Park will fill your day with wonder, pleasure and excitement, and reward you with satisfying memories. 写作分析写作分析 描写公园等景点类作文的写作 篇章结构 (1)景点介绍属于说明文，使用生动的语言对某一地点和某一环境进行具体逼真的描绘。 (2)开头部分概述景点；主体，叙述活动项目；结尾，对景点的总结
27、。 亮点句式 (1)It has a population of about eleven million.人口大约 1 100 万。 (2)The city has a long history of 1,000 years.这个城市有着 1 000 年的历史。 8 8 / 1313 (3)Hangzhou has many places of interest, among which is the West Lake. 杭州有很多名胜，西湖是其中之一。 (4)Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake.杭州因西湖而出名。 (5)It covers an ar
28、ea of 1,000 square kilometers.它的面积是 1 000 平方千米。 Unit4 Body language 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友罗伯特(Robert)准备来中国学习，因此想了解一些中国的肢体语言。 请你用英语给他写封邮件，介绍一些日常的肢体语言。 1.词数 80 左右； 2.信的开头和落款已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 Dear Robert， _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Li Hua 题目分析题目分析 一、构思谋篇 本题考查话题类作文。首先要认真审题，其次要确定时态，表示客观事实，所以这篇文章要使 用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻
29、辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息， 不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显 得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在 80 左右。 二、关键词语 1.挥手 wave hands2.握手 shake hands 3.迎客 greet guests4.拍手 clap hands 5.鞠躬 bow to 三、连词成句 1我们通常和客人握手迎接他们。 9 9 / 1313 We usually greet our guests by shaking hands with them. 2当你被介绍给一群中国人时，他们可能会拍手欢迎你。 When yo
30、u are introduced to a Chinese group, they may greet you by clapping their hands. 3如果一个人做了很了不起的事情，人们会对他竖大拇指表扬他。 People will hold their thumbs up to praise a person if he does something great. 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Dear Robert， In China, we wave our hands to say “hello” or “goodbye”We usually greet our guests by s
31、haking hands with them. Some people may nod and smile instead of shaking hands. When you are introduced to a Chinese group, they may greet you by clapping their hands. Like in many other countries, we nod our heads to say “yes” and shake our heads to say “no”People will hold their thumbs up to prais
32、e a person if he does something great. Sometimes, we bow to show great respect and thanks to others. I hope this information will be helpful to you. Yours， Li Hua 写作分析写作分析 本单元写作属于说明文。说明文是陈述客观事实，谓语动词通常用一般现在时态。写作时首先要抓 住中心，分清主次；其次，列全要点，扩编句子；最后，布局谋篇，连段成文。写作过程中还应注意 以下几点： 1科学性：介绍事物或解说事理必须揭示其基本特征。做到概念准确，判断
33、恰当，分类清楚。 2客观性：写说明文时，要按照事物的本来面目如实地加以介绍、说明和解释，不能带有个人愿望 或主观倾向。 3知识性：说明文以说明为主要表达方式，用简洁的语言介绍事物或阐明事理，使人们获得关于某 一事物的知识和道理。 4解说性：说明文的目的就是在于把事物、现象或道理解释、介绍清楚，让读者明白。 Unit5 working the land 假设你是李华，最近你们班就“本市要不要修地铁”这一话题展开了一场激烈的讨论。请根据以下提 1010 / 1313 示，给某英文报社的编辑写一封信，客观介绍这次讨论的情况。 70%的学生赞成30%的学生反对 1.快速，安全 2.节能，无污染 3.有
34、助于缓解地面交通拥挤状况 1.花费太大 2.可能破坏某些地下历史文物 注意： 1词数 80 左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：交通拥挤 traffic jam；历史文物 historical relics Dear editor， _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Li Hua 题目分析题目分析 一、构思谋篇 二、关键词语 一场激烈的讨论 a heated discussion 多达 up to 赞成计划 agree to a plan 1111 / 1313 交通方式 means of transport 持相反的观点 hol
35、d the opposite opinion 三、连词成句 1最近，我们班就“本市要不要修地铁”展开了一场激烈的讨论。 Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city. 2多达 70%的学生赞成这一计划。 Up to 70 percent of the students agree to this plan. 3他们认为，在城市里地铁要比其他交通方式更快捷、更安全。 They think that a subway train is faster and
36、safer than other means of transport in a city. 4其他学生持相反的观点。 The rest of the students hold the opposite opinion. 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Dear editor， Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city. Now I am writing to tell you the result. Up to 70 percent of the studen
37、ts agree to this plan. They think that a subway train is faster and safer than other means of transport in a city. Besides, it is energy saving and doesnt cause pollution. Whats more, it can help reduce the traffic jams above ground. The rest of the students hold the opposite opinion. They think tha
38、t it costs too much money to build a subway and our city cant afford it. Whats worse, it may destroy some underground historical relics when a subway is being built. Yours， Li Hua 写作分析写作分析 本单元的写作任务是写辩论报告， 这类文章要求用一定的理由说明自己对事物或问题的见解、 看法， 属于议论文的范畴。 1篇章特点 议论文是一种以议论为主要表达方式的文体，就是摆事实、讲道理，并要求通过多方面的分析，把 道理说通
39、，说透。议论文有三要素，即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是观点正确，认真概括， 有实际意义，恰当地综合运用各种表达方式；论据的基本要求是真实可靠，充分典型；论证的基本要 求是推理必须符合逻辑。 1212 / 1313 2注意事项 写作时应注意： 第一，要提出正确鲜明的论点。一般来说，要把论点写在篇首或段首，这样能起到纲举目张的效果， 让读者读起来更容易把握文章思路。 第二，要重视论据这一关的阐述。论据就是用来证明论点的事实和道理。要有足够的论据，可以列举 生活的实例来证明论点。 第三，论证是议论文中必不可少的部分。一段完整的议论，只有通过论证证明论据和论点之间的内在 逻辑关系，才能将论据和论点融为一体，也才能构成一篇完整的、有说服力的文章。 3写作形式 此类作文一般有两种写法。 (1)文章分三部分进行论述： 第一部分：提出论点 第二部分：给出论据 第三部分：得出结论 (2)文章分四部分进行论述： 第一部分：说明辩论的主题、参与者等 第二部分：列举正方的观点及其理由 第三部分：列举反方的观点及其理由 第四部分：阐明自己的观点 1313 / 1313
