1、_A writing class1 Hangzhou Zoo地址地址:杭州虎跑路杭州虎跑路,西湖西湖之南之南(to the south of) 建园时间建园时间:1958年年1.有种类有种类170多种多种,如老虎如老虎,狮子狮子,熊猫等熊猫等2. 有很多花草树木有很多花草树木,因此非常漂亮因此非常漂亮.3.附近有许多宾馆附近有许多宾馆,可以住宿可以住宿,离西湖很近离西湖很近4. 有许多公交车直达有许多公交车直达,交通便利交通便利.Its on Hupao Road.It is to the south of the West Lake.It was built in 1958.There ar
2、e more than 170 kinds of animals,such as tigers,lions,pandas and so on.There are many flowers and trees. It is very beautiful.There are many hotels nearby to live in. They are near the West Lake.It is very convenient to get there. A lot of buses go there.21.覆盖了所有信息点覆盖了所有信息点.2.注重文章的开头与结尾，做到开头注重文章的开头与
3、结尾，做到开头“开门见山开门见山”,收尾收尾 “干净利落干净利落”。3.注意文章信息的自然过渡注意文章信息的自然过渡,以提升文章的文采，增强以提升文章的文采，增强 文章的可读性。可适当使用一些连词或过渡词。文章的可读性。可适当使用一些连词或过渡词。 如：如： and, so, then, but, whats more, of course, by the way, on the other hand, as you know , in addition, as for.等。等。4.避免同种句型连续多次使用，可采用变通的方法，避免同种句型连续多次使用，可采用变通的方法， 用不同的句式表达同一用
4、不同的句式表达同一 种意思。种意思。 如何算是一篇好文章如何算是一篇好文章3It is on Hupao Road. It is to the north of the West Lake. It was built in 1958. There are 170 kinds of animals,such as tigers,lions,pandas and so on. There are many flowes and trees.It is very beautiful.There are many hotels nearby to live in. They are near the
5、West Lake. It is very convenient to get there.A lot of buses go there. Id like to tell you something about Hangzhou Zoo. It lies on Hupao Road, and is to the south of the West Lake. As a modern zoo, it was built in 1958. Now there are more than 170 kinds of animals,such as tigers,lions,pandas and so
6、 on. Trees and flowers are all around there, so it is very beautiful. If you want to stay in hangzhou for some days,the hotels nearby are your best choice, which are not far from the West Lake. Whats more, a lot of buses go there,you can take any of them. It is very convenient .Anyone who comes here
7、 will have a good time!4 _Hangzhou. It _ on Hupao Road,_ is to the south of the West Lake. As_, it was built in 1958._ there are more than 170 kinds of animals, such as tigers,lions,pandas and so on. Trees and flowers are_ . _it is very beautiful .If you want to stay in Hangzhou for some days, the h
8、otels nearby on Nanshan Road are _,_ are not far from the West Lake._ ,a lot of buses go there,you can take any of them .It is very convenient._.Id like to tell you something aboutliesanda modern zooNowall around thereSoyour best choicewhichWhats moreAnyone who comes here will have a good time51.禁止投
9、食2.不要离凶猛动物太近3.禁止恐吓动物 (frighten)4.保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾(v.)A Rule6 假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一假如你是杭州动物园维护队的一名志愿者，请你为动物园用英语写一名志愿者，请你为动物园用英语写一个维护规则个维护规则71.禁止投食2.不要离凶猛动物太近3.禁止恐吓动物 (frighten)4.保持环境清洁,不乱扔垃圾1.Dont feed the animals.2.Stay away from those aggressive animals3.You are not supposed to frighten the animals. 4.Dont th
10、row litter about. Keep the environment clean.(v.)A Rule8今天，你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州今天，你陪一位来自美国的笔友汤姆参观杭州动物园，请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容，动物园，请你用英语向他解释这个木牌上的内容， 开头已给出开头已给出并适当增加解释并适当增加解释 Tom,It is just a rule of the zoo.It says 1. Dont feed the animals. 2. Stay away from those aggressive animals. 3. You are not supposed
11、 to frighten the animals.4. Dont throw litter about.Keep the environment clean.9 Tom,It is just a rule of the zoo.It says that you shouldnt feed the animals,that is because some food might be bad for them.And keep away from those aggressive animals,for they may attack you.It is too dangerous.Also yo
12、u are not supposed to frighten them,even if they sometimes are not friendly to you.Whats more, dont throw the litter about.It is our duty to keep the environment clean.10审题要“三审” 1.审话题信息,切忌粗枝大叶,东遗西漏. 2.审话题范围,准确把握出题者用意,搞清写作重点. 3.审文体形式.11Lets watch a short video.12Becoming endangeredcut downenvironment
13、 pollution (water, air)killWhy are more and more animals becoming endangered?13Writing:假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员，请你以假设你是学校动物保护协会的成员，请你以What should we do to protect the wild animals?为话题，根为话题，根据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施，据中文提示叙述动物濒临灭绝的原因并阐述保护措施，用英语写一份发言稿：用英语写一份发言稿：原因原因 your steps（措施）（措施）滥砍树木滥砍树木 1.-猎杀，贩卖毛皮赚钱猎杀，贩卖毛皮
14、赚钱 2.-污染问题 3.-注意：开头和结尾部分已写好注意：开头和结尾部分已写好可可适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语适当增加谈论话题时常用的话语，使所写内容连贯，使所写内容连贯所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的所写内容必须包括上面表格中观点和你自己的至少三个至少三个观点观点词数：词数：个左右个左右14Hello, everyone! Animals are our best friends, but these years more and more animals become endangered.What caused this problem?In my opinion,firstl
15、y ,I think cutting down the trees by the farmers is one of the reasons.As a result,animals can no longer hide or have no place to live in. Also,many animals are killed by people who want to sell their furs for money.Besides, some pollution like water and air pollution has made the situations more se
16、rious. So we human beings should try our best to protect them. I think the best way to take good care of them is building more wildlife zoos. And the government should pass more laws to punish the people who hunt the wildlife or cut down too many trees without permission. Finally, keeping the enviro
17、nment clean is also a quite effective way to protect the wildlifeThank you for listening!Thank you for listening!15临考如何提高写作能力 适当加强阅读量适当加强阅读量读得越多，在潜移默化中，读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快 背诵经典文段背诵经典文段在平时阅读训练及范例作文在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地捷径背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道道 加强练习加强练习加强实际写作练习至关重要写加强实际写作练习至关重要写完后与范文进行对比我们练习的重点是文章是完后与范文进行对比我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等16
