1、Unit4 Guided Writing,新目标八年级下册,Lead-in,Step 1,Psychological Counseling Room心理咨询室,School Psychologist心理教师,letters from students求助信,Do you have problems in your daily life?,Questionare,2. -If you fight with your best friend, what should you do ?- I could/should,3. -If you often get poor grades, what ca
2、n you do ? -I could/should,pre-writing,Step 2,She is sending a letter to Miss Liu for help .,Dear Miss Liu, I meet some problems now. Im shy. So I dont have many friends at school. Its so lonely. Secondly, I think math is too difficult for me. I often get poor grades. Another problem is that I find
3、it difficult to talk to my parents. They dont understand me at all. What they have done is just scolding(责骂)and scolding. I always feel upset. Is that normal ? What can I do? Looking for Help,Supposing you are Miss Liu, please write a letter to help the “looking for Help” kid.,假设你是刘老师，你会怎么回信帮她？,请划出文
4、中提及的三个烦恼,写作要点：,Im shy. I dont have many friends at school. Join some clubs and make some friends there. Be more friendly to others, then everyone will like you.C. Be ready to help the people in need. D. Try to be more outgoing and take part in all kinds of activities.,针对三个问题提出建议,What can I do ?,2. I
5、 think math is too difficult for me. I often get poor grades. Ask the teacher or classmates for help.Do more exercises.Take after-school classes. Find the joy of learning math. Interest is the best teacher.,What can I do ?,3. I find it difficult to talk to my parents.Open your heart and tell them ho
6、w you feel.B. Find some proper time to talk about your problems.C. Spend more time with parents and do things together.D. Try to understand each other better.,What can I do ?,while-writing,Step 3,Writing Structure写作结构,Beginning:开头,Main Body:正文,Ending:结尾,格式？什么句型或词汇才能使文章衔接自然？,请大声朗读P27 3a 第二封信，小组讨论问题！,
7、怎样写开头？,正文用什么句型？,如何写结尾？,Dear Sad and Thirteen,Its not easy being your age, and its normal to have these feelings. Why dont you talk about these feelings with your family? If your parents are having problems, you should offer to help. Maybe you could do more jobs around the house so that they have mor
8、e time for proper communication. Secondly, why dont you sit down and communicate with your brother? You should explain that you dont mind him watching TV all the time. However, he should let you watch your favorite show. I hope things will be better for you soon.Robert Hunt,顶格写！,格式？,P27 3a,Writing S
9、tructure 仿写技巧,Its not easy being your age, and its normal to have these feelings. Why dont you Why not You should You could I hope things will be better for you soon.,Beginning:开头,Main Body:正文,Ending:结尾,Firstly, Secondly, Finally, ,You say thatYou think thatYou find that,针对三个问题提出建议,层次分明,衔接自然,_ _,Wri
10、ting,post-writing,Step 4,Evaluation 习作评价,Please evaluate your letters in groups.以小组为单位，首先自评，然后互评，纠错，并给出评语。,1. 文章是否结构有条理，层次分明？2. 是否全面呈现了写作要点？3. 在必要的地方是否使用了过渡词句？4. 句式变化是否丰富？5. 是否有出色的语句？（划波浪线）6. 书写是否清晰、工整？7. 有无语言错误（拼写，时态，人称等）？（圈出并改正）,评价标准：,七星级作文花落谁家？,每一个标准记一颗星,Share your success !,Homework,Step 5,Revise the letter.,
