1、Writing,Thank-you notes,Why do they say thanks?,Do you know whenThanksgiving Day is?,The fourth Thursdayof November,Mom and I,Thanks/Thank you for n./doing.I want to say thanks to you because .Im grateful to you for n./doing.,How to say thank you?,Lets say thank you in different ways!,Someone encour
2、aged youwhen you failed a test.,Thanks/Thank you for encouraging . when I .I want to say thanks to you because you . when .Im grateful to you for encouraging . when .,Discussion,Someone cheered you upwhen you wanted to cry.,Lets say thank you in different ways!,Thanks/Thank you for . when I .,Someon
3、e made you happywhen you felt lonely.,Lets say thank you in different ways!,I want to _ because . when ,Someone picked you upwhen you fell down.,Lets say thank you in different ways!,Im . when .,Who did all of these?,Im Jackthe winner!,I won the Olympics!Mom is proud of me!,The Story of the Olympic
4、Winners,What happened to Jenny when she was young?,She fell down again and again.,Her mother picked her up and encouraged her.,Thank-you note,P1P2P3,Thanks & Reason,A story,Thanks & Wishes,Jennys thank-you note. (Disordered with mistakes)A. I still remember at the age of six, I started to learn skii
5、ng. B. I want to say thanks again. I love you! And I wish you good health and a wonderful life.C. I am the winner of the Olympics. I will never forget how I grew up. D. Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. I want to say thanks for your love.E. I played badly. I fell down again and again. You pick me up
6、and encouraged me try harder.,Read in 1 minute,P1P2P3,D,A story,B,The beginning and the ending,Reorder the story,A E C,Correct the mistakes,You pick me up and encouraged me try harder.,picked,Usepast tense(过去时)to write the story.,to try,Dear Mom,Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. I want to say thanks
7、for your love.I still remember at the age of six, I started to learn skiing. I played badly. I fell down again and again. You picked me up and encouraged me to try harder. I am the winner of the Olympics. I will never forget how I grew up.I am really grateful to you. I love you! And I wish you good
8、health and wonderful life.Your daughter, Jenny,10,I still remember at the age of six, I started to learn skiing. I played badly. I fell down again and again. _ you picked me up and encouraged me to try harder. _ I am the winner of the Olympics. _, I will never forget how I grew up.,1,Add proper conj
9、unctions,now, however, but,But,Now,However,0,1,I played so badly that I fell down,1,2,Make your sentences beautiful,1,I played badly. I fell down again and again.,Add so adv. that,I love you.,for a lifetime.,Add for a lifetime,I still remember at the age of six, I started to learn ice hockey. I play
10、ed so badly that I fell down again and again. _. But you picked me up and encouraged me to try harder. Now I am the winner of the Olympics. However, I will never forget how I grew up. _.,1,Add details and English sayings,3,5,A. You taught me that falling only makes me stronger.B. I even hurt my righ
11、t leg on a rainy day, so I couldnt stop crying.,B,A,Score 7-9,Add a good beginning and ending.（加1-2分）,Cover all the focal points. 覆盖要点,Use proper conjunctions. 连接词(加1-2分）,Add some details and English sayings.,Score 9-11,Score 10-13,Score 13-15,有细节描写和美句(如谚语等) (加1-2分）,Writing Accessments,Make your sen
12、tences beautiful.(加1-2分）,Dear Mom,Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. I want to say thanks for your love.I still remember at the age of six, I started to learn skiing. I played so badly that I fell down again and again. I even hurt my right leg on a rainy day, so I couldnt stop crying. But you picked m
13、e up and encouraged me to try harder. Now I am the winner of the Olympics. However, I will never forget how I grew up. You taught me that falling only makes us stronger.I am really grateful to you. I love you for a lifetime! And I wish you good health and wonderful life.Your daughter,Jenny,What we thank for?,Practice,Discussion with your partner,The Best GroupToday,Rewrite Make it better and better,Learn to love.,Love is all around.,Be grateful to thosewho love you and care about you.Be grateful to everything.,
