Unit1 Writing 知识点练习-（2019）新外研版高中英语必修第一册.rar

WritingSelf IntroductionLead-in：Personal profile is a brief and concise written introduction of personal education, experience, expertise, hobbies and other relevant situations. It is a standardized and logical written expression of targeted self-introduction. Personal profile belongs to the category of practical writing, usually for the introduction of personal information, recruitment, application, etc. Write a personal profile to pay attention to the wording, wording should be direct, not beat around the bush; Be polite, but not too humble. Sentence Practice1我是李明，新华中学高三年级的一名学生。_2我是李华，18 岁，是高三一班的一位女学生。我心胸开阔，性格随和，热情好客。我认为我能够与外国人用英语交流，而且我喜欢交朋友。_3首先，我是我们学校最勤奋的学生之一。_4他/她是 20 世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 _5他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 _6他/她是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 _7他/她毕生都致力于工作。8他/她对我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 _9最后但同等重要的是，他热心肠，愿意帮助别人。_10我已经学习英语近六年了，因此我精通英语。_Practice请根据下面的提示写一篇题为“My New English Teacher”的短文。1李老师年轻，漂亮，热情，有活力；2讲课清楚，有耐心，总是鼓励我们；3她教我们刚刚两个星期，但已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文中的个人简介，人称应该用第三人称，时态为一般现在时。第二步： 确定段落首段：指明要介绍的人是谁我的新英语老师：李老师。中段：详细描述李老师的性格特征、优点。尾段：介绍李老师对我们的影响及我们对她的喜爱。第三步：词汇铺垫1_ 印象2. _ 热心的 3_ 精力充沛 4_ 对非常耐心 5_ 鼓励 6_ 避免 7_ 尴尬的 8_ 犯错误 9_ 活跃的 10_ 受欢迎的 第四步：句式升级1李老师是一位年轻漂亮的女士。她热情、精力充沛。(一般表达)Mrs. Li is a beautiful young lady. She is enthusiastic and full of energy.(高级表达)Mrs. Li is a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic_and_full_of_energy. (用形容词作状语)2她总是鼓励我们，并且在我们犯错误时避免让我们感到尴尬。在她的课上每个同学都很积极。(一般表达)She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes. Every student is very active in her class.(高级表达)She_always_encourages_us_and_avoids_making_us_feel_embarrassed_even_when_we_make_mistakes,_so_every_student_is_very_active_in_her_class. (用 so 合并升级)3到目前为止，李老师教我们仅两个星期。她已经是我们班最受学生欢迎的老师。(一般表达)So far, Mrs. Li has been teaching us for only two weeks. She has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class!(高级表达)So_far,_Mrs._Li_has_been_teaching_us_for_only_two_weeks,_but_she_has_already_become_the_most_popular_teacher_with_all_of_the_students_in_our_class！(合并升级为 but 引导的并列句)正式写作_答案1My name is Li Ming. I am a Senior 3 student of Xinhua Middle School. 我是李明，新华中学高三年级的一名学生。2Im Li Hua, an 18yearold girl student in Class One, Grade Three. Im openminded, easygoing and enthusiastic. I think my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners and I like to make friends.我是李华，18 岁，是高三一班的一位女学生。我心胸开阔，性格随和，热情好客。我认为我能够与外国人用英语交流，而且我喜欢交朋友。3First of all, I am among the most diligent students in our school.首先，我是我们学校最勤奋的学生之一。4He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century. 他/她是 20 世纪最伟大的科学家之一。 5He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University.他/她曾就读于当地一所高中，毕业于北京大学。 6He/She is such a learned/strongwilled person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人，我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。 7He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.他/她毕生都致力于工作。8He/She made great contributions to our country.他/她对我们国家作出了巨大贡献。 9Last but not least, he is warmhearted and willing to help others in need.最后但同等重要的是，他热心肠，愿意帮助别人。10I have been learning English for nearly six years, so I have a good knowledge of English.我已经学习英语近六年了，因此我精通英语。1impression 印象2. enthusiastic 热心的 3full of energy 精力充沛 4be very patient with 对非常耐心 5encourage 鼓励 6avoid 避免 7embarrassed 尴尬的 8make mistakes 犯错误 9active 活跃的 10popular 受欢迎的 参考范文：My New English Teacher Mrs. Li is my new English teacher. She has left a very deep impression on me.Mrs. Li is a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and full of energy. Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher. She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us. She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.So far, Mrs. Li has been teaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs. Li teaching us.