1、Unit 3On the movePeriod FiveWritingWriting a sports storyPART 1技法点拨PART 2写作训练Period FiveWritingWriting a sports storyPART 1技法点拨文体分析 把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是写一篇自己喜欢的运动故事，属于事物介绍类说明本单元的写作任务是写一篇自己喜欢的运动故事，属于事物介绍类说明文。该类说明文的主体时态通常采用一般现在时，但具体情况具体分析，根文。该类说明文的主体时态通常采用一般现在时，但具体情况具体分析，根据实际情况采用适当的时态。在介绍自己喜欢的运动时，宜采用据实际情况采
2、用适当的时态。在介绍自己喜欢的运动时，宜采用“总总分分总总”的结构，介绍某项运动的发展史和某个体育明星时可以采用时间顺序，的结构，介绍某项运动的发展史和某个体育明星时可以采用时间顺序，介绍奥运场馆和举办城市时可采用空间顺序。在行文时，应使用恰当的过渡介绍奥运场馆和举办城市时可采用空间顺序。在行文时，应使用恰当的过渡词汇，使各要点之间成为一个有机的整体。词汇，使各要点之间成为一个有机的整体。写作指导1.表示喜欢：表示喜欢：I like.best.Of all the.I like.best.My favourite.is.2.表示喜欢的理由：表示喜欢的理由：I like it because.T
3、here is no doubt that.The reason why I like.is that.常用表达3.表示某项运动的优势：表示某项运动的优势：It plays an important role/part in.It does us a lot of good.It is of great benefit to me.4.介绍某项运动的起源、发展：介绍某项运动的起源、发展： as. into a sport from.5.表示结论：表示结论：In all.In a word.It can make us healthy and wealthy.PART 2写作训练弄清文络 写作妙
4、笔生花请根据下表信息，写一篇请根据下表信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍你最喜欢的运动。词左右的英语短文介绍你最喜欢的运动。最喜欢的运动最喜欢的运动篮球篮球开始产生兴趣开始产生兴趣九岁，那时父亲教我打篮球九岁，那时父亲教我打篮球现在练习情况现在练习情况校篮球队成员；放学校篮球队成员；放学后后或周末打或周末打大约一小时大约一小时喜欢的原因喜欢的原因快乐；健康；交友快乐；健康；交友最喜欢的最喜欢的篮球篮球明星明星姚明姚明审题审题写作要求是介绍自己最喜欢的运动。写作时应注意下面几点：写作要求是介绍自己最喜欢的运动。写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇介绍类文章。写作时注意介绍类文章的写作特
5、点。确定文体：这是一篇介绍类文章。写作时注意介绍类文章的写作特点。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：由于是介绍自己喜欢的运动，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。主体人称：由于是介绍自己喜欢的运动，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。审题谋篇谋谋篇篇本文应分为三部分。本文应分为三部分。第一部分：简介我最喜欢的运动。第一部分：简介我最喜欢的运动。第二部分：对如何开始这项运动和练习情况进行描述。第二部分：对如何开始这项运动和练习情况进行描述。第三部分：喜欢的原因，自己的偶像。第三部分：喜欢的原因，自己的偶像。1.对对感兴趣感兴趣_2.在在几岁几岁时时_3.与与比
6、赛比赛_4.不但不但而且而且_核心词汇核心词汇遣词造句be/become interested inat the age of.have competitions with.not only.but also.连词成句连词成句1.我喜欢很多运动，其中篮球是我的最爱。我喜欢很多运动，其中篮球是我的最爱。(and连接的并列句连接的并列句)I like many kinds of sports .2.我在九岁时第一次对篮球感兴趣，那时爸爸教我怎样打篮球。我在九岁时第一次对篮球感兴趣，那时爸爸教我怎样打篮球。(and连接的并连接的并列句列句) I first became interested in
7、basketball at the age of nine _ .3.篮球可以给我带来很多快乐、健康和朋友，所以我非常喜欢它。篮球可以给我带来很多快乐、健康和朋友，所以我非常喜欢它。(so连接的并连接的并列句列句)Basketball can bring me lots of happiness，health and friends，_ .and basketball is my favoriteand then my father taughtme how to play itso I like it somuch1.请用请用“介词关系代词介词关系代词”引导的定语从句改写句引导的定语从句改写
8、句1。_2.请用定语从句改写句请用定语从句改写句2。_3.请用请用why引导的定语从句改写句引导的定语从句改写句3。_句式句式升级升级I like many kinds of sports，of which basketball is my favorite.I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine，when my father taught me how to play it.The reason why I like basketball so much is that it can bring me lots o
9、f happiness，health and friends.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。组句成篇I like many kinds of sports，of which basketball is my favorite.I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine，when my father taught me how to play it.I have been practicing
10、I am a member of our school basketball team and I often play basketball for about an hour after school or on weekends.Sometimes we also have competitions with students from other schools.The reason why I like basketball so much is that it can bring me lots of happiness，health and friends.My favourit
11、e basketball star is Yao Ming. 参考范文参考范文Part Writing体育故事Unit 3On the move故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。【增分表达】1.one of the best athletes in our country2.He is good at.3.He is even the most capable.in the world.4.keep the best record now
12、.5.I find myself full of passion in my heart.6.He is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so many records.7.This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us.8.With this ambition，he could defeat any difficulties.9.Facing difficulties，he never loses heart.10.ma
13、ke more progress.请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下：1.我是山东人。2.学校游泳队队员。3.从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。4.我认为注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：布局谋篇很关键审题1.确定体裁： 本文为记叙文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要为_；3.确定主题时态：_。构思第一部分：简要介绍自己。第二部分：_。第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。 第一人称一般现在时或过去时自己的故事第二步：核心词汇想周全 1._是的一员2._ 赢得一枚金牌3._ 成为冠军4._ 获得巨大成就5
14、._ 失去信心6._ 建议某人做某事 a member of.win a gold medalbecome a championget great achievementslose heartadvise sb to do sth第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.I am _.我是学校游泳队的队员。2.I _ when I was a small boy.我小的时候喜欢游泳。3.I have got _.我已经取得了巨大成就。4.I never _.我从来不放弃训练。5.I _.我遇到困难。6.I never _.我从来不灰心丧气。 a member of school swimming teamlo
15、ved swimminggreat achievementsgive up trainingmeet difficultieslose heart第四步：句型升级造亮点 1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。_2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。_3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。_I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.Though I have got great achievements，I never give up training.Whenever I meet difficulti
16、es，I never lose heart.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇 I am from Shandong，a member of the school swimming team.I am 198cm in height.I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.At 7 I became a member of the school swimming team.Five years later，I won a gold medal at the County Swimming Championship and became a c
17、hampion at the National Swimming Championships later.Though I have got great achievements，I never give up day I injured my arm in training，someone advised me to see a doctor，but I refused.Whenever I meet difficulties，I never lose heart.Swimming not only builds my body but also shapes my determined c
18、haracter.I dream of becoming a national swimmer and taking part in the international swimming events on behalf of our country. Part Listening职业与身份类试题Unit 3On the move在听力理解测试中，考生需要根据对话内容和情景来确定对话中人物的职业、身份或彼此之间的关系。身份型常见的提问方式为： What is the probable relationship between the two speakers？选项常常包含以下几种husband
19、 and wife，father and daughter，doctor and patient，boss and secretary，strangers，classmates，workmates等等。职业型常见的提问方式有： (1)What does the man do?(2)Whats the womans profession?(3)Whats the mans job?对于此类题目，考生要注意听对话发生的地点和谈话的内容，如听到homework，class，exercises，可判断双方关系可能是老师与学生。另一种方法是注意对话中的称呼和说话口气等细节。mummy，dad父母与子女；
20、dear，darling夫妻。口气较硬的祈使句，比如：Ask him to come to my office when he is back老板与雇员。考查得较多的是 teacher，doctor，waiter，waitress，nurse，hotel clerk，etc.考生要注意捕捉那些带有职业特点的词。如 patient，operation，medicine等。【典题印证】1.Who is the woman?A.Johns mother.B.Johns teacher.C.Johns friend.【听力原文】M：Miss Helen，John brought a note home
21、 saying you wanted to see me.W：Yes，Im worried about his schoolwork these days.【解题思路】此题考查的是判断人物身份题。根据对话内容我们可以知道女方所说的 Im worried about his schoolwork these days.中的schoolwork以及男方所说的John brought a note home saying you wanted to see me.可以推断出女方是John的老师。答案选B。2.What is the relationship between the speakers?
22、A.Boss and secretary.B.Teacher and student.C.Customer and saleswoman.【听力原文】M：I need 20 copies of this report before 2 oclock.W：Certainly，sir.Ill give them to you soon.【解题思路】此题考查的是判断人物职业题。根据对话内容男方说：两点前需要二十份报告。女方说：可以，先生。我很快就把它们(20份报告)送过去。由此可以推断出他们之间可能是老板和秘书之间的关系。答案选A。Part Developing ideasUnit 3On the
23、moveRunning into a Better LifeThis global site is a place for runners to share their stories about running.So，(1) if you are a runner with a story to tell，get in touchwed love to hear from you!Li Yue，16，BeijingI was born with asthma and I never thought Id be a runner！I only joined my local athletics
24、 club (2) because my doctor told me (3)that in my particular case exercise could improve (4) how my lungs work.But (5) before I knew it，I was taking part in local races.(6) As my fitness and my running improved，I started running in national competitions.This year I won silver in the under 18s 10，000
25、 metres！And who knows，next year I could win gold! Sarah，36，MontrealNot so long ago，I didnt do any exercisenot even any jogging！Then I discovered an app (7) called Running Power.It lists your performance against other runners in your social network.At first，I kept running just to see my name in the t
26、op five.Soon，I found (8) that I was not aloneI came across other runners in the same area running for the same purpose！Now I no longer use the app，but Ive fallen in love with running，and still do it with my running friends.David，52，New YorkAs a computer engineer，theres always a new challenge just ar
27、ound the corner！It can be quite stressful at times，though，(9)which in turn makes me feel anxious.(10)To help deal with this，I go running as often as I possibly can.Whether Im at the gym or on the road，my nervous energy pushes me through mile one.By mile two，the tension has moved from my mind to my l
28、egs.(11) By the end of the run，all my stress has disappeared and Im ready to face the next day at work!Grace，25，ManchesterThis year I entered the Great Gorilla Run in London.This is a programme (12) run by The Gorilla Organization to raise money to save the worlds last remaining gorillas from dying
29、out.Each runner receives a gorilla suit and off they go！Its a bit hot and sweaty inside the suit，and my legs ache，but its a lot of fun.The funniest moment was (13)when someone watching the race offered me a bananaa real treat for a running gorilla！I had a great day out in London，as well as helping t
30、o save gorillas!(1)if引导条件状语从句。(2)because引导原因状语从句。(3)that引导宾语从句。(4)how引导宾语从句。(5)before引导时间状语从句。(6)as引导时间状语从句。(7)过去分词作后置定语，修饰an app。(8)that引导宾语从句，作found的宾语。(9)which引导非限制性定语从句。(10)不定式作目的状语。(11)by the end of“到末尾”常与完成时连用。(12)过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰programme。(13)when引导表语从句。get in touch取得联系hear from收到来信be born with
31、天生具有local athletics club当地的田径俱乐部in.case在情况下lung n.肺take part in参加in national competitions在国家比赛中win gold赢得金牌not so long ago不久前do exercise锻炼；做运动list.against列举了与对抗(的情况)network n.网络at first最初；首先in the top five前五名come across偶遇no longer不再fall in love with爱上around the corner即将来临；在拐弯处at times有时Step Factual
32、readingRead the text carefully and choose the best answer.1.Li Yue A.Running made him get rid of the stress of work.2.Sarah B.She fell in love with running after using Running Power.3.David C.To save gorillas she wore a gorilla suit running to collect money.4.Grace D.By doing exercise he recovered f
33、rom a kind of disease. 答案1.D2.B3.A4.C Step Cloze testFill in the blanks according to the text.Running into a Better LifeThis global site is a place for runners 1._(share) their stories about running.The following statements are four peoples experience.Li Yue was born 2._ asthma.Being a runner is out
34、 of his expectation.A doctor advised his that he should take exercise to improve him 3._.From then on，he took all kinds of racing events and got medals.At the same time his body got better and better.to sharewithlungsAt first，Sarah didnt do any day she discovered 4._ app called Running Power.At the
35、beginning she just wanted to get the top five.5._ (fortunate)，she didnt use the app any longer but gradually fell in love with running.David is a computer day he is too tired from challenging work，which makes him feel deal with his 6._ (stress) feelings，he goes running as often as he can.By 7._ (run
36、) his stress disappears step by step and he is ready to face the next day at work!anFortunatelystressfulrunningGrace 8._ (take) part in the Great Gorilla Run in London，which is a programme run by The Gorilla Organization.The organization aims to raise money to save gorillas 9._ dying out.She receive
37、d a gorilla suit，inside 10._ its a bit hot and sweaty and her legs ache，but its a lot of only did she have a great day in London，but also she helped to save gorillas.tookfromwhich1.adjustable adj.可调整的；可调节的.while its waterproof band is fully adjustable so that it is comfortable to wear.(教材P29)而防水带完全可
38、调，佩戴舒适。单句语法填空It took him quite a while to adjust to _(live) alone after his parents passed away.We have made an _(adjust) to our price and will give you a special discount of 3 percent.She soon adjusted _(her) to the new surroundings.livingadjustmentherself单词一族adjust vi.& vt.调整；(使)适应adjustment n.调整；
39、适应用法总结(1)adjust to doing sth适应做某事 调整以适应adjust oneself to.使某人自己适应(2)make an adjustment/adjustments作出调整2.balance n.平衡；天平 vt.平衡；权衡Using only a rope，you can develop your footwork and balance.(教材P30)只用一根绳子，你就可以发展你的步法和平衡力。 单句语法填空/补全句子To keep fit，first of all，youd better keep a _ (balance) diet.The courts
40、must balance our liberty _ the security of the nation.Life is like riding a _，you must keep moving.人生就像骑单车，只有不断前进，才能保持平衡。 balancedagainstkeep your balance单词一族balanced adj.平稳的，安定的，和谐的用法总结(1)keep/lose ones balance保持/失去平衡(2)balance A against B权衡A与B3.involve v.包含，需要；涉及It involves doing very slow physica
41、l exercises to relax your mind and calm your body.(教材P31)它包括做非常慢的体育锻炼来放松你的大脑和平静你的身体。单句语法填空It _(involve) creation，performance，and promotion.Jennifer DeBruyn was not involved _ the study.At last she found a job as a high school teacher which involves _(spend) quite a lot of time with students.involves
42、inspendingSome American people protested against the USs _(involve) in other countries.This is how I got involved _ my charity work to improve the quality of life for all disabled people.【名师提醒】 involved adj.作前置定语时，意为“复杂的”；作后置定语时，意为“涉及的”。如： an involved sentence一个复杂的句子；the people involved所涉及的人。 involv
43、ementwith单词一族involvement n.参与；加入；沉迷用法总结(1)involve doing sthinclude doing sth包括做某事(2)be/get involved in卷入；专注于involve.in.使卷入；使专注于be involved with涉及；与有关4.response n.回答，答复；响应；反应During the interview，listen carefully to each question and try to understand the main ideas within the interviewees responses.(
44、教材P31)在面试过程中，仔细听每个问题，试着理解受访者回答的主要观点。单句语法填空She responded _ my letter with a phone call.The law was passed _ response to the public pressure.Carl made no _ (respond)，and carried on with his meal.toinresponse单词一族respond v.回答，回应；做出反应用法总结(1)in response to响应；反应(通常作状语)make (no) response to对(不)做反应/回答(2)resp
45、ond to.回应；对做出反应5.power n.能力；力量；权力；动力Then I discovered an app called Running Power.(教材P33)然后我发现了一个名为Running Power的应用程序。单句语法填空Though he has been _ power for two years，he hasnt found an effective solution to the countrys economic problems.It has been five years since he came _ power.As you can see，beli
46、efs are very _(power) because they determine what experiences you will have in life.ininto/topowerful单词一族powerful adj.强大的；有影响/感染力的；有势力的 用法总结in power当权come to/into power掌权；上台6.inspire vt.鼓舞，激励；启示End by saying why she inspires you.(教材P34)最后说说她为什么激励你。单句语法填空His encouraging remarks inspired confidence _
47、me.His encouraging remarks inspired me _ confidence._ by his _ words，they went on climbing the snowy mountains.(inspire)Genius is one percent _(inspire) and ninety-nine percent perspiration.inwithInspiredinspiringinspiration7.persuade vt.说服，劝服；使相信He then persuaded me to try ice hockey.(教材P35)之后，他劝我试
48、一试冰球。单句语法填空The man was so stubborn that no one could persuade him _(do) so.I must find a way to persuade her into _(leave) that house.None of us could persuade him out _ doing that.选词填空(persuade，advise)Though I had _ her for many times，I couldnt _ her to go abroad with me because her life experience
49、 had _ her that she could not live on without her parents.to doleavingofadvisedpersuadepersuaded1.get in touch取得联系So，if you are a runner with a story to tell，get in touchwed love to hear from you！(教材P32)所以，如果你是一个有故事要讲的跑步者，请联系我们我们很乐意收到你的来信！单句语法填空I will try to get in touch _ the poor boy.In addition，y
50、ou should learn how to get _ with others in school.We should make great efforts to get _ all the difficulties.After preparing for the work fully，we got down to _ (do) it at once.withalongoverdoing短语记牢get along well/nicely with与相处融洽get along进展；相处get across讲清楚，被领会get away from离开，脱身get down to doing st
