1、 Unit 6 SurvivalPeriod 4历险类记叙文文体感知记叙文通常包括时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、事件的经过和事件的结果六大要素。历险类记叙文要求学生能够根据命题的要求，记叙发生在自己或他人身上的一次历险。历险类记叙文写作应注意的问题：1注意重点。历险类记叙文的重点应放在“历险”上，所发生的事情必须体现“险”，即具有危险性。2体现意义。所记叙的这次历险，应具有一定的教育意义，能使读者受到一定的教育或启发。3用对时态。历险类记叙文描述的通常是发生在过去的事情。因此，这类文章的时态大多采用与过去相关的时态： 一般过去时、过去进行时、过去完成时等。基本框架第一段： 在什么地方发生的危险
2、；第二段： 这些危险是什么，你是如何设法摆脱危险的；第三段： 你的感受是什么。增分佳句1sb. was doing.in someplace when.2sb. was about to do.when.3At that moment, sb. did sth.4Personally, I think that.5What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that.6Tired as we were, we learned what we couldnt learn in/at school.7Through this emergency,
3、we learned something that couldnt be learned in class.8I was deeply impressed/moved/touched by.9I learned a lot from.10What an unforgettable experience!典型例题写作要求假定你现在和队友失联， 独自一人被困在丛林中，请从以下几个方面讲述你自己在丛林中克服困难、艰难求生的故事。1在丛林中失联；2面临的危险和困难；3你的解决方法；4你的感想。参考词汇： 驱虫剂(repellent)_审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键第二步：核心词汇想周全1leave.a
4、lone 把单独留下2be_lost_in 迷路3lose_contact_with 失去和的联系4shut_off 关机5keep.away_from 使远离6make_a_fire 生火7protect.against_ 保护免于8with_the_help_of 在的帮助下第三步：由词扩句雏形现1其他队友离开丛林回家已经三天了。Its been three days 2他们不小心把我一个人留下了。They 3我在丛林里迷了路，由于手机关机，与他们失去了联系。I was lost in the jungle and 4我在丛林里走了一整天， 听到了动物的叫声。为了保暖并让动物们远离我，我生
5、起了火。All day in the jungle, ,_I had heard noises of animals. In order to keep warm and keep the animals away from me, I made a fire.5众所周知，丛林里有些昆虫是很危险的。 some insects in the jungle can be very dangerous.6我用驱虫剂来保护自己免受蚊虫叮咬。I had the insect repellent to 7起初我最担心的是水， 但在一些昆虫的巢穴的帮助下，我发现了一条河。毫无疑问，我不再担心找不到水了。Wa
6、ter was my biggest worry ,_but I discovered a river with the help of nests of some insects. I no longer 8现在我担心的是食物。它只够一个人吃一周的。Now I am worried about food. It is only 9如果我不能走出丛林，或者在一周内被营教，我将不得不在丛林中寻找东西吃，比如一些昆虫。 ,_I will have to find things to eat in the jungle, such as some insects.10人们通常不愿意吃昆虫。Peopl
7、e 11我相信我可以在一周内回家， 因为太阳和星星可以帮助我找到路。I believe ,_because 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用现在分词短语作状语合并第三步中的句1和句2 .2把第三步中的句5改写成定语从句 .3用非限制性定语从句合并第三步中的句9和句10 .第五步：过渡衔接连成篇_实战演练你在生活中有什么历险经历吗？请结合自己的生活实际，写一篇历险短文。写作要点如下：1事件发生的时间和地点；2事件发生的过程；3你的感想。要求： 80词左右。_参考答案与解析第二步：核心词汇想周全1leave.alone 2be_lost_in 3lose_contact_with 4shut_off 5
8、keep.away_from 6make_a_fire 7protect.against_ 8with_the_help_of 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1. since_the_other_teammates_left_the_jungle_and_went_back_home2. left_me_alone_accidently 3. lost_contact_with_them_with_my_cellphone_shut_off4. while_I_had_been_walking5. Its_known_to_us_all_that6. protect_myself_against_bi
9、tes7. at_first There_was_no_doubt_that worried_about_looking_for_water8. enough_for_one_person_to_eat_for_a_week9. If_I_cant_walk_out_of_the_jungle_or_be_rescued_within_one_week10. wouldnt_normally_want_to_eat_the_insects11. that_I_can_get_home_again_in_one_week, the_sun_and_stars_can_help_me_find_t
10、he_way 第四步：句式升级造亮点1. Its_been_three_days_since_the_other_teammates_left_the_jungle_and_went_back_home,_accidently_leaving_me_alone2. As_is_known_to_us_all,_some_insects_in_the_jungle_can_be_very_dangerous3. If_I_cant_walk_out_of_the_jungle_or_be_rescued_within_one_week,_I_will_have_to_find_things_to
11、_eat_in_the_jungle,_such_as_some_insects,_which_people_wouldnt_normally_want_to_eat第五步：过渡衔接连成篇One possible version：Its been three days since the other teammates left the jungle and went back home, accidently leaving me alone. I was lost in the jungle and lost contact with them with my cellphone shut
12、 off.All day in the jungle, while I had been walking, I had heard noises of animals. In order to keep warm and keep the animals away from me, I made a fire. As is known to us all, some insects in the jungle can be very dangerous. Fortunately, I had the insect repellent to protect myself against bite
13、s. Water was my biggest worry at first, but I discovered a river with the help of nests of some insects. There was no doubt that I no longer worried about looking for water.Now I am worried about food. It is only enough for one person to eat for a week. If I cant walk out of the jungle or be rescued
14、 within one week, I will have to find things to eat in the jungle, such as some insects, which people wouldnt normally want to eat. I believe that I can get home again in one week, because the sun and stars can help me find the way.实战演练One possible version：One day last month, I was trapped in the li
15、ft of our flat as I was about to go to school.The lift just came to a stop all of a sudden shortly after I got into it. I was alone in the lift and felt a bit frightened and worried at first, but I managed to make myself calm down. It was obvious that it was no use only feeling worried in the lift.
16、First, I tried to cry for help, but no one seemed to be able to hear me from outside. I looked around and found there was an emergency bell on the wall. Just then, I knew I would be safe. I immediately rang the bell for help. Soon two guards came up and opened the door for me and let me out.Next time, stay calm in the face of danger, and soon you can find a way to protect yourself.学科网（北京）股份有限公司
