1、 To Perfect the Structure of Our English WritingBy the end of the lesson, the students will be able to have a better command of the whole structure before writing. attach importance to the topic sentence while writing each part. raise the awareness of making the topic sentence and the supporting sen
2、tences cohere.题型题型Part 1Part 1Part 2Part 2Part 3Part 3现象解释型现象解释型描述现象描述现象说明现象产生的说明现象产生的原因原因表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述个人做法对比选择型对比选择型表明一方表明一方或双方的或双方的观点观点表明另一方的观表明另一方的观点及理由，或指点及理由，或指出双方观点的不出双方观点的不足之处及理由足之处及理由表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述个人做法问题解决型问题解决型提出问题提出问题分析问题，给出分析问题，给出解决方案解决方案表明个人观点态度或表明个人观点态度或阐述个人做法阐述
3、个人做法观点论证型观点论证型提出论点提出论点例证论点例证论点得出结论或表明个人得出结论或表明个人看法与做法看法与做法应用文应用文描述事实描述事实阐述原因阐述原因表明观点或提出建议表明观点或提出建议常见的作文结构可以参看下表：常见的作文结构可以参看下表： 1. 落实段落结构落实段落结构Part1：30个词的材料概括个词的材料概括Part2：各种分析：各种分析(原因；影响；感受等原因；影响；感受等)Part3：结合个人经验，谈具体做法：结合个人经验，谈具体做法 全文全文Part1材料概括可以用这种结构：材料概括可以用这种结构：Note:The adverbial can refer to time
4、, reason, condition, purpose or concession(让步让步), and the attributive clause introduced by which can be used to present a result.状语状语(非非谓语谓语/从从句句)+ 主句主句 +非限制性非限制性定从定从范例范例1： Although most people have a dream, only the minority of them can make it a reality like the little boy, who keeps his dream reg
5、ardless of the negative comments. （省联盟大联考）范例范例2：In a bid/ gesture to encourage people to take action to protect the environment, a man is driving a truck releasing waste gas, from which the trees along the road suffer a lot.（1.8模）范例范例3：Dissatisfied with the current schooling system, a father in Luzh
6、ou had his daughter quit school and taught her personally for 11 years, which has received both support and opposition. （扬泰通淮宿徐2017届高三3月联考）1.越来越多的学生选择休学一年获越来越多的学生选择休学一年获取技能和生活经验而不是直接上大学，取技能和生活经验而不是直接上大学，这给了他们在找工作方面的优势这给了他们在找工作方面的优势。 _, an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year
7、 to gain skills and life experience, _.Instead of going straight to universitywhich gives them an edge over others in job hunting2.自从超女在自从超女在20042004年一炮走红以来年一炮走红以来，各种各样的，各种各样的才艺表演才艺表演深受大众欢迎，深受大众欢迎，可这也引起了社会广泛争议。可这也引起了社会广泛争议。 _, various talent shows are well received by the public,_.Since Super Girl b
8、ecame an instant hit in 2004 which, at the same time, brings about social extensive controversy 3.担心孩子的吵闹声给他人带来不便担心孩子的吵闹声给他人带来不便，一些母亲分发纸袋，附上以孩子的名义，一些母亲分发纸袋，附上以孩子的名义写的歉意信，对此人们的反应不一。写的歉意信，对此人们的反应不一。 _, some mothers hand out bags with notes to express apologies in the name of their babies, _. Worried t
9、hat their babies noises may bring inconvenience to other peoples reaction to which was mixed 4.多亏了他妈妈的鼓励，作者在若多亏了他妈妈的鼓励，作者在若干次失败之后成功找到了工作，这表明干次失败之后成功找到了工作，这表明在陷入困境时我们要采取一种积极的生在陷入困境时我们要采取一种积极的生活态度。活态度。 _, the author succeeded in landing a job after several failures,_ _. Thanks to his mothers encourage
10、ment which indicates that we should adopt a positive attitude towards life when in trouble 5.不管负面的言论和他人的失败，不管负面的言论和他人的失败，这只小聋青蛙成功地到达了高塔顶部，这只小聋青蛙成功地到达了高塔顶部，这表明坚持是通往成功的唯一道路。这表明坚持是通往成功的唯一道路。 _, the tiny deaf frog succeeded in reaching the top of a tall tower,_ _. Despite the negative comments and other
11、s failure which indicates that perseverance is the only road to success 6.父亲曾经在工厂工作父亲曾经在工厂工作8 8年，之后年，之后上了师范，做了十年老师。现在他在家上了师范，做了十年老师。现在他在家安度晚年。安度晚年。 Having worked in a factory for 8 yeas, my father was admitted to a teachers college and served as a teacher for a decade, who is now enjoying the rest o
12、f his life at home. 7.为了重视中国的传统节日，浙江为了重视中国的传统节日，浙江温州的学校禁止过圣诞节。圣诞节在中温州的学校禁止过圣诞节。圣诞节在中国青少年中已经流行了几十年。国青少年中已经流行了几十年。 _ _, schools of Wenzhou in Zhejiang province are banned from celebrating Christmas, _ _. To attatch importance to Chinese traditional festivals which has already been popular among teenag
13、ers in China for decadesPart2/Part3的段落结构的段落结构:Part2主题句主题句支撑句支撑句1/拓展句拓展句1支撑句支撑句2/拓展句拓展句2Part3主题句主题句支撑句支撑句1/拓展句拓展句1支撑句支撑句2/拓展句拓展句2结论句结论句主题句的好句式：主题句的好句式：1) 材料分析材料分析As can be learnt from the passage,It can be learnt from the passage thatWhat we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that 2）结合自身经历，举例表达：
14、）结合自身经历，举例表达：The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when Id like to take myself as an example to show you . When it comes to the relationship between parents and children, Im reminded of my parents, who once quarreled with each other the moment they met. 3) 表达支持表达支持/反对：反对：The reasons why I
15、 support/oppose the practice can be listed as follows. To begin with, . In addition,Most importantly, Everything considered, such practice does more good than harm to us. In the long run, it will have a negative/positive influence on constructing a harmonious society.4）结论表达）结论表达From my point of view
16、, what we have to do is /something must be done toPersonally/Consequently, its high time that measures should be taken to .Therefore, I am firmly convinced thatSo vital a role does praise play in our lives that never can we stress the significance of it too much. Its high time that we abandoned the
17、idea of schooling at home, no matter how attractive it seems!Practice：按题目要求写主题句：按题目要求写主题句Task1：2016江苏省高三英语联考江苏省高三英语联考 b) 以自己或朋友、家人的经历说明以自己或朋友、家人的经历说明“坚持就会成功坚持就会成功”或或者不坚持导致失败。者不坚持导致失败。 The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when I failed in an important English test. I was so discouraged th
18、at I even thought of abandoning English. Fortunately, I realized my mistake and devoted more time and efforts to learning English. Eventually, my efforts paid off and I made great progress in English.Task2：2015广东高考英语广东高考英语2. 请以约请以约120个词谈谈你对个词谈谈你对“梦想成就伟人梦想成就伟人”的看法，包的看法，包括如下要点：括如下要点： (1)谈谈梦想的重要性；谈谈梦想的
19、重要性； (2)谈谈你是如何坚持你的梦想的谈谈你是如何坚持你的梦想的Dreams play so vital a role in our lives that never can we give up our dreams no matter what difficulty we may come across. Id like to take myself as an example to show you how I stick to my dream. When I was young, I dreamt of becoming a scientist, inventing more d
20、evices to make our lives more convenient. Whenever Im discouraged, Im reminded of my dream, telling myself to keep on going. Thanks to my dream, Ive reached where I am today.Task3：前黄高级中学：前黄高级中学2017届高三一模适应性考试届高三一模适应性考试以约以约120个词发表你个词发表你“对吃苦教育对吃苦教育”的看法，内容包括：的看法，内容包括：（1）你对）你对“吃苦教育吃苦教育”概念的理解；概念的理解； What
21、can be interpreted from the concept of hardship education is that important as it is to receive hardship education, what is equally important is following teenagers growth. 人类该怎么采取行动来阻止这类愚蠢的行人类该怎么采取行动来阻止这类愚蠢的行为呢？（主动句为呢？（主动句/被动句）被动句） 表扬的话不要仅仅留给那些成绩好的学生。表扬的话不要仅仅留给那些成绩好的学生。How can we humans take measur
22、es to stop such foolish behavior? Dont save the praise for only those top kids.What measures can be taken to stop such foolish behavior? 包里有一些珍贵的书，当然还有一些钱。包里有一些珍贵的书，当然还有一些钱。 如果你入乡随俗，你在扬州就会享受这里的如果你入乡随俗，你在扬州就会享受这里的一切。一切。In the bag are some valuable books and of course some money.If you “Do as Romans do when in Rome”，youll enjoy more of your stay here in Yangzhou.
