1、BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONSWarming UpWarming UpmountainActivity1: Use senses(感官感官) to know his homeland.greenmusic activedancetapLearning ObjectivesBy the end of the class, I will be able to:1.Find out the structure of a description.2.Write a description of Cuihu Lake based on the structure
2、 and imitating the text.3. Mark partners descriptions based on the checklist.4. Revise your writing based on the structure.Pre-writingActivity2: read and conclude the structure and writing methods.Irelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. Beautiful
3、 Ireland and Its TraditionsTell what will be described.titleBrief introductionDo further explanation for the title.Pre-writingActivity2: read and conclude the structure and writing methods.The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and insp
4、ires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up th
5、e music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dan
6、cing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. a true feast for the eye
7、s Place1Metaphor(比喻比喻)rollingdotted withVivid(生动的生动的) wordsSightroarPlace2criesHearingPersonification(拟人拟人)Place3TouchfeeldeliciousSmellgreet【】Place4sweet scentTasteenjoySightPersonification(拟人拟人)Add sensory detailsUse figure of speech( (修辞修辞) )Use vivid wordsThe bodyUse transition vTransition(过渡过渡)
8、spatial order(空间顺序空间顺序)Pre-writingActivity2: read and conclude the structure writing methods.And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.The endingconclude and welcomeIntroductionBodyEndingUse vivid wordsAdd sensory de
9、tailsUse figure of speech(修辞修辞)The structure of a descriptionspatial ordertitleUse transitionWhile WritingActivity3: watch a clip to complete the structure of the description of Cuihu Lake.IntroductionBodyUse vivid wordsAdd sensory detailsUse figure of speech(修辞修辞)spatial ordertitleEndingOverlooking
10、 Kunming, Cuihu Lake is the most fantastic scenery.Beauty of Cuihu LakeUse transitionat the edge of the lakeseabirdwavewillow branchBreeze(微风微风)purling(潺潺的潺潺的)songpillar (柱子柱子)grey roof (屋顶屋顶)sweet scentsuncompete to blossom (竞相开放竞相开放)Shuiyue Xuanalong the path 11While WritingActivity4: Group work-w
11、rite a description to describe Cuihu Lake. WritingPost WritingActivity5. Share your description with your classmates.ChecklistIn my partners description, she writesYes(A) No(B)1. Spatial order2.Some specific words3. Sensory details4. Figure of speechIn my partners description, I can find5. Correct g
12、rammar6. Beautiful Writingshow & evaluateWe admire the beauty of the world.Our home & country is a land of diversity. We should pass her beauty to the world. Life is not lack of beauty but lack eyes to find out beauty.Post WritingHomeworkWrite an ending and revise your work then hand in. I will choose the best to send to my friend.
