1、Basic WritingBasic Writing -Character -Character introductionintroduction Module4 Module4 Unit1Unit1 Women of achievement Women of achievementCan you tell me something about her?Brainstorming:Brainstorming:If we want to introduce someone, what can we talk about?Her name is Lin Qiaozhi.She is a docto
2、r. She was born in Xiamen in 1901. She is kind and hard-working.She graduated from a medical school. She delivered about 50,000 babies. We all think highly of her.namejobbirthplace/ birth dateevaluationqualitiesachievementseducationIntroduce Lin Qiaozhi orallyWhat can we write about a person?1. 概况概况
3、 (name, age, birthplace, birth date, job, background)2.性格性格/品质品质 (personality/quality)3.教育（教育（education ） 4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements & evaluation） Tips:介绍概况，一个句型轻松搞定 Born in+ 地点 , sb, 同位语（身份），谓语+ Born in +年份/on+具体日期, sb, 同位语（身份），谓语+ A specialist in 是方面的专家Character introduction1. 概况概况 (name, age, birt
4、hplace, birth date, job, background) 林巧稚，一位妇女疾病的专家，1901年出生于厦门,1983年逝世，享年82岁._, Lin Qiaozhi, _, Lin Qiaozhi, _ ,_ , passed away on 1983 at the age of passed away on 1983 at the age of 82.82.Born inBorn in Xiamen on 1901Xiamen on 1901a specialist inwomens diseaseswomens diseasesBorn in+ Born in+ 地点地点+
5、 on/ in + on/ in +时间时间, sb, , sb, 同位语，谓语同位语，谓语+ + 2. 性格/品质 (personality/quality)What words do you know to describe a persons quality?Brainstorming (group-work) : personality/qualitydeterminedbravewarm-heartedresponsibleunselfishgenerouskindconsiderateactive Group work: Brainstorminggood Yoga is not
6、only patient but also easy-going, so we all Yoga is not only patient but also easy-going, so we all love her.love her.Yoga is so patient and easy-going that all of us love her.Yoga is so patient and easy-going that all of us love her.EgEg：林巧稚不仅善良而且体贴，所以病人们都喜欢她。Lin Qiaozhi wasLin Qiaozhi was kindkind
7、considerateconsiderate，so all the so all the patients patients love her. love her. Lin Qiaozhi wasLin Qiaozhi was kind and considerate kind and considerate all the patients all the patients love her.love her.2.性格性格/品质品质 (personality/quality)Tips:介绍性格特点时，可用介绍性格特点时，可用固定短语和句型固定短语和句型。如如: not onlybut als
8、o sothat.等等not onlynot onlybut alsobut alsososo thatthat graduate from university 从某大学毕业 receive/get a doctors degree 获取博士学位 go abroad for further study 出国深造3.教育（教育（education） 林巧稚毕业于北京协和医学院，并获得博士学位，而后出国深造。 Beijing Union Medical Beijing Union Medical College, Lin QiaozhiCollege, Lin Qiaozhi and and t
9、henthen . .After graduating fromAfter graduating fromreceived her doctors degreereceived her doctors degreewent abroad for further educationwent abroad for further educationTips:介绍介绍教育经历教育经历时可以用时可以用省略句省略句和一些表达式，使文和一些表达式，使文章简洁章简洁。 1.devote ones whole life to sb 将毕生都献给了某人 2. think / speak highly of .
10、高度评价 3.be regarded as . 被誉为. 4. choose not to do sth. 选择不去做某事4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements & evaluation）1.1.确保5万多个小生命被顺利接生的林巧稚被认为是中国最伟大的女性之一。 Lin Qiaozhi, who made sure that over 50,000 babies were safely Lin Qiaozhi, who made sure that over 50,000 babies were safely delivered, delivered, one of the gre
11、atest women in China.one of the greatest women in China.2.2.善良， 体贴的林巧稚一生未婚， 把毕生都献给了她的病人。 SheShe her patients her patients andand have a family of her own. have a family of her own. Lin Qiaozhi was so kind and considerate that all the Lin Qiaozhi was so kind and considerate that all the patientspatie
12、nts her. her.was regarded aswas regarded asdevoted her whole life todevoted her whole life tochose not tochose not tothought highly ofthought highly ofTips: 介绍成就评价时要牢记相关表达。Write a short passage Write a short passage to introduce Lin to introduce Lin Qiaozhi withQiaozhi with the the sentence patterns
13、 we sentence patterns we have learnedhave learned. .基本信息林巧稚，妇科专家，1901年出生于厦门，1983年逝世。经历1929年毕业于北京协和医学院，并获得博士学位，而后出国深造。善良， 体贴的林巧稚一生未婚， 把毕生都献给了她的病人。影响确保5万多个小生命被顺利接生的林巧稚被认为是中国最伟大的女性之一。注：北京协和医学院 Beijing Union Medical College概况概况evaluationevaluationeducationeducationqualitiesqualitiesOne possible version
14、Born in Xiamen in 1901, Lin Qiaozhi, a famous Born in Xiamen in 1901, Lin Qiaozhi, a famous specialist in womens diseases, passed away in specialist in womens diseases, passed away in 1983 at the age of 82.1983 at the age of 82. After graduating from Beijing Union Medical After graduating from Beiji
15、ng Union Medical College, she received her doctors degree and then College, she received her doctors degree and then went abroad for further education. Whats more, went abroad for further education. Whats more, she devoted her whole life to her patients and she devoted her whole life to her patients
16、 and chose not to have a family of her own. Lin Qiaozhi chose not to have a family of her own. Lin Qiaozhi was so kind and considerate that all the patients was so kind and considerate that all the patients thought highly of her. thought highly of her. Lin, who made sure that over 50,000 babies Lin,
17、 who made sure that over 50,000 babies were safely delivered, was regarded as one of the were safely delivered, was regarded as one of the greatest women in China.greatest women in China.What can we write about a person?1. 概况概况 (name, age, birthplace, birth date, job, background)2.性格性格/品质品质 (persona
18、lity/quality)3.教育（教育（education ） 4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements & evaluation）Memorize the important words, Memorize the important words, phases andphases andsentence patterns.sentence patterns.Share the passage with your Share the passage with your classmates and talk about the women classmates and talk about the women you admire.you admire.
