1、读后续写微技能指导（四）读后续写微技能指导（四）人物情绪描写之二：人物情绪描写之二：恐惧恐惧 Step1. 观察并分析以下句子的谓语和表达方式。观察并分析以下句子的谓语和表达方式。 一、通过一、通过_来表达来表达 1.Fear flooded over him. 他心里充满恐惧。他心里充满恐惧。 二、通过二、通过_来表达来表达 1.His face was dead with fright. 他吓得面无人色。他吓得面无人色。 2.The boys eyes were full of fear. 男孩的眼中充满了恐惧。男孩的眼中充满了恐惧。 三、通过三、通过_来表达来表达 3.Denver bu
2、rst from the room, terror in her eyes. Denver从屋子里冲出来，眼中充满恐惧。从屋子里冲出来，眼中充满恐惧。心理心理表情表情动作动作+表情表情 Step 2. 练习。练习。 一、完成句子一、完成句子(frightened/horror/trembled/shock) 1.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 He turned to me, with his eyes full of _. 2. 他吓得两膝直哆嗦。他吓得两膝直哆嗦。 He was so _ that his knees knocked together. 3. 她受
3、了惊吓，差点晕过去。她受了惊吓，差点晕过去。 She nearly fainted from _. 4. 听到狼嚎声，她恐惧得发抖。听到狼嚎声，她恐惧得发抖。 Hearing the wolves howling，She _ with fear.horrorfrightenedshocktrembledRead together aloud!1. Fear flooded over him. 他心里充满恐惧。他心里充满恐惧。2.His face was dead with fright.他吓得面无人色。他吓得面无人色。3.The boys eyes were full of fear. 男孩的
4、眼中充满了恐惧。男孩的眼中充满了恐惧。4. Denver burst from the room, terror in her eyes. Denver从屋子里冲出从屋子里冲出来，眼中充满恐惧来，眼中充满恐惧5. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。6. He was so frightened that his knees knocked together.他吓得两膝直他吓得两膝直哆嗦。哆嗦。7. She nearly fainted from shock.她受了惊吓，差点晕过去。
5、她受了惊吓，差点晕过去。8. Hearing the wolves howling, she trembled with fear.听到狼嚎，她恐听到狼嚎，她恐惧得发抖。惧得发抖。注意表达恐惧的词注意表达恐惧的词 二、根据情境完成文段。二、根据情境完成文段。(5 minutes) 姐妹两人慢慢向前走。突然，姐妹两人慢慢向前走。突然，Lucy 转过身来，眼里充满了恐转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。惧。Annie走上前一看，她也吓得差点晕过去。那是一条大蛇！走上前一看，她也吓得差点晕过去。那是一条大蛇！ The sisters moved forward slowly. Suddenly, Lucy t
6、urned around,with her eyes full of horror. Annie stepped forward and looked. She also nearly fainted from shock. It was a big snake! 三、续写故事情节。三、续写故事情节。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unple
7、asant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake ,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. With no path to follow ,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place ,she t
8、urned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! ”she cried. “Help! ” 根据所给文段开头续写：根据所给文段开头续写： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest._Jane与与Tom两人本来一起去露营。但两人发生争吵，两人本来
9、一起去露营。但两人发生争吵，Jane负气一个负气一个人离开。走着走着，她发现自己到了一个无人之地。人离开。走着走着，她发现自己到了一个无人之地。 Show time!Task 1:请小组代表说一说你们想到请小组代表说一说你们想到的故事情节。的故事情节。(3 minutes)Task 2:把你们讨论出来的故事写下把你们讨论出来的故事写下来，然后交换互评。来，然后交换互评。(10 minutes) 参考范文 Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fan
10、tastic memory crowded in and she couldnt help crying, “Hadnt I quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldnt be trapped in this awful place, confronted with（面（面对）对） the danger of dying.” Hearing the wolves howling, she trembled with fear. Jane, 又累又害怕。她躺在一块石头旁边，想念着在远方的家人。又累又害怕。她躺在一块石头旁边，想念着在远方的家人。美好的回忆涌进脑海，她忍不住哭起来：美好的回忆涌进脑海，她忍不住哭起来：“如果我没有和如果我没有和Tom吵吵架，没有走开，没有爬到这么高的地方，我就不会困在这可怕架，没有走开，没有爬到这么高的地方，我就不会困在这可怕的地方，面对着死亡的危险。的地方，面对着死亡的危险。”听到狼嚎声，她恐惧得发抖了。听到狼嚎声，她恐惧得发抖了。 Homework:背诵背诵2-3个关于个关于“恐惧恐惧”的句子。下节的句子。下节课抽查。课抽查。
