1、书面表达苏州市第六部分：书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）请阅读下面这段文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。How much money should I spend each month? This is asked by college students at the start of every term, and its become a hot topic of discussion following a controversial online post. The post was about a college student who demanded 4,500 y
2、uan for monthly living expenses from her mom, reported China Daily.In the post, this new college student explained that her school is in a top-tier city and that her expenses included skin-care products and new clothes. Her mother did not agree and only gave her 2,000 yuan.The post started a heated
3、debate. Some people came to her defense. Girls invest a lot in skin-care products and new clothes while boys invest much in shoes, latest electronic devices and equipment for games.However, someone thinks 4,500 yuan is too much. According to a 2019 report, students in 15 cities spent more than 1,500
4、 yuan a month on average. Beijing topped the list at 2,400 yuan, and Shanghai followed close behind at 2,300 yuan. In some cities, a parent may only earn a monthly salary of 4,000 or 5,000 yuan. Nevertheless, some students insist on buying Dyson vacuum cleaners （吸尘器）for their dormitories instead of
5、common brooms. Others demand Apple laptops to study at Starbucks, instead of going to the library.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上文内容；2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一现象的看法，包括如下要点：（1）分析哪些原因造成了大学生生活开销的上涨（不少于两点）；（2）你觉得文中该大学生的要求是否合理？请阐述你的理由或建议（不少于两点）。 【写作要求】不能直接引用原文句子。第六部分 书面表达 Possible version: A college student demanded for higher l
6、iving expenses that are far beyond the average, which was turned down by her mother. Opinions on this issue vary from person to person.The reasons behind higher living expenses deserve thorough reflection. First of all, it goes without saying that soaring prices for commodities along with constant i
7、ncreasing investment in self-image and self-improvement, to some extent, give rise to such demands. In addition to basic needs, a large sum of money is wasted on unnecessary or luxurious things, which partly reflects college students irrational attitudes towards consumption.From my perspective, by n
8、o means can asking for excessive living expenses be taken for granted. Despite the rising price, college students, especially those from poor areas, are expected to reduce parents financial burden by doing part-time jobs and making budgets instead of blind consumption. Meanwhile, compared with appea
9、rance, more investment is encouraged to enhance inner quality. (150 words)书面表达评分细则一、评分细则1. 本题总分25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。2. 在所定档次内，根据以下方面确定具体得分：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性；英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。3. 内容要点有遗漏，句子语法结构错误，时态、语态误用，均为大错；介词、冠词、单词拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面的错误均为小错；3个小错相
10、当于1处大错；相同错误不重复扣分。4. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。词数少于130或多于180的，酌情从总分中减去1-2分。5. 如书写较差，标点符号不规范，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1.用约30个词概括上文内容；2.分析哪些原因造成了大学生生活开销的上涨（不少于两点）；3.你觉得文中该大学生的要求是否合理？请阐述你的理由或建议（不少于两点）。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档 (2125分)很好地完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。覆盖所有内容要点。语法结构和词汇有个别小错误，具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地应用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑
11、，内容连贯。第四档 (1620分)较好地完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。虽漏掉少量信息，但覆盖所有主要内容。用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构和词汇方面虽有少许错误，但应用基本准确。应用了简单的衔接手段，内容较为连贯。第三档 (1115分)基本完成了试题规定的任务，基本达到了预期的写作目的。虽漏掉一些信息，但基本覆盖主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。较少应用衔接手段，但内容基本连贯。第二档 (610分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构
12、单一，所用词汇有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响内容理解。缺少衔接手段，内容缺少连贯性。第一档 (05分)未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单一，所用词汇不当。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，严重影响内容理解。缺乏语句间的衔接手段，内容不连贯。05书面表达这篇作文再次选择了高考中热门的正反观点对比，大学生到底需不需要这么高的生活费？作为准大学生，高三的孩子们应该是有话可写的，尤其是生活在苏州这种富庶的地方，价比天高，对于外面花花世界的诱惑，孩子们的观点应该会很有意思。作为社会现象类文章，首先我们需要抓准首段的社会现象。第一段：网络上流
13、传着一个有争论的帖子，一个女孩因为在一线城市上大学，找妈妈要4500元每个月的生活费，理由是要护肤，买衣服，买电子产品。第二段：女孩的妈妈义正言辞地拒绝了她的请求。第三段和第四段：网友有人支持，有人反对。支持的原因是确实开销大，反对的原因是大学生对于物质的追求其实已经超出了父母的承受能力。值得注意的是，反对和支持的理由由于字数的限制，可以不用写出来。第一段的结构为事件和反响即可。于是，我们第一段的内容就出炉了。A freshman, maintaining that the expense in first-tier city was much higher, demanded 4,500 y
14、uan per month from her mom,who rejected the daughters request resolutely. Interestingly, netizens are divided on this incident. (32 words)第二段分析生活费上涨原因，可以向内看，和向外看。向内看：如今，大学生对于物质的需求不比往届学长学姐，学爷学奶，往届的娃娃们生活清贫，艰苦朴素，不知星巴克，劳力士为何物？而如今大学生左口一个星巴克，右口一个耐克阿迪。不穿名牌都不好意思去上课。向外看：我们的物质生活水平确实提高了很多，对美好生活的向往心态也是与日俱增。而且，物
15、价水平也在飙升，猪肉都40元一斤了，食堂的饭菜自然要涨价。车厘子都80元一斤了，水果再贵也得吃。考虑到大学生的吃喝拉撒费用都在上升，生活费自然也得跟上去。所以我们的第二段内容就有了。Behind the soar of college students living expense lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the rocketing commodity price. Gone are the days when students could enjoy a square meal at four to five yua
16、n in the school canteen. Instead, it is not uncommon that asimple dish with pork or beef would cost them an arm and a leg, which is almost six times what it used to be. Another factor at play is that vanity and materialism prevail among university students, who might blindly chase after famous brand
17、s like iPhone or Starbucks. Inevitably, these luxury goods will add to their already too high expense. (108 words)作为一个正气浩然的高中生，肯定要反对这种恬不知耻，依赖心，攀比心，物质心超强的无耻做法。理由是爸爸妈妈赚钱不易，而且自己已经成年，可以通过做一些力所能及的兼职（当然在不影响自己学业的情况下）来增加自己的收入。同时，也要抵制物质主义和攀比心来腐蚀自己，注重内在修养，多多看书，运动，广泛交友，正能量。衣服和使用物品只要干净整洁就好了。I definitely turn my
18、 nose up at these college students unjustifiable and selfish request. Firstly, in no way should our parents hard-earned money be squandered on luxury goods, only to feed our vanity or materialism. Secondly, being an independent and self-reliant adult, Ican take up some odd jobs to alleviate my paren
19、ts financial burden. Lastly, skincare and cosmetic are unnecessary since a neat and tidy appearance will do for an economically dependent student. (75 words)A freshman, maintaining that the expense infirst-tier city was much higher, demanded 4,500 yuan per month from her mom,who rejected the daughte
20、rs request resolutely. Interestingly, netizens are divided on this incident. (32 words)Behind the soar of college students living expense lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the rocketing commodity price. Gone are the days when students could enjoy a square meal at four to five yuan in
21、 the school canteen. Instead, it is not uncommon that a simple dish with pork or beef would cost them an arm and a leg, which is almost six times what it used to be. Another factor at play is that vanity and materialismprevail among university students, who might blindly chase after famous brandslik
22、e iPhone or Starbucks. Inevitably, these luxury goods will add to their already too high expense. (108 words)I definitely turn my nose up at these college students unjustifiable and selfish request. Firstly, in no way should our parents hard-earned money be squandered on luxury goods, only to feed o
23、urvanity or materialism. Secondly, being an independent and self-reliant adult, I can take up some odd jobs to alleviate my parents financial burden. Lastly,skin care and cosmetic are unnecessary since a neat and tidy appearance will dofor an economically dependent student. (75 words)注意：为了给大家更多的观点和语
24、言输入，龚露老师第二，第三段写了比较多的字数，正式考试中第三段可以少一个观点，第二段的论证方式也可以更加简洁。启示1.单选部分此次命得中规中矩，与高考的难度贴近，很多题目都是原题改编，比如第27,29,30，所以孩子们还是得把2017-2019届的卷子都刷完，你会看到很多老题的影子哦。2.完型是一篇浓浓的鸡汤文，还是按照叙事在前，感悟再后的写法，前面生活一坨屎的状态记得都用贬义词，好转的状态记得回归褒义词。出现了蛮多的固定搭配，比如fix the camera, melt away, one-size fits for all,熟词僻意也多，比如wrap, explode, face sb对孩
25、子的基础要求还是很高。固定搭配，词汇活用，熟词僻意依然是完型永恒的主题。3.阅读充满着文题顺序一致还有同义替换，当然劳工平等，男女平等，网络虚假信息蔓延，这些话题让这些阅读充满着愤世嫉俗，我觉得高考的选文应该比这个平和以及鸡汤。4.单词拼写大概是第2个separation最简单，但是也最难想出来，没有关系，放弃这一分吧！5.任务型不是特别难，以同义替换还有固定搭配为主，诸如compared with, when it comes to, in need实在是向孩子们传达信号，积累基础的固定搭配吧，不要再畏惧任务型了！但是任务型的因果关系词，比如cause；让步关系词，比如despite还是要积
26、累，以增强反应速度，笔记题目也不少，容易来不及。6.写作着眼很小，就是大学生要不要找爸爸妈妈过高生活费这个问题，孩子们比较好选立场和理由，关键是语言表达一定要高大上，语句通顺但不做作，而且记得充分论证！ 南京市六校联合体第六部分 写作（共20分）阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇150词左右的文章。When in London by tube with mainly English passengers, we tend to sit together in total silence. However, when I traveled in China, people sitting next
27、to me often asked me about my age, salary, and even marriage. They were also willing to introduce themselves as much possible.On the first day I arrived in China, a Chinese professor invited me to dinner accompanied by his colleagues. After dinner, the professor paid for the meal alone, although the
28、 others also offered to pay for it. In Britain, we are accustomed to going “Dutch” while eating in a restaurant.One day, at a friends birthday party, I met with a foreign friend and offered my hand, meanwhile he bowed to me. We were both at a loss for a moment, but soon he seemed to be conscious of
29、something and shook my hand naturally.【写作内容】1用约30个词概述上述信息的主要内容；2列举1至2个中外文化差异的事例；3谈谈我们该如何正确对待文化差异的问题（不少于两点）。第六部分 写作（共20分）One possible version:Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world, where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The
30、 three experiences above are typical examples.Its not uncommon to witness peoples living habits, values along with customs, which vary widely throughout the world, have led to cultural misunderstandings. Take greetings as a case in point, Chinese people tend to say Have you eaten yet?, while in west
31、ern countries, topics are always related to occupations, families, weather and so on. Whats more, when receiving praise from others, foreigners usually show their gratitude with a smile. However, Chinese never fail to pretend to be humble, with a Just so-so in response, which is also a convincing pr
32、oof of cultural differences.When we are caught in a dilemma to communicate with foreigners, its high time that we hold an open mind to embrace different cultures, where, in turn, a critical eye is also needed. We ought to select the good essence of foreign cultures rather than blindly copy them. In
33、short, its everyone efforts towards the fusion(融合) of cultures that minimize the gap between people.江宁区第五部分：书面表达 (满分25分) 请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The electric door guard has replaced the traditional door lady in the students dormitory at a school in Shanghai, China. In the future, more electric
34、door guards will take the place of door ladies. The electric door guard operates under an IC card system, with students using IC cards to enter. Each resident student is issued an IC card with his/her personal information stored on it. Information like the card-holding students name, class, grade, a
35、nd even time of entry will be stored on their IC card. The door has also been equipped with a digital eye to take video 24 hours a day 7 days a week. With the new door guard already on duty, the students have began to talk about the pros and cons of the latest renovation（创新） to their dorm in communi
36、ty forums（论坛）. The schools authorities say the new system needs some time to improve and that students need time to get used to it. The school has said it will consider the problems brought along with the new door guard and attempt to solve them by other means. On the whole, the new system seems to
37、be good for students living in the dorm building.【写作内容】用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；用约120个单词阐述你对学生宿舍安装电动门卫的看法（赞成或反对），并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；不必谢标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。Featuring high technology, electric doors have replaced traditional door ladies and become a growing trend
38、. This has raised heated debate among students. Meanwhile, the authority highlights its advantages but also expresses concern, believing students need time to adapt.From my perspective, I am all for the installation / installment of door guard. Specifically, the new gadget /device can help regulate
39、students behavior by keeping track of the time of their entry or exit. Thus, it will nip students misbehaviors such as lateness, absenteeism and staying up late outside in the bud. It can also keep out unwanted guests and potential criminals as they do not carry a legitimate IC card, thereby minimiz
40、ing illegal behaviors and safeguarding students physical and property security.Having analysed its above merit, never can we overlook the doors lurking problems. For instance, students loss of cards might leak our privacy such as name, class or grade, yet, if taking good care of them, we might reduc
41、e this risk to aminimum level.溧水区第二高级中学、第三高级中学等三校联考第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。Li Hua: Mom, do you know our favorite film star has got divorced?Mom: I dont know. How did you get it?Li Hua: I read the news on my mobile phone. It is the first piece of news on all the major website
42、s.Mom: What a terrible thing! Why do the media always care about famous peoples personal life?Li Hua: Maybe they just want to attract peoples attention and thus become well-known.Mom: I think so. But as wise readers, we can learn to pick out what news we should read.Li Hua: In terms of educational f
43、unction, I think TV programs play a more important role.Mom: I cant agree more.Han Dan: Youre reading news online. Whats new today?Lin Tao: Hello, Han Dan. Nothing exciting.Han Dan: You mean.?Lin Tao: I dont understand why so much bad news is reported every day.Han Dan: Maybe some people prefer to e
44、xpose the sad aspect of others life. Lin Tao: You know. The more bad news we read, the more were influenced.Han Dan: You should try to avoid reading news of this kind, if youre easy to be infected.Lin Tao: I have tried, but its not so easy.Han Dan: Maybe our government should actively promote the re
45、port of some good news.Lin Tao: I think so. More positive energy of our society should be spread.【写作内容】1.以约30个单词概括上述两组对话的主要内容；2.以约120个单词谈谈你对“网络负面报道”的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。书面表达 参考范文More negative news is being reported online,
46、which will certainly have side effect on those who frequently surf the Internet, as a consequence, they should wisely choose what they read.People always blame the government for the booming negative news online, and so do I. On the one hand, I think our government should make laws to forbid reporte
47、rs to focus on such negative news, like famous peoples personal life, terrible accidents etc. On the other hand, positive news which can fill people with courage and kindness should be promoted. People should also learn to reject the negative news, which will help discourage the reporters. Whats mor
48、e, those famous and authoritative websites should make efforts to stop the negative news from being spread.With all these efforts, I hope more room will be made for the positive news. Therefore, people will be affected by the positive energy through such kind of news.武进区17校第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章.Forty-eight hours after the Brazilian government banned the burning of the Amazon rainforest, almos
