1、英语英语“四位一体四位一体”写作实验写作实验课课高中英语人教版必修4 Unit 1Step 1 Greetings and A short English Performance Step 2 Pre-writing1Check the meaning of these words.Which ones describe positive features of a city?attractive lively busy vast busy noisy peaceful poor dangerous modern smart wealthyindustrial dirty 2 Make the
2、 sentences with the following words 1.attractive 2.busy 3.vast 4.noisy 5.peaceful 6.poor 7.dangerous 8.modern 9.smart 10.wealthy 11.industrial 12.lively 13.dirtyStep 3 The introduction to the writing methods on page 18 in Students Book 3 of People Education Press.Main points:1Write notes about some
3、of the features 2Write sentences using your notes 3Use the link words such as“and”,“but”“so”“although”and so on.4Organize the sentences into paragraphs.5Check up if there are any mistakes in grammar in your writing.Step 4 Practice Writing:Making comparisons A Model Read this description comparing Sh
4、anghai with Guilin,then complete the blanks using the words in the box(on page 78 in the workbook)a peaceful city f a lot more trafficb very different g on the coastc southern China h high-rise buildingsd modern business i attractive e crowded port j larger population Although Shanghai and Guilin ar
5、e _cities,they are both very _and they are visited by a lot of tourists.Shanghai is _while Guilin is situated in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of _.Shanghai is a lively_,while Guilin is a small _in a beautiful mountainous region.The climate in both cities is warm and pleasant all year round but G
6、uilin has more rain than Shanghai.Shanghai has a much _than Guilin.It has nearly twenty million inhabitants while Guilin only has six hundred thousand.It is also a very crowded city with _.Guilin has fewer _than Shanghai.It is a beautiful historical city while Shanghai is a _city.Guilin has a histor
7、y of more than two thousand years while Shanghai started as a small fishing village in the eleventh century.Although Shanghai and Guilin are _b_ cities,they are both very _i_ and they are visited by a lot of tourists.Shanghai is _g_ while Guilin is situated in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of _c_
8、.Shanghai is a lively_e_,while Guilin is a small _a_ in a beautiful mountainous region.The climate in both cities is warm and pleasant all year round but Guilin has more rain than Shanghai.Shanghai has a much _j_than Guilin.It has nearly twenty million inhabitants while Guilin only has six hundred t
9、housand.It is also a very crowded city with _f_.Guilin has fewer _h_ than Shanghai.It is a beautiful historical city while Shanghai is a _d_city.Guilin has a history of more than two thousand years while Shanghai started as a small fishing village in the eleventh century.Step 5 Writing an advertisem
10、ent for your hometown 1 Try to sing this song for our hometown The Song for My HometownWho is singing songsMy hometownMore trees,more greenLaughing cows,sheepWelcome faraway dear friendsCome here,stay Passion like fireIn your sky freely flyingIn your motherland,singing happilyBirds,flowers,in a good
11、 moodSunshine peacefulA long,long desireChinese version是谁在唱歌，家乡新生活草木青青,春光融融，牛羊笑呵呵我们欢迎远方的朋友啊请到这里做客，热情似火在你的天上，自由地飞翔在你的地上，幸福地歌唱鸟语百花香，心情多舒畅和平的阳光，永恒的向往2 Write some ad-words or sentences for your hometown or your school.If possible you can add some songs and pictures on them.圣地延安再造秀美山川赶牲灵3Try to translate
12、 Chinese into English 我的家在延河岸边,绿色的风在黄土高坡上吹着,高亢的信天游在窑洞旁唱着。这里山清水秀，空气新鲜，天蓝如洗。环境优美，资源丰富。石油如泉涌，煤炭似黑金。红色旅游传天下，人民友好情谊长。欢迎远方的好朋友来这里旅游、做客、谈生意。我骄傲我是延安人，延安因你而精彩！参考词汇：high loessial slope 黄土高坡 the Red Revolution Tour 红色旅游 Xintianyou,the folk songs of northern Shaanxi 信天游 loud and sonorous 高亢的 cave-house 窑洞 gush
13、喷涌English version Para.1 My hometown is situated on the Yanan River.The green wind is blowing on the high loessial slope while loud and sonorous Xintianyou,the folk songs of northern Shaanxi are being sung near the cave-houses.Para.2 Here,the mountains are green;the rivers are clear;the air is fresh
14、.And the sky is so blue that it looks as if it were washed by human beings.As a result,the environment is very beautiful and pleasant to live in.Our hometown is rich in natural resources such as oil and coal.Look!The oil is gushing like the spring,and the coal looks like the black gold.The Red Revol
15、ution Tour is well-known all over the world.The inhabitants are very friendly to the friends from other places，so they will cherish the friendship forever.Para.3 Dear friends,welcome to here to be guests,travel and do business!I am proud of being a person of Yanan.Yanan is becoming more glorious because of your coming!Homework Writing an advertisement for your school.My School
