1、Developing ideas writing Unit 3 The world meets China目录contentsPre-writingLanguage pointsWhile-writingHomeworkPost-writingIIIIIIPre-writingIRead the email and answer the questions.Pre-writingFrom:SelenaTo:JiangSubject:Visit to the USDear Jiang,Great to hear youre coming to the US!I hope I can convin
2、ce you to stop by and visit us in New York.Therere so many things to see and do here in the Big Apple.It would take a lifetime to list them all!使确信；使信服；说服 Pre-writingBut knowing you as I do,Id suggest walking through Midtown Manhattan.Its one of the most popular tourist attractions in the US and jus
3、t cant be missed!Broadway district with its cafs,street performers and enormous and colorful signs really captures New Yorks loud spirit!As Broadway is the heart of the American theater industry,its at night when it truly comes alive.曼哈顿中城区 百老汇区 极大的；巨大的；捕捉到纽约的灵魂 活跃起来Read the email and answer the que
4、stions.Broadway is famous for its big theaters,showing Shakespeare,modern drama,dance shows or musicals take your pick!With your love of singing and interest in amateur dramatics,Id recommend a musical.Its a moving and intense experience that Im sure you would love a bit like Peking Opera!Quite a fe
5、w musicals are based on classic stories like Les Misrables or Peter Pan,and they might even inspire you to read the books,too!任你挑选 业余的 强烈的 悲惨世界 彼得潘Read the email and answer the questions.Pre-writingPre-writingMy big news is that were all thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacatio
6、n.Were looking for a combination of fun and traditional culture.Can you recommend a place of cultural highlights?See you soon!Selena 结合；联合；合并 文化亮点Read the email and answer the questions.1.Which place in New York did Selena recommend that Jiang should visit?She recommended that Jiang should walk thro
7、ugh Midtown Manhattan,where Broadway district is situated.Read the email and answer the questions.Pre-writing2.What is special about it?Broadway district with its cafs,street performers and enormous and colorful signs,is especially famous for its theaters which show shakespeare,modern drama,dance sh
8、ows or musicals.Read the email and answer the questions.Pre-writingWhat does an email usually include?an emailSender&RecipientSubjectGreetingBodyClosingPre-writingThink about what will be organized in an email.Pay attention to the structure of an email.SenderFrom:SelenaTo:JiangRecipientPre-writingSu
9、bjectVisit to the USGreetingDear Jiang,Think about what will be organized in an email.Pay attention to the structure of an email.Pre-writingBodyRecommended Place:Reasons for recommendation:What it is like:Think about what will be organized in an email.Pay attention to the structure of an email.Pre-w
10、riting.visit us in New York.Id suggest walking through Midtown Manhattan.Broadway district.Id recommend a musical.Body:Recommended PlacePre-writingPre-writingBroadway district with its cafs,street performers and enormous and colorful signs really captures New Yorks loud spirit!Broadway is famous for
11、 its big theaters,showing Shakespeare,modern drama,dance shows or musicals take your pick!Its a moving and intense experience that Im sure you would love a bit like Peking Opera!Body:What it is likePre-writing.As Broadway is the heart of the American theater industry,its at night when it truly comes
12、 alive.Body:Reasons for recommendation.Quite a few musicals are based on classic stories like Les Misrables or Peter Pan,and they might even inspire you to read the books,too!Think about what will be organized in an email.Pay attention to the structure of an email.ClosingMy big news is that were all
13、 thinking about doing a big trip in China in the winter vacation.Can you recommend a place of cultural highlights?See you soon!SelenaPre-writingWhile-writingIIRecommended Place:Reasons for recommendation:While-writingWhat it is like:Plan your reply to Selena,suggesting a place she can visit in China
14、 and make notes.Body:Recommended PlaceWhile-writingChongqing is located in the south-west of China.While-writingChongqing is a hilly city with a unique landscape.The best way to travel around in Chongqing is by light rail.Chongqing is also the perfect spot to see the amazingly clear line where the e
15、merald waters of the Jialing River and those of the sandy Yangtze River meet.Body:What it is likeWhile-writingThe city is beautiful at night with its shining lights reflected on the rivers.The most spectacular nighttime views are from one of the surrounding mountain tops.Body:What it is likeChongqin
16、g will give you an experience of urban Chinadifferent to that of any otherChinese city.Most of the light rail is above ground,so its a great way to get a feel for the place.Body:Reasons for recommendationWhile-writingWhile-writingYou absolutely mustnt miss out on Chongqing food its spicy,yes,but I p
17、romise that after trying our local hot pot,youll be hooked.There are loads of other things to see and Id be very happy to show youaround！Body:Reasons for recommendationPost-writingIII Work in pairs.Make improvements to your partners writing and see whether the language style is consistent.Post-writi
18、ngQuestions Your evaluation EvaluatorDoes the email include the key points?4 2 0Is the email organized properly and smoothly?3 2 1How is the language?12 8 4 2How is the handwriting?3 1 -1Paper design3 1 -1TOTAL MARKPost-writing:EvaluationDear Selena,Thank you for all your recommendations,which have
19、definitely inspired me to include New York in my trip.I cant wait to see you there!Im so excited to hear that youre coming to China!I can easily suggest places for you to visit because there are so many interesting ones.First of all,I must recommend my own city,Chongqing.Located in the south-west,it
20、 would give you an experience of urban China different to that of any other Chinese city.明确地；确切地；一定地；肯定地坐落于Post-writingChongqing is a hilly city with a unique landscape,so the best way to travel around is by light rail.Most of the light rail is above ground,so its a great way to get a feel for the p
21、lace.Chongqing is also the perfect spot to see the amazingly clear line where the emerald waters of the Jialing River and those of the sandy Yangtze River meet.The city is beautiful at night,with its shining lights reflected on the rivers.The most spectacular nighttime views are from one of the surr
22、ounding mountain tops.山城风景；风光；景色；轻轨祖母绿；绿宝石；壮观的；惊人的；Post-writingLast but not least,you absolutely mustnt miss out on Chongqing food its spicy,yes,but I promise that after trying our local hot pot,youll be hooked.There are loads of other things to see and Id be very happy to show you around！See you soon in New York!Yours,Jiang 香料味浓的 火锅迷住Post-writing HomeworkPolish your email and hand it in.
