1、Section Writing Workshop描述事件本单元的写作任务是写一篇事件描述类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主,要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言,使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。一、基本框架1开头交代清楚事件的背景。2主体主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。3结尾呼应标题,发表感想、愿望等。二、注意事项1标题:如有标题,标题一定要明确,能点明事件或主题。2人称:通常用第一人称和第三人称。3时态:在叙事过程中,一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时,常用过去进行时,这样显得更加生动形象。一、节日庆祝类常用词语
2、1hold v举办2celebrate v.庆祝3honor v.纪念4last v.持续5gather v.聚集6festival n.节日7celebration n.庆祝8origin n.起源9belief n.信仰;信念10decoration n.装饰物11in memory/honor of 怀念;追念12dress up 盛装打扮13date back to 追溯到14take part in/participate in 参加15set off fireworks 放烟花16enjoy the moon 赏月二、节日庆祝类常用句式1In America,Mothers Day
3、 is often celebrated by giving mothers a day off.在美国,母亲节常以给母亲放一天假的形式来庆祝。2Some festivals are so fun that they are very popular with the people of all ages.一些节日很有趣,它们受到男女老少的欢迎。3The most obvious example is probably Christmas,which is celebrated around the world.最明显的例子也许是圣诞节,它在世界各地都庆祝。4As one of the wor
4、lds oldest holidays,Halloween is widely celebrated in many countries.作为世界上最古老的节日之一,万圣节在许多国家被广泛庆祝。5I like the Spring Festival,because the Spring Festival is a family reunion festival.我喜欢春节,因为春节是个亲人团聚的节日。6People not only enjoy the full table of food,but also enjoy the happy atmosphere.人们既是享受满桌的佳肴盛馔,也是
5、享受那份快乐的气氛。7Teachers as well as students in our school are gathered in the gymnasium.我们全校的师生都相聚在体育馆。8This years New Years Day is full of festive joy and pride of youth.今年的新年充满了节日的快乐和青春的自豪。假如你是李华,上周日你校举办了建校20周年纪念晚会。请你给美国的朋友Mary写一封电子邮件,向她介绍本次晚会的情况。要点包括:时间:上周日地点:会议厅人物:所有的教师和学生以及部分毕业生活动内容:校长做演讲(make a sp
6、eech);欣赏优美的表演(performances);唱校歌(sing our Alma Mater)。第一步审题谋篇体裁事件描述类记叙文人称第一人称为主时态一般过去时为主框架第一段晚会总体介绍第二段描述晚会过程第三段描写个人感受第二步要点翻译1上周日,我校在会议厅举办了建校二十周年纪念晚会。(不定式作目的状语)Last Sunday,our school held a big party in the meeting hall_.2晚会一开始,校长做了重要演讲。这使得我们为学校感到骄傲。At the beginning of the party,our headmaster _It _.t
7、o celebrate the twentieth anniversary of our schools foundingmade an important speechmade us feel proud of our school3之后,往届毕业生代表们演唱了歌曲来表达他们对母校的爱。(不定式作目的状语)After that,some representatives of the former graduates sang a song _.4晚会最后,所有的人一起演唱我们的校歌,将晚会推上了高潮。At the end of the party,_our Alma Mater.It _ a
8、 climax.to express their love of their old schoolall the performers sangbrought the party to第三步词句升级1用定语从句改写要点2 _ _2用定语从句改写要点4 _ _At the beginning of the party,our headmaster made an important speech,which made us feel proud of our school.At the end of the party,all the performers sang our Alma Mater
9、,which brought the party to a climax.第四步连句成篇Dear Mary,Last Sunday,our school held a big party in the meeting hall to celebrate the twentieth anniversary of our schools founding.All the teachers and students as well as some former graduates took part in the party.The party started at 8 am and lasted
10、till 11 am.At the beginning of the party,our headmaster made an important speech,which made us feel proud of our school.Then the teachers and students gave interesting and wonderful performances.My classmates and I performed the crosstalk.After that,some representatives of the former graduates sang
11、a song to express their love of their old school.At the end of the party,all the performers sang our Alma Mater,which brought the party to a climax.We all enjoyed the party very much and had a good time.Yours,Li Hua上周日举办了毕业十周年庆祝活动,会上邀请了老师,提供了各种食物,玩得很开心。展开你的想象,将过程描述一下。词数100左右。参考词汇:boiled sweet dumpli
12、ng煮了的元宵;turkey火鸡;snack小吃;hot pot火锅;fried fish炸鱼;alcohol酒【参考范文】Last Sunday we held a party in celebration of our tenth anniversary of graduation.Before it,we put out our warm welcome mat to our teachers who attended it and they offered their congratulations and thanked us for the opportunity on such
13、a good occasion.Then the party began on time.At it were served boiled sweet dumplings,turkey,snacks,hot pot,breast,fried fish and alcohol as well.Though it was in a mess,we all felt happy.输入好词佳句.词汇积累微技能动作和神情描写之二1climb v攀登,爬2spread v.伸开,展开3run v.跑4smell v.闻,嗅5water v.流口水6listen impatiently 不耐烦地听7pace
14、 back and forth 来回踱步8walk across a street 步行穿过马路9walk arm in arm 挽臂而行10walk through the pouring rain 在倾盆大雨中走11wander into the woods 漫步向森林走去 12wander over the countryside 在乡间漫步13sing one s own praise 自吹自擂14bear all the blame 承担全部责任.佳句背诵1He put/held his head in his hands,greatly annoyed.他双手抱头,十分生气。2He
15、 straightened up and looked at me,open-mouthed.他直起身子,目瞪口呆地看着我。输出美言亮句完成句子1My mouth _when I smelled the food.闻到食物的香味,我开始流口水了。2She _to say something.她张开嘴要说什么。3She took the childs hand and _ 她拉住孩子的手帮着他爬上台阶。started wateringopened her mouthhelped him climb the steps4They _along the path.他们手拉手沿着小路走。5She _ on his shoulder.她将头靠在他的肩膀上。walked hand in handrested her head