1、1Irelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”an
2、d its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.And down by the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the s
3、weet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.With all this beauty,it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music,dancing,and dining.To have a chance of experiencing this,stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or
4、 a local beer.Better yet,enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.If you are lucky,you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing,too.And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face,you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.Beautiful Ireland
5、 and Its TraditionsandWhats the most appealing words/expressions in the topic sentence?Irelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.Irelands beautiful countryside always has a great influence on its people and traditions.VSWhy?Opening:make the reader e
6、ager to read your writing3Irelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landsca
7、pe of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.And down by the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your
8、skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.With all this beauty,it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music,dancing,and dining.To have a chance of experiencing this,stop by a village pub and rela
9、x with a glass of wine or a local beer.Better yet,enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.If you are lucky,you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing,too.And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face,you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs fir
10、st-hand.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties Beautiful Ireland and Its Traditionsandflowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songWith all this beauty,it is n
11、ot surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music,dancing,and dining.have a chance of experiencing this,stop by a villagetransitional sentenceIts TraditionsBeautiful Ireland【】【】SensesSensesPlacesPlacesDescriptiveDescriptive WordsWordssightgreen countiesfeast for the eyesT
12、he peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.What can you get for five senses?In which place?What can you get for five senses?In which place?down by the seain the mountainsgreen countiesa
13、true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlethe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song placeWh
14、ich description impress you most?Why？hearingsighttouch&smellOn a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.personificationWhat can you get for five senses?In which place?down by the s
15、eain the mountainsgreen countiesa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlethe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new d
16、ay with their morning song placemetaphor（暗喻）（暗喻）;specific wordsmetaphor&personification（拟人）（拟人）personification;specific wordsa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlesightthe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfee
17、l the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songtouch&smellhearing3)enjoy some _and the_4)introduce yourself to _1)stop by a _and relax with _or _.What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and culture?villag
18、e puba glass of winea local beerdancingtraditional Irish Beef Stewtraditional musica friendly face2)enjoy a delicious _The local culture and customs are something that needs to be _ first-hand.experiencedWhat can you get for five senses?In which place?down by the seain the mountainsa village pub gre
19、en countiesa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlethe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning
20、 songrelax with a glass of wine or a local beer;enjoy traditional Irish Beef Stew,music and dancing placemetaphor（暗喻）（暗喻）;specific wordsmetaphor&personification（拟人）（拟人）personification;specific wordsspecific examplesa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlesi
21、ghtthe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songrelax with a glass of wine or a local beer;enjoy traditional Irish Beef Stew,music and
22、 dancingtouch&smellhearingTaste&hearingEast or West,Home is the best.Beautiful and Slow-pace LinhaiLinhai How to make the description more detailed and vivid?Linhai is a beautiful and slow-pace city.generalgeneral-add sensory details-use specific words-use figure of speech(修辞)-add specific examplesd
23、etailed How to organize the description?-time order or spatial（空间）order-transitional sentence and wordsWhat can we experience in Linhai?sight&hearingtaste&smellSight sight&touch the green fielddotted with little birdsthe purling sound of stream;潺潺溪水声spicy but tasty fried buns and roast buns of local
24、 flavor（风味）In the East Lake ParkPeople；the East Lake Parkthe blinking colourful light;breeze(微风);street food stallAt night by the Lingjiang rivercountrysidespecific wordsPeople who are doing Taiji in the parkMetaphor(比喻比喻)&personification（拟人）（拟人）1.Is the writing well-organized and what order does th
25、e writer use?2.Is the description detailed and vivid?What words or sentences impress you most and why?3.Can you find any grammar mistakes?Writing and SharingLinhai,located in the eastern Zhejiang province,is a beautiful and slow-pace city.The beautiful and peaceful landscape offers something for dif
26、ferent senses.In the morning of the countryside,the green field is dotted with birds.The tweets of the birds and the purling sound of the clean stream make up the song of nature.On the street of downtown,you will be stopped by a street food stalls for its scent of local fried buns and roast buns.Not
27、 far away is the East Lake park,where you will find people who are doing Taiji.If you are interested,you can join them and experience the mix of history and tradition.At night by the Lingjiang River,the blinking colorful lights are scattered(散落)on the surface of the river.With the breeze from the river touching your cheek,you can enjoy the view and feel the slow-pace life.One Sample
