1、Henglin Middle SchoolGiving a helping hand!Who?What problems?How?I need your help!We dont know each other well.Can you be active in class?Can you put up your hands when you know something?Can you answer the questions loudly when you answer questions?Who?What problems?How?Children in the war need our
2、 help!They lost their homes and schools.We can donate money to them.We can also help build their homes and schools again.We can send good doctors and medicine to them.Daily Report Time！Homework checkingWho?What problems?How?earthquake survivorsthe elderly people children in poor areas a boy with a s
3、erious diseaseHelp is needed!Life can be saved!1.Who needs help?2.Why is he in hospital?3 Why cant he have an operation right away?4.How can we help him?Xiao Wei needs help.Because he has a blood disease.Becuase his family is very poor.We can donate money to him.Read Xiao Weis story and answer:Many
4、hands make light work!The students in Jinlang Middle School have written a letter to ask all the students in Taicang to help Xiao Wei.Thank you for your help!Please donate some money to Xiao Wei.Many hands make light work.If everyone can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Xiao Wei is a Grade 9
5、 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because he has a serious blood disease.He must have an operation as soon as possible.The cost of the operation is 300,000 yuan.But his family is very poor.They dont have enough money.He may lose his life.Please help him.Thank
6、sThe person How to helpProblemsLetter 1Tip 1:Organize the ideas in good order.Xiao Wei is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because he has a serious blood disease.He must have an operation as soon as possible.The cost of the operation is 300,000 yuan
7、.But his family is very poor.They dont have enough money.He may lose his life.Please help him.Please donate some money to Xiao Wei.Many hands make light work.If everyone can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help!ThanksThe person How to helpProblemsTip 1:Organize the ideas
8、in good order.A sick boy need our help.His name is Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He had a serious blood disease and have in hospital for a month.He need an operation as soon as possible.But it will spend 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents is too poor to pay for the opera
9、tion.It is very necessary for he to have it.Or he may lose his life.I hope you to help the boy.Please donate some money to him.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.Letter 2order?mistakes？A sick boy need our help.His name is Xi
10、ao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He had a serious blood disease and have in hospital for a month.He need an operation as soon as possible.But it will spend 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents is too poor to pay for the operation.It is very necessary for he to have it.Or he may
11、 lose his life.I hope you to help the boy.Please donate some money to him.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.needshashas been inneedscostAny mistakes？Any mistakes？A sick boy need our help.His name is Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9
12、 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He had a serious blood disease and have in hospital for a month.He need an operation as soon as possible.But it will spend 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents is too poor to pay for the operation.It is very necessary for he to have it.Or he may lose his life.I hope
13、you to help the boy.Please donate some money to him.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.needshashas been inneedscostarehimI hope you can help him.Tip 2:Pay attention to：tense(时态时态)collocation(搭配搭配)subject-verb agreement（主谓一致（
14、主谓一致)A sick boy needs our help.His name is Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has a serious blood disease and has been in hospital for a month.He needs an operation as soon as possible.But it will cost 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are too poor to pay for the operatio
15、n.It is very necessary for him to have it.Or he may lose his life.I hope you can help the boy.Please donate some money to him.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.tense(时态时态)subject-verb agreement（主谓一致）（主谓一致）collocation(搭配搭配)A
16、 sick boy needs our help.The boy is called Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because of a serious blood disease.He needs an operation right away,but it will cost 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.As a result,they dont hav
17、e enough money for such an operation.However,its important for him to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he maylose his life.I hope you can help him.For example,you can donate some money.Whats more,you can also visit him to give him confidence.Many hands make light work.If more people
18、can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.Letter 3order?Mistakes？connecting words(连词连词)various sentences(多样的句型多样的句型)A sick boy needs our help.The boy is called Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because of a s
19、erious blood disease.He needs an operation right away,but it will cost 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.As a result,they dont have enough money for such an operation.However,its important for him to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I hope you can h
20、elp him.For example,you can donate some money.Whats more,you can also visit him to give him confidence.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.Tip 3:Connecting words(连词连词)first;second;third.A sick boy needs our help.The boy is ca
21、lled Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because of a serious blood disease.He needs an operation right away,but it will cost 300,000 yuan.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.As a result,they dont have enough money for such an operation.H
22、owever,its important for him to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I hope you can help him.For example,you can donate some money.Whats more,you can also visit him to give him confidence.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get we
23、ll soon.Thank you for your help.Various sentences(多样的句型多样的句型)A sick boy needs our help.The boy is called Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because of a serious blood disease.He needs an operation right away,but it will cost 300,000 yua
24、n.Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.As a result,they dont have enough money for such an operation.However,its important for him to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I hope you can help him.For example,you can donate some money.Whats more,you can also visit him to
25、 give him confidence.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.Its+adj.+to doTransitional sentences(过渡句)Old sayings(谚语)If clause从句 Various sentences(多样的句型多样的句型)compound sentences(复合句)Write another letter to help more people.作文一：作文一
26、：假如你在报纸上读到一篇关于四川地震的报道，有所叫育才中学育才中学的学校在地震中倒塌。请写一封倡议信向同学们发出号召一起来帮助育才中学的孩子们育才中学的孩子们。提示：1 孩子们就读于育才中学，学习都很刻苦。2 地震中失去学校，没地方学习。大部分孩子家里穷，没钱买文具(stationery)和课外书。了解外面的世界很困难。3 我们可以.(自拟2-3点)4 一起帮忙，万分感谢。作文二：假如你在报纸上读到一篇关于一个独居老人（an elderly people）的报到。请写一封倡议信信向同学们发出号召帮助他。提示：1 王大爷，80岁，独居。2 眼睛看不清，读书看报困难。年纪大，不能干家务活，不能外出
27、购物。3 我们可以.(自拟2-3点）4 一起帮忙，万分感谢。Evaluation Standards(评价标准评价标准)（每条得分为（每条得分为1-5分）分）1 Organize your ideas in good order.（合理组织结构）2 Pay attention to tense,collocation and subject-verb agreement.（注意到时态，搭配和主谓一致）3 Use some connecting words and various sentences.(使用连词和多样的句型)4 Cover all the information.(涵盖所有信息点
28、)Everyone can give a helping hand to make the world better!A sick boy needs our help.The boy is called Xiao Wei.He is a Grade 9 student in Taicang No.3 Middle School.He has been in hospital for a month because of a serious blood disease.He needs an operation right away,but it will cost 300,000 yuan.
29、Xiao Weis parents are both farmers.As a result,they dont have enough money for such an operation.However,its important for him to have the operation as soon as possible.Otherwise,he may lose his life.I hope you can help him.For example,you can donate some money.Whats more,you can also visit him to g
30、ive him confidence.Many hands make light work.If more people can give a helping hand,he may get well soon.Thank you for your help.too.toIts+adj.+to dotransitional sentences(过渡句)Old sayings(谚语)If clause从句enough.toso.that.Various sentences(多样的句型多样的句型)compound sentences(复合句)He needs an operation.It will cost 300,000 yuan.True happiness comes from helping others.真正的快乐来自于帮助别人。真正的快乐来自于帮助别人。It is better to give than to take.施比受更有福施比受更有福.Good things come in small packages.勿以善小而不为勿以善小而不为 1 Write a letter to help people.2 Read other letters from your group members.
