1、命题探索命题探索典例剖析典例剖析目录写作练兵写作练兵 分析浙江近分析浙江近5年中考书面表达可知，针对年中考书面表达可知，针对“家庭、朋友与周家庭、朋友与周围的人围的人”这一话题共考查这一话题共考查1次：次：2016嘉兴要求以嘉兴要求以“我们做什么能我们做什么能够让家庭更幸福够让家庭更幸福”为话题写一篇短文。为话题写一篇短文。再结合全国近年中考真题可知，该话题通常还有以下考查再结合全国近年中考真题可知，该话题通常还有以下考查角度：角度：介绍自己的老师、朋友、同学、家人等。如：介绍自己的老师、朋友、同学、家人等。如：2019滨州，滨州，2017白银，白银，2017绥化等；绥化等；介绍自己与家人、朋
2、友之间发生的事。如：介绍自己与家人、朋友之间发生的事。如：2017重庆重庆B卷；卷；感恩他人。如：感恩他人。如：2019自贡，自贡，2017齐齐哈尔。齐齐哈尔。命题探索（2016嘉兴）嘉兴）英语课上，你们开展了一次以英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。投稿。审主题：我们做什么能够让家庭更幸福审主题：我们做什么能
3、够让家庭更幸福审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时典例剖析典例剖析典例剖析典例剖析审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称注意：注意：(1)短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈谈谈自己的想法。自己的想法。(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(3)词数：词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：短文首句：In our English class,we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happi
4、er place.典例剖析【列提纲、写句子列提纲、写句子】典例剖析In our English class,we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place._【成篇章成篇章】典例剖析1.We get together more.We understand each other better.(用用the more.the better升格升格)_2.They meet problems.We can do something to encourage them.(用用when和和 cheer up升格升
5、格)1._2.3.I believe we can do much for family.Were young.(用用though升升格格)_【句子升格句子升格】典例剖析 In our English class,we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.Weve shared different ideas.Some say its necessary to spend more time with family.The more we get together,the better we wi
6、ll understand each other.Some believe family members should share happiness and worries.When they meet problems,we can do something to cheer them up.Home is also the first place for us to get help and support.【范文升格范文升格】典例剖析Others think its important to remember familys birthdays and prepare small pr
7、esents to show our love.I believe we can do much for family though were young.Even the smallest thing like helping with housework can help make a happier home.典例剖析(2019宁波宁波)回顾初中三年，有许多事令人难忘。校英语报回顾初中三年，有许多事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你选择选择其中一个话题其中一个话题，并结合具体事例，用英语
8、写一封信表达你对某，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。要点如下：要点如下：写作练兵写作练兵注意：注意：(1)短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当拓展；短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当拓展；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：词数：80100。书信格式已给出；。书信格式已给出；(4)首句供参考：首句供参考：Looking back on the past three years,Id like to say.写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵Dear Alice，
9、Looking back on the past three years,Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at English.I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class.Once I did very badly in an English test,and I lost heart.However,you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.写作练兵 Since then,I have worked harder and made great progress.I feel lucky to be your student._Yours,Li Hua写作练兵
