1、第4讲润色习作的四种策略从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出,恰当选用贴恰当选用贴切、地道的高级词汇句式对提高书面表达的得分非常切、地道的高级词汇句式对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇句式的词汇句式,恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通表达习语等来代替普通表达,可以提高文章的得分档次可以提高文章的得分档次,为为写作增添色彩。写作增添色彩。1.地道的英语词汇地道的英语词汇(1)The system has been designed
2、_ the digital resources of the library.The system has been designed _ the digital resources of the library.to provide studentswithto give students quickand easy access to(2)The lecture is _ their skills of English learning.The lecture _ their skills of English learning.to let students be interested
3、in Englishand improveis aimed at arousing students interest inEnglish as well as improving(3)That evening,there will be _ shows of many local operas,which might be _.That evening,there will be _ shows of _ local operas,which might be _.wonderfulenjoyablemarvelousvariousa great visualand auditory fea
4、st for us(4)_;cellphones are _._,cellphones _.Peoples living standards are improvingmore and more popularWith the improvement of peoples living standardsare flooding into our life2.丰富的句型结构丰富的句型结构(1)Because the Earth Day was coming,our school has put up many posters to appeal to us to join in the act
5、ion for a greener earth._,our school has put up many posters to appeal to us to join in the action for a greener earth.As the Earth Day was drawing near/As the EarthDay was approaching/As the Earth Day was aroundthe corner(2)Could we go to the bookshop this Sunday?_ go to the bookshop this Sunday?Wo
6、uld it be convenient for you if we(3)You will hold an art exhibition and are collecting suggestions about it._ and you are collecting suggestions about it.Ive learnt that an art exhibition is to be held(4)I think holding the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum is better than in community libraries._ t
7、he art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.Personally speaking,its more advisable to hold(5)You can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel._ you can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel.I wonder whether youd be so kind that(6)I deliver a farewell speech
8、here on behalf of the students in our school.I think its a great honor._ a farewell speech here on behalf of the students in our school.I feel it a great honor to deliver(7)There is a saying:Rome wasnt built in a day._,“Rome wasnt built in a day”.As a proverb goes3.多样的表达方式多样的表达方式(1)Ive received your
9、 letter.You say that you are anxious about the coming Chinese speech contest.Im writing to offer you some advice._ you are anxious about the coming Chinese speech contest,Im writing to offer you some advice.Having received your letter saying that(2)I was motivated by the experience to have an open h
10、eart of learning.Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about._,Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about.Motivated by the experience to have an open heartof learning(3)Our school life is busy.We should never forget to spare some time to do exercise and build our body._,we sho
11、uld never forget to spare some time to do exercise and build our body.Busy as our school life is(4)We experience failures.We should believe in ourselves and keep trying._,we should believe in ourselves and keep trying.Whatever failures we experience(5)You should know compromise isnt shameful.On the
12、contrary,it may show how modest you are._ should know compromise isnt shameful.On the contrary,it may show how modest you are.It is you who(6)Volunteering is a good method.It is beneficial to both the schools construction and the individuals development._,volunteering is a good method,_beneficial to
13、 not only the schools construction but also the individuals development.Admittedlywhich is4.自然的顺承衔接自然的顺承衔接(1)明承明承:On the one hand,we improve our skills by practice.On the other hand,we can cultivate our sense of cooperation and mutual help by participating in games.暗接暗接:Apart from practicing regular
14、ly,we take part in some matches on behalf of our school.By participating in such activities,we broaden our horizons and strengthen our sense of cooperation.(2)明承明承:Firstly we held a meeting to discuss the procedures,and then we asked some students talented in computer to program the video.After that
15、,we played the video in the school lecture hall.暗接暗接:We began our work with a meeting discussing the procedures of making it.When all the work was done,we invited some gifted students to design the video.To our great joy,the video turned out to be a huge success.【技法点金】【技法点金】巧妙润色妙笔生花巧妙润色妙笔生花1.高级句式使用三
16、原则高级句式使用三原则:高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇和高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇和多种表达方式。但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏多种表达方式。但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难、古怪的词汇难、古怪的词汇,而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇。在使用多种句式时词汇。在使用多种句式时,应遵循以下原则应遵循以下原则:高级但不高级但不造作造作,多变但不离谱多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。平时注重有意识复杂但不晦涩。平时注重有意识地积累和背诵原汁原味的
17、英语句子或文章地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子或文章,有意识地尝有意识地尝试使用或模仿。试使用或模仿。2.注重行文逻辑两连接注重行文逻辑两连接:对于连贯、自然的表达对于连贯、自然的表达,要注重作文的逻辑要注重作文的逻辑,以及学会以及学会明承与暗接两种连接方式。明承需要有大量连接词积明承与暗接两种连接方式。明承需要有大量连接词积累累,能够在合适的地方借助连接词实现明确过渡能够在合适的地方借助连接词实现明确过渡;而暗而暗接可以通过代词或者上一句话提过的事物等进行衔接可以通过代词或者上一句话提过的事物等进行衔接。如接。如,上一句是上一句是,Young adults may never return t
18、otheir studies or find it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.下一句是下一句是,They may think it is better to continue in a job.其中其中,“they”作为代作为代词指代上一句的词指代上一句的“young adults”,实现了逻辑上紧密实现了逻辑上紧密的承接。再如的承接。再如,When AI spreads in manufacturing companies,it will be unnecessary to employ humanworkers any more.Problem of unemployment can cause.其中其中,“employ”作为动词在上一句中出现作为动词在上一句中出现,紧紧接着下一句就使用其名词形式接着下一句就使用其名词形式“unemployment”进行进行承接承接,柔和地完成了文意的递进柔和地完成了文意的递进,相比连接词更加巧妙、相比连接词更加巧妙、自然。自然。
