1、Introduce someone you admireThe Man Who Changed our Understanding of the UniversePara.1 A.His early life and education Para.2 B.Einsteins deathPara.3 C.The greatness of Albert EinsteinPara.4 D.His work experience and achievementsPara.5 E.His mid-life crisisPara.6 F.His appearance and personalityBorn
2、 in Germany 18791896195519331895Failed to enter universityEntered university1900Graduated from university1902190519221909Took a job as a clerk Earned a doctorate in physics Entered research full-time at a universityAwarded the Nobel Prize for PhysicsFled GermanyPassed away1.In which aspect did Alber
3、t Einstein make great achievements?A.Music.B.Medicine.C.Physics.D.Chemistry.2.We can infer from the passage thatA.Einstein was a genius as well as a indifferent figureB.Einstein did well in the entrance exam for the first timeC.Einstein used to work as a clerk in the USAD.Einstein didnt care about h
4、is appearance or being famous3.Which of the following about Einstein is TRUE according to the text?A.Once the gentle genius was not so good at studying.B.He managed to enter university in Switzerland at 16.C.He was born in west Germany on 14 March 1879.D.He didnt obtain exceptional scores in maths a
5、nd physics.4.What is the purpose of the author in writing this passage?A.To introduce Einsteins contributions to the world.B.To introduce Einsteins winding life in Germany.C.To show that Einstein is a genius in physics and maths.D.To let the world know all about Einstein by his life and achievements
6、.Read and Think:Organization TitlePara1:Brief IntroductionPara 2:Educational experiencePara 3:Work experience&achievement Para 4:Mid-lifePara 5:Appearance&anecdotesPara 6:DeathLeadingBodyEndingIdentityGreat-ness Einstein,who is the greatest scientists,is considered one of the smartest men who ever l
7、ived.He made numerous contributions toThe most well-known,famousPersonalitiesa genius,courageous,kind,loved by many people,funny,sometime forgot things,humorousEducat-ion managed to doOut of a strong passion for he continued earning a doctorate inAchieve-mentspublished four extraordinary physics pap
8、ers.became famous as Isaac NewtonHe was awarded the Nobel PrizeHe continued to make great contributions inAppear-ance Slightly odd-looking,had a thick moustache and long white hairWhat rhetorical devices are used in the passage?Rhetorical DeviceExample Analogy(类比)Metaphor(暗喻)Simile(明喻)Personificatio
9、n(拟人)Euphemism(委婉语）Following this,he gradually became famous throughout the world _.Einstein,who was Jewish,found _ closed to him.He had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes _ _.Einstein _.as the new Isaac Newtonthe doors ofhad just received an electric shockstood on endhad passed a
10、wayacademic institutionsas though heAn introductionBodyEndingStructureBeginningContentName,identity,basic information Achievement,experienceDetails and examplesInfluence and evaluation Structure of an introduction to someone you admireHomework Introduce a person you admireContentDetailName and Ident
11、ityWhat does he/she do?What is his/her achievement?AppearanceWhats his/her most distinctive feature in terms of appearance?PersonalityWhat kind of person is he/she?(facts&opinions)Impressive storyfive elements:what/when/where/who/howReason for his/her greatnessWhats his/her influence/contribution?My
12、 feeling/commentsHow do I feel about him/her?StructureHow will I develop my writing?（order）What will I focus on in each paragraph?(topic)Language featureWhat words and expressions can be used?What rhetorical devices will I use?致力于 决心做 有的天赋 获得.奖 被誉为 作为.而著名 做.工作An introduction to someone you admirebig
13、 events,achievements&influencedevote oneself/ones life to(doing)sth=be devoted tomake up ones mind/be determined to dohave a gift/talent for=have gifted/talented forbe awarded.prize for./obtain/receive.prize for.be honoured as.be known aswork as介绍人物生平和成就时，介绍人物生平和成就时，按时间顺序和评述性按时间顺序和评述性语言刻画人物一生，语言刻画人物
14、一生，句式结构可以选择定语从句、主语从句、并列句、非谓语动词短句式结构可以选择定语从句、主语从句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等。语和倒装等。国内外著名的 为树立好榜样 高度赞扬 为作出巨大贡献 An introduction to someone you admireevaluationl be famous/well-known at home and abroadl set a good example to sb/set sb a good examplel speak/think highly ofl make great/numerous contributions toHomew
15、ork主题写作-卓有成就的人物1.写作任务假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物,请你给Jim 回复,内容包括:(1)该人物是谁;(2)该人物的主要贡献;(3)该人物对你的影响。注意:(1)词数 80左右;(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,How is everything going?写作思路(1)一审:体裁、结构和主题 体裁:应用文-书信介绍类 第一段:交际用语-导入-写邮件目的 第二段:人物与成就-人物(要点1)+贡献(概括句)+细节(2点)第三段:影响-概括句+细节(2点)第四段:总结+交际
16、主题:历史人物介绍二定:人称与时态 人称:第一人称与第三人称 时态:一般过去时与一般现在时三明确 明确写作要点:人物(鲁迅)贡献(杰出作品、反对旧势力)影响(了解过去+坚持的重要性)素材整理(1)关键词语 be committedto致力于 fight against与做斗争 arouse the passion of唤起的激情 be acknowledged as 被认为是 obtain/gain a better knowledge of获得对的更好的了解 to sum up 总之完成句子 这位主人公是一位不同寻常的作家-鲁迅，他创作了许多杰出的散文和小说。The hero is an e
17、xtraordinary writer-Lu Xun,who wrote a lot of remarkable prose and novels 他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起中国民众建立一个新中国的热情。He was committed tofighting against the enemy with his articles，arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.正是因为这一点,他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。It was because of this that he was acknowled
18、ged as a hero of his time.完成句子 他不仅帮我更好地了解了那个时代,也让我学到了坚持的重要性。Not only does he help me obtain a bette knowledge of that time but I have learnt the importance ofinsistence.总之,他是中国历史上的一位伟大的英雄。To sum up he is a great hero in the history of China.Dear Jim,How is everything going?Glad to know you are inter
19、ested in Chinese history.Id like to introduce a remarkable Chinese to you.The hero is an extraordinary writerLu Xun,who wrote a lot of remarkable prose and novels.He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles,arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.It was beca
20、use of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time.Lu Xun has influenced me a lot.Not only does he help me obtain a better knowledge of that time but I have learnt the importance of insistence.To sum up,he is a great hero in the history of China.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaT h an k yo u fo r l i sten i n g!
