1、 If you want to be skilled in writing,first of all,you need to be an efficient,thoughtful and wise learner.写作是综合能力的体现，要想成中考中的写写作是综合能力的体现，要想成中考中的写作达人，应该在总复习的过程中成为一个高效，作达人，应该在总复习的过程中成为一个高效，善思，智慧的学习者。善思，智慧的学习者。Initially(=Firstly),be a sharp observer（观察者）（观察者）.-There must be thought behind phenomenon.（看
2、透现象（看透现象后的问题）后的问题）What topics can you find out from these pictures?Topics that are concerned with the picturesA.Students are under too much pressure.B.Students have no free time to do what they like.C.Parents fit as much as they want into their childrens lives.D.Parents are always trying to plan the
3、ir childrens lives.初三的学生即将面临(be around the corner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。1.谈谈你对此话题的个人观点。2.为什么你觉得应该保留或者取消晚自习。3.你觉得应该如何更有效地合理地计划安排自己的时间。长春市第长春市第45中学中学英语模拟考试书面表达英语模拟考试书面表达（B）Related units in our textbooks Grade 8 II Unit 2 Reading Maybe y
4、ou should learn to relax.Topic:causes of problems Grade 9 Unit 1 Reading How do you deal with problems?Topic:how to do thingsUnit 3 Reading Should I be allowed to make my own decisions?Topic:agree and disagreeWhat is more,be an open-minded learner.-I can make full use of any leanring resources(学习资源学
5、习资源)，especially our textbooks.Useful words&expressions about target topicstry to fit as much as possible into.under too much pressuretired kidsjoin after-school clubspush.a lotsend.to kinds of classesagree(with.)find it hard to think for oneselfplan.for sb.on the one handon the other handneed time a
6、nd freedom to relaxneed time to do things by themselvesSo how do we deal with.?with the help of.worry about.practice ones hobbies as much as sb.wantspend time on.be allowed to make decisions for oneselfachieve ones dreamUseful words&expressions about target topicscomplain plaint n.busy adj.pushy par
7、e v.crazy adj.freedom n.solution n.realize v.opportunity n.syn.=chance n.volunteer v.achieve v.importance n.succeed v.Last but not least,be a critical and flexible(有主见有主见的和善于变通的的和善于变通的)learner.-Ive been a crash(速成的速成的)writing expert.Since the entrance exam is around the corner,we students are suppos
8、ed to make full use of every possible _,of which self-study is a _ one.Therefore,I _ the idea that evening self-study should be kept.To tell the truth,its not easy to _ study at home,no matter how much Im interested in getting knowledge.However,studying is efficient when the whole class are learning
9、 quietly.Such good learning environment _ me to do my best to keep up with those hard-working guys.Besides,whenever I meet a problem,I have my teachers to _.This cant happen when Im alone in my study and probably I will _ more tries.As for my afterschool time,I _ keep a good balance of work and play
10、.On the one hand,Ill finish all my school tasks as soon as possible.On the other hand,relaxing activities like practicing hobbies or hanging out with friends also help me to be _ in studies.crucialchanceagree withconcentrate onencourageshelp me outgive upprefer toactivebe useful to,crucial,chance,co
11、ncentrate on,encourage,help.out,give up,prefer to do,agree with,activeImitate(模仿)and rewrite(改写)Since the entrance exam is around the corner,we students are supposed to make full use of every possible chance,_.Therefore,I agree with the idea that evening self-study should be _.-beginning of which se
12、lf-study is a crucial onekeptBut it doesnt mean we dont need time and freedom to do things by ourselves.canceled.初三的学生即将面临初三的学生即将面临(be in the corner)中考，中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于篇不少于80词的小短文。词的小
13、短文。1.从你的角度你非常赞成取消晚自习。从你的角度你非常赞成取消晚自习。2.为什么你觉得取消晚自习对你有利。为什么你觉得取消晚自习对你有利。3.你会如何合理地计划安排自己的时间。你会如何合理地计划安排自己的时间。长春市第长春市第45中学英语模拟考试中学英语模拟考试书面表达（书面表达（B）聪明的你一定发现了，我们把可以利用的那篇小文章中开头部分的观点聪明的你一定发现了，我们把可以利用的那篇小文章中开头部分的观点倒置，最后一段保留或做简单修改，完成了开头和结尾部分。倒置，最后一段保留或做简单修改，完成了开头和结尾部分。一篇高端大气上档次的作文就新鲜出炉了。中考作文怎能难倒我们。一篇高端大气上档次
14、的作文就新鲜出炉了。中考作文怎能难倒我们。The second paragraph about why you The second paragraph about why you think it should be canceled is actually a think it should be canceled is actually a piece of cake.piece of cake.如果再利用从教材中总结归纳的单词，短语，如果再利用从教材中总结归纳的单词，短语，句型结构完成对于观点的说明和支持，句型结构完成对于观点的说明和支持，(Dont forget the useful
15、 words and expressions collected from the textbooks.)As for how to plan my after-school time,I prefer to keep a good balance of work and play.On the one hand,Ill finish all my school tasks as soon as possible.On the other hand,relaxing activities like practicing hobbies or hanging out with friends a
16、lso help me to be active in study.-ending Take full advantage(充分利用）充分利用）of our textbooks Useful words&expressions we can use try to fit as much as possible into.under too much pressuretired kidsjoin after-school clubspush.a lotsend.to kinds of classesagree(with.)find it hard to think for oneselfplan
17、.for sb.on the one handon the other handneed time and freedom to relaxneed time to do things by themselvesSo how do we deal with.?with the help of.worry about.practice ones hobbies as much as sb.wantspend time on.be allowed to make decisions for oneselfachieve ones dream InitiallyInitially,All work
18、and no play makes Jack a dull,All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.A whole day of classes and exercises has been tiring boy.A whole day of classes and exercises has been tiring enough.If parents and teachers try to fit as much as enough.If parents and teachers try to fit as much as possible in
19、to our after-school time,life is no fun at all.possible into our after-school time,life is no fun at all.We do think we should be allowed to do what we are We do think we should be allowed to do what we are really interested in,especially when we have a plan or really interested in,especially when w
20、e have a plan or to-do list.to-do list.From another perspectiveFrom another perspective,we dont want to,we dont want to find it hard to think for ourselves when we are getting find it hard to think for ourselves when we are getting older.The reduction of time at school will help us learn older.The r
21、eduction of time at school will help us learn to be more independent both in growing and in study to be more independent both in growing and in study and alsoand also its certain that we will benefit a lot from its certain that we will benefit a lot from planning things for ourselves.planning things
22、 for ourselves.DIY Time -the second paragraph efficiently efficiently thoughtfully thoughtfully wisely wisely How can we finish our composition in the entrance examination How can we finish our composition in the entrance examination paper perfectly?With the help of the topics and related words and
23、paper perfectly?With the help of the topics and related words and expressions that we are so familiar with in our textbooks,we can expressions that we are so familiar with in our textbooks,we can just do it.just do it.Lets sum up.1.审题，确定相关话题审题，确定相关话题 2.联系教材，搜索可以利用的单词，短语，句式和结联系教材，搜索可以利用的单词，短语，句式和结构构 3.按照按照 what,why,how的线索流畅表达的线索流畅表达Thanks for your time!
