1、Environmental ProtectionUnit 3英语英语2424字整体教学字整体教学Period FiveWritingA report on an environmental issue写作训练 弄清文路 写作妙笔生花技法点拨 文体分析 把握写作动脉内容索引内容索引写作指导技 法 点 拨文体分析 把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。写作时注意以下本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。写作时注意以下几点：几点：1.以事实为依据，对事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。以事实为依据，对事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。2.要有明确的文章结构。要有明确的文章结构。3.
2、语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。常用表达1.It is reported that an activity was organized to get the students close to nature.2.As is reported/According to the report，a terrible earthquake happened.3.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.4.What they did has brought jo
3、y to others and enriched their own lives.5.Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork.6.The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was beneficial to us.返 回写 作 训 练弄清文路 写作妙笔生花东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但
4、近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取东湖曾经是一处旅游胜地，但近年来受到严重的污染。当地政府采取了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，根据以下要点了一些有效措施，使得污染情况有所减轻。假设你是李华，根据以下要点写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事。写一篇报道并呼吁社会关注此事。1.曾经的情景曾经的情景(景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多景美、水清、鱼儿嬉戏、游客多)；2.后来的状况后来的状况(工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾工厂废水污染、游客乱扔垃圾)；3.当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转当地政府已经采取措施来拯救东湖，情况有所好转。注意注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节
5、，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题审题写作要求是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况。写作时应注意下面写作要求是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况。写作时应注意下面几点：几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇报道，写作中应注意报道的常规格式。确定文体：这是一篇报道，写作中应注意报道的常规格式。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。3.主体人称：由于是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况，所以人称主体人称：由于是写关于旅游胜地东湖的污染及治理情况，所以人称应该以第三人称为主应该以第三人称为主。审题谋篇谋篇谋篇第一段：介绍东湖以前的情况。第
6、一段：介绍东湖以前的情况。第二段：东湖的污染情况。第二段：东湖的污染情况。第三段：采取措施改善后的情况。第三段：采取措施改善后的情况。核心核心词汇词汇1.曾经曾经是是2.欣赏欣赏的的美丽美丽3.倒入倒入4.夜以继日夜以继日5.扔扔进进6.采取采取措施措施7.禁止某人做某禁止某人做某事事8.被允许做某事被允许做某事_遣词造句used to be.enjoy ones beautypour intoday and nightthrow into.take measuresforbid sb.to do sth.be allowed to do sth.连词成连词成句句1.东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水
7、很清澈，鱼儿在里面快乐地游着。东湖过去是个美丽的地方，水很清澈，鱼儿在里面快乐地游着。and the water was clear and fishes swam in it happily.2.游客们从全国各地来参观它，欣赏它的美。游客们从全国各地来参观它，欣赏它的美。Travelers came from all over the nation .3.而且，垃圾经常被游客扔到湖里，这已经严重污染了这个湖。而且，垃圾经常被游客扔到湖里，这已经严重污染了这个湖。Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors and _ .Ea
8、st Lake used to be a beautiful placeto visit it and enjoyed its beautyit haspolluted the lake badly句式句式升级升级1.用定语从句改写句用定语从句改写句1。_2.用非谓语动词改写句用非谓语动词改写句2。_3.用定语从句改写句用定语从句改写句3。_East Lake used to be a beautiful place，in which the water was clear and fishes swam happily.Travelers came from all over the nat
9、ion to visit it，enjoying its beauty.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，which has polluted the lake badly.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇篇80词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。组句成篇参考范文参考范文East Lake used to be a beautiful place，in which the water was clear and fishes sw
10、am happily.Travelers came from all over the nation to visit it，enjoying its beauty.Unfortunately，millions of tons of waste water from factories around has kept pouring into it day and night.Moreover，rubbish is often thrown into it by the visitors，which has polluted the lake badly.The local government has realized the dangerous sit-uation and taken some effective measures.Some factories are forbidden to pour waste water into it and the visitors are not allowed to throw rubbish into it.The lake is becoming more and more beautiful.返 回ThanksThanks
