1、2020年中考英语作文指导话题6-健康与安全分析衡阳近分析衡阳近8年中考真题可知，针对年中考真题可知，针对“健康与安全健康与安全”这这一话题，考一话题，考查了查了2次：次：2019年要求以年要求以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题提为题提出自己的建议；出自己的建议；2012年要求从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的习年要求从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的习惯等方面写一篇短文。惯等方面写一篇短文。全国近年真题对全国近年真题对“健康与安全健康与安全”这一话题主要涉及的命题角度为：这一话题主要涉及的命题角度为：命题探索(1)谈论如何保持健康，如：谈论如何保持健康，
2、如：2019烟台烟台“如何保持健康如何保持健康”；2017贺州贺州“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”；2017泰州泰州“如何放松和保持健康如何放松和保持健康”；(2)对对“食品安全食品安全”的看的看法与建议，如：法与建议，如：2019乐乐山山“谈谈对食品安全谈谈对食品安全的看法的看法”；(3)谈论如何保证安全，如：谈论如何保证安全，如：2019南充南充“How to Keep Safe”；2019凉凉山州山州“How to Protect Ourselves”。命题探索(2019(2019衡阳衡阳)根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。根据一项新的调查，学生安全已
3、经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护自我保护”为主题的消防安全教为主题的消防安全教育，请以育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，为题，提出你的建议提出你的建议。典例剖析典例剖析审文体：说明文审文体：说明文审人称：第二人称审人称：第二人称 审主题：如何在火灾中保护自己审主题：如何在火灾中保护自己一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句要求：要求：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。2.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。参考
4、词汇：参考词汇：cover v.遮盖遮盖take the lift 乘坐电梯乘坐电梯exit n.出口出口towel n.毛巾毛巾shut off 切断切断一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger.2.A woman next to him was shouting for help.3.She said that the man had a heart problem and should be sent to the hospital.1 1角度角度如何保证自身安全如何
5、保证自身安全一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 范范 例例 4.Thanks to Mr.Wang and the passengers,the doctors saved the man in time.5.The driver didnt think about himself.He only thought about saving a life.6.I think you should see a doctor and get an Xray.7.I dont think sixteenyearolds should be allowed to drive.Im wor
6、ried about their safety.8.Its easy to slip and fall on a wet floor.Be sure to keep the bathroom floor dry after you have a shower or bath.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.作为中学生，我们应该了解危险并学会保护自己。作为中学生，我们应该了解危险并学会保护自己。_2.我认为如果我们在路上有危险，我们可以大声呼救。我认为如果我们在路上有危险，我们可以大声呼救。_ As middle students,we should know about the d
7、anger and learn to protect ourselves.I think we can shout for help if we are in danger on the way.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.我们在网上冲浪时，应该当心在线交友。我们在网上冲浪时，应该当心在线交友。_4.多亏了王老师，受伤的学生被及时送到了医院。多亏了王老师，受伤的学生被及时送到了医院。_When we are surfing on the Internet,we should be careful to make friends online.Thanks
8、 to Mr.Wang,the student who was hurt was sent to the hospital in time.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.无论我们徒步还是坐公交车去学校，我们都必须考虑交通安全。无论我们徒步还是坐公交车去学校，我们都必须考虑交通安全。_6.我认为你不可以独自在河里游泳。那可能有危险。我认为你不可以独自在河里游泳。那可能有危险。_ Whether we walk or take a bus to school,we must think about the traffic safety.I dont think you can go
9、swimming alone in a river.It may be dangerous.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.I dont like hamburgers for dinner.I dont like hamburgers for dinner because they are not healthy.I like chicken for dinner.2.I have a very healthy life.I have a very healthy life.I exercise every day.2 2角度角度如何保持健康如何保持健康一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成
10、篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 3.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.We think the best way to relax is through exercise.It is healthy for the mind and the body.4.Jane has a lot of good habits.Jane has a lot of good habits.She drinks juice and never stays up late.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.You ne
11、ed to take breaks away from the computer.You need to take breaks away from the computer because you played computer games all the weekend.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.I think you should lie down and rest.I think you should lie down and rest.If your head and neck still hurt tomorrow,then go to see a doctor.
12、7.Take a walk after supper!Take a walk after supper!It is good for your health.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.You need to keep a balanced diet.(扩写具体做法扩写具体做法)_2.We shouldnt eat food that goes bad.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ You need to keep a balanced diet.Remember to have meals regularly and eat more vegetables and fruit.We
13、 shouldnt eat food that goes bad because it will do harm to our health.句句 子子 扩扩 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.I think we should get enough sleep during the night.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ 4.I do a lot of exercise every day.(.(扩写具体做法扩写具体做法)_5.My uncle exercises at least three times a week.(.(扩写具体做法扩写具体做法)_I think we sh
14、ould get enough sleep during the night.Staying up late is bad for our health.I do a lot of exercise every day.I walk to school instead of taking a bus.My uncle exercises at least three times a week.On the weekend,he often plays basketball or badminton with his friends.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.We can pl
15、ay sports.(扩写想法扩写想法)_7.We should keep ourselves happy.(扩写原因扩写原因)_We can play sports.I think sports can make us stronger and healthier.We should keep ourselves happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.You need to get rid of bad habits like staying up late.(扩写目的扩写目的)_ 9.You
16、should have breakfast every morning.(扩写原因扩写原因)_You need to get rid of bad habits like staying up late.It is an important way to keep healthy.You should have breakfast every morning.It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 First,you should _(建议建议1).Second,you
17、should _(建议建议2).Next,you should _(建议建议3).Finally,you should _(建建议议4).But you mustnt take the lift or jump off a window.练语段练语段语段语段练习练习1 1如何保护自身安全如何保护自身安全keep calm if a fire happens cover your nose with a wet towelshut off the electricity in the house try your best to get out of the house一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成
18、篇章二阶写好句 First,we should _(做法做法1)._(原因原因1)is bad for our health.Second,we must _(做法做法2)._(原因原因2),the healthier we will be.Third,we should _(做法做法3).get enough sleep during the night have healthy food语段语段练习练习2 2如何保持健康如何保持健康Staying up late do more exercise The more fruit and vegetables we eat一阶 审好题三阶练语段
19、&成篇章二阶写好句We can _(具体做法具体做法).Finally,we should _(做法做法4).If we _(原因原因3),well live a happy life.walk to school instead of taking a bus often smilekeep ourselves happy一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章How to Protect Yourself in a FireMany fires happen every year in China.Many people are hurt or die in fires.You
20、 should know some ways of protecting yourself that will help to keep you safe in fires.First,you should keep calm if a fire happens.It is very important to keep your mind clear.Second,you should shut off the electricity in the house in case you could get hurt by it.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句高高 分分 范范 文文 Ne
21、xt,you should cover your nose with a wet towel.Because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poisonous gas.Finally,you should try your best to get out of the house.But you mustnt take the lift or jump off a window.Remember these methods because I think those are very useful for all
22、 of you.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句(2019(2019河池改编河池改编)今年今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger”为题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，请你为题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，请你从游泳安全、网上交友安全、食品安全、交通安全、学校安全等方从游泳安全、网上交友安全、食品安全、交通安全、学校安全等方面着手，写一篇英语演讲稿。面着手，写一篇英语演讲稿。要求：要求：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。2.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，
23、词数不少于80。注意：开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵Keep away from the danger Hello!Everyone.Im Wang Lei.The danger is around us._So we must learn how to keep away from the danger.First,we mustnt go swimming without our parents or teachers permission.And we are supposed to wear life jack
24、ets while swimming.Second,we should walk on the pavement.Dont use mobile phones while crossing the street.Third,do not believe online strangers words and do not meet online friends alone._ Thats all.Thank you for listening!写作练兵写作练兵Fourth,if food goes bad,do not eat it.It is harmful to our health.Rem
25、ember to wash hands before meals.Fifth,dont run in the hallways or fight with classmates.Instead,we should get on well with them.If we are threatened by others,call our teachers or parents for help.Last but not least,never try drugs.If we see someone sell them,wed better call 110.In a word,we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
