1、Writing-a misunderstanding in English2.Learning Aims(学习目标学习目标)1)通过本节经历感受类写作训练,引导学生正确使用人称、时态;2)能清楚、恰当地表达题目要点;3)能使用多样的句式和语法结构。1.Learning Content(学习内容学习内容)一次经历感受类写作训练 4.Learning method(学习方法学习方法)观察,讨论,写作,讨论修改,小组活动。Leading-in3.Learning key points and difficulties(学习重难点学习重难点)1)能清楚、恰当地表达写作要点;2)能使用多样的句式和语法结
2、构。观察观察四幅图片,梳理故事的脉络,了解故事的基本要素。四幅图片,梳理故事的脉络,了解故事的基本要素。Thinking根据以上四幅图片,回答一下四个问题,了解故事的基本要素。1)Who were the people in the story?2)Where the story took place?3)What happened?4)What caused the misunderstanding?问题思考问题思考 Toad-in-the-hole(洞中)Toad-in-the-hole is a traditional British dish.It consists of(包括)sau
3、sages(香肠,腊肠)in a Yorkshire pudding mix,(约克郡布甸)usually served with vegetables.The origin(起源)of the dishs name isnt quite clear,but a common explanation is that it gets its name because it resembles(像;相似,类似)a toad(蟾蜍)sticking its head out of a hole.(把头伸出洞外)。参考信息参考信息1.小组内讨论以上四个问题,其他小组进行评价或补充小组内讨论以上四个问题
4、,其他小组进行评价或补充。Discussing参考答案参考答案1)They were a girl and her British host family.2)It took place in the girls British host family home.3)The boy told the girl that they were going to have toad-in-hole for dinner.They were going to have toad-in-the-hole for dinner.The girl wasnt sure whether it would be
5、 a real toad in a hole.4)The girl didnt know that“toad-in-the-hole”is actually the name of a dish.(1)词汇选择)词汇选择准确恰当 butterflies in my stomach对对.感到惊奇感到惊奇 情绪紧张情绪紧张 令我感到惊奇的是令我感到惊奇的是 结果结果.be surprised at/to do/that.to my astonishment/amasementturn out2.根据故事的脉络和基本要素,进行知识和思维能力的根据故事的脉络和基本要素,进行知识和思维能力的迁移,写出这
6、则有关语言误解的小故事。迁移,写出这则有关语言误解的小故事。I wasnt sure whether we were going to.It turned out that.What a amazing experience!I was really surprised when.(2)句型选择)句型选择(3)连句成篇)连句成篇 使用过渡性词汇使用过渡性词汇Last summer,I stayed with a British host family.One day,I was really surprised when.Showing1.交换批改,评选佳作,小组展示;2.展示参考范文,供学生
7、参考修改。参考范文参考范文 Last summer,I stayed with a British host family.One day,I was really surprised when Jeremy,the son of the family,told me that we would have a toad-in-the-hole for dinner.I wasnt sure whether we were going to eat a real toad in a hole.If so,how terrible!I joined them at dinner time with
8、 butterflies in my stomach.To my astonishment,a dish of sausages cooked in Yorkshire pudding(a mix that tastes a bit like pancakes)was served on the table,and it tasted delicious.It turned out that toad-in-the-hole is a typical dish for a British dinner,and theres no toad!What a amazing experience!I
9、t was interesting to try such yummy(美味的)food with a strange name.Explaining1.对部分学生展示的写作成果,从语言准确性、情节连贯性以及表达得体性等方面进行评价并纠错。2.经历感受类作文特征 该类写作描述个人经历,常以短文或日记等文体呈现;以一般过去式为主,按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如 then,later,next串联句子。至于感受部分,多积累相关的单词或短语。3.基本框架基本框架 -开头(beginning)引出主题 -主体(body)介绍事件 -结尾(ending)发表感受 Checking参考范文,结合老师及同学的建议,重新修改自己写作。