1、人物传记的写作人物传记的写作(An introduction to a person)基本信息：1.1.此类写作是记叙文的一种，主要以人物为中此类写作是记叙文的一种，主要以人物为中心组织材料，围绕具体事件来写；心组织材料，围绕具体事件来写；2.2.介绍人物一般以时间顺序进行叙述；介绍人物一般以时间顺序进行叙述；3.3.以第三人称为主；以第三人称为主；4.4.时态一般选用一般过去时。时态一般选用一般过去时。写作原则:文章结构：总文章结构：总分分总总（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分）（引入部分，正文部分，结尾部分）总：总体介绍人物（姓名，身份，地位，主要成就）成长经历，教育情况，兴趣爱好，性格品质，
2、工作经历，感人事迹，突出成绩，功过是非 总：总结评价人物：影响，启示 具体介绍人物：分：人物传记的写作模式：人物传记的写作模式：（一）（一）人物简介的写作步骤；人物简介的写作步骤；(概概,貌貌,育育,平平,评评)概况概况）age,sex,birth-place,background外貌外貌）appearance,character教育教育）education生平生平）big events in ones life (in order of time)评价评价）evaluation A.A.概况概况 （尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位语结构，使文（尽量用定语从句、非谓语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
3、章简洁，通顺)Lin Qiaozhi was born in/into a poor family in 1901.She is a specialist in womens diseases.1）_ _(定语从句定语从句).2）Born in/into a _ family in _(地点地点)on _(时间时间),XXX is a _.3)XXX,the son of a _ family,was born in _(地点地点)on _(时间时间).Lin Qiaozhi who is a specialist in womens diseases was born in a poor f
4、amily in 1901.B B外貌外貌,性格性格 (巧用巧用withwith做定语做定语)1)1)梁志波是个近视的男生梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜。他戴着一副眼镜。Liang Zhibo is a near-sighted boy _.2)2)杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。Yang Yang is good-looking/ordinary-looking/funny-looking_.with a pair of glasses on his nose with long hair C C生平生平 (尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,倒装倒装,非限制定语从句等，
5、非限制定语从句等，润色文章润色文章)1)1)1 1）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣）侯耀文不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。而且有音乐天赋。Hou Yaowen not only is interested in science but also has a gift for music.(用用not only but also倒装句改写倒装句改写)Not only_,but also_.2）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。）祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。(用非用非限制性定语从句表达限制性定语从句表达)Zu Longtao set a new world reco
6、rd of swimming,_.is Hou Yaowen interested in science he has a gift for music which makes a great contribution to China.D.D.教育背景教育背景E E评价评价 （注意运用一些动词（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语形容词等短语/词词组）组）裴继升给我们作出了榜样裴继升给我们作出了榜样,大家都赞扬他。大家都赞扬他。Pei Jishen _,so all the people _him.sets us a good example speak highly of 请根据以下要点提示写一
7、篇短文，简要介绍一下宋庆龄，可请根据以下要点提示写一篇短文，简要介绍一下宋庆龄，可适当增加细节。适当增加细节。1.1.宋庆龄（宋庆龄（Song QinglingSong Qingling）18931893年出生于上海一个富裕的家年出生于上海一个富裕的家庭，受到良好的教育，并留学美国。庭，受到良好的教育，并留学美国。2.1915 2.1915年嫁给孙中山（年嫁给孙中山（Dr.Sun Yat-senDr.Sun Yat-sen）；后来成为中华人）；后来成为中华人民共和国国家名誉主席（民共和国国家名誉主席（an honorary president of the an honorary presid
8、ent of the Peoples Republic of ChinaPeoples Republic of China）。）。3.3.她一生平易近人，晚年不仅热衷于中国妇女儿童的福利事她一生平易近人，晚年不仅热衷于中国妇女儿童的福利事业，而且创办了专为妇女和儿童服务的中国福利会（业，而且创办了专为妇女和儿童服务的中国福利会（the China the China Welfare InstituteWelfare Institute）,并领导中国妇女联合会（并领导中国妇女联合会（the Womens the Womens FederationFederation）.4.4.此外，她也为人权（
9、此外，她也为人权（civil rightcivil right）、民主（、民主（democracydemocracy）与和平而努力工作。与和平而努力工作。注意：字数注意：字数 100-120100-120字左右。字左右。【思路点拨】本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手：本篇文章可以从一下几方面入手：一一.注意文章的时态和人称；注意文章的时态和人称；二二.把握文章的结构把握文章的结构 1.1.第一段：简单介绍宋庆龄。第一段：简单介绍宋庆龄。2.2.第二段：详细介绍宋庆龄。第二段：详细介绍宋庆龄。3.3.第三段：从客观和主观两方面对宋庆第三段：从客观和主观两方面对宋庆龄进行评价。龄进行评价。Song Qi
10、ngling_.In 1915,she married Dr.Sun Yat-sen,who had a great influence on China._(后来),Song Qingling _ an honorary president of the Peoples Republic of China.She was _(平易近人)during her whole life.Song Qingling was born into a rich family in Shanghai in 1893,so she got a good education.And she went to st
11、udy in the USA.Laterwas chosen to be warm-hearted/kind-hearted and easy-goingA.She not only _ the welfare of women and children in her later years but also _the China Welfare Institute,_ serve women and children now.B.(用not only but also 倒装句改写)_ She also led the Womens Federation._(此外)，she worked ha
12、rd for civil rights,democracy and peace.concerned herself withstarted/founded/established/organizedwhich is designed/intended toNot only did she concern herself with the welfare of women and children in her later years,but also she started the China Welfare Institute,which is intended to serve women and children now.In additionHomework 1.Rewrite your composition and recite it.2.Review Unit 2.(Thank you for your coming.)
