1、求求 助助 信(信(1)什 么 是 求 助 信?32.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习,七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件。1.假定你是李华,上网时有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语,因此发帖向在线外籍教师 Peter 寻求帮助。3.假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中 心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信。有困难,求助44.假定你是李华。校学生会打算举办一个
2、美国文化节,急需一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔友Jimmy 写一封 email 求助,让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来,并告知会承担相关费用。5.假设你是李华,于2018年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。请求帮忙6.假定你是李华,你们班级的节目“哈姆雷特(Hamlet)”将参加下个月学校的“英语文化节”话剧比赛。你给度假中的外教 Mr.Smith 写一封电子邮件,并附上节目录像,请他给予相关的指导。课 堂 例 题6课 堂 例 题 假定你是
3、李华,上网时有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语,因此发帖向在线外籍教师 Peter 寻求帮助。要点包括:1.自我介绍(姓名、身份及年级);2.英语学习情况、困难及感受;3.请求给予帮助。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。7例 题 范 文Dear Peter,Im Li Hua,a senior student from China.Im more than delighted to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English online along with your contact
4、 information.So I cant wait to post this message to you.What upsets me is that I feel nervous to communicate with others in English,although I have learned English for many years.Whats worse,I always find it challenging to listen to native speakers clearly.Thats why I am writing to you.It would be n
5、ice if you could do me a favor.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua第一段:自我介绍(问候语)+背景句+目的句第二段:具体困难+感受第三段:期待回复,表达感激8词 汇 积 累 Im more than delighted 我非常开心。迫不及待做某事I cant wait to do帮我一个忙do me a favor第一段:自我介绍(问候语)+背景句+目的句9自我介绍Im Li Hua,a student 问 候 语Time flies!How is everything going with you?Its
6、been half a year since we last met./.How is everything going with you?第一段:自我介绍(问候语)+背景句+目的句10遇到困难have met with difficulty in sth/in doing sth;be faced with some challenges in sth/in doing sth;have encountered some trouble in sth/in doing sth 第一段:自我介绍(问候语)+背景句+目的句11目的句:请求帮助turn to sb for help ask for
7、 a helping handIm writing to 第二段:具体的困难+感受12句式 1我认为做某事对我来说比较困难,这让我很沮丧。I find/consider it difficult/hard/challenging for me to do sth,which makes me extremely depressed.描述消极感受的形容词:upset,annoyed,confused,sad,disappointed,anxious,nervous第二段:具体的困难+感受13句式 2让我烦恼的事情是What upsets me is that+从句(描述具体的困难)描述消极感受的
8、动词:trouble,upset,annoy,confuse,disappoint,depress第二段:具体的困难+感受14句式 3我在做某事方面有一些困难。I have some challenges/trouble/difficulties in(doing sth)第二段:具体的困难+感受15句式 4:有一些困难阻止我做There are some challenges preventing(阻止)/stopping/deterring(阻止)me from doing sth(learning more and better).句式 5 做方面有些障碍There are some b
9、arriers(挫折/障碍)in(doing)sth.练习:场景构建16根据下列场景,用学过的句型描述你的困难和感受。学习英语很多年,口语不好。17句式 1:我急需你在某方面给我一些专业的指导和建议,以便于解决我的问题。I am in great need of your professional guidance and advice in sth/in doing sth.第二段:表达求助第二段:表达求助18第二段:表达求助第二段:表达求助句式 2:不知道您能否给我一些有关的建议么?Will you please give me some advice in sth/doing sth?1
10、9第二段:表达求助第二段:表达求助句式 3:非常感谢你的意见和建议。Any advice from you would be highly appreciated.We would appreciate it if you could give me a helping hand.20第二段:要点之间衔接词第二段:要点之间衔接词To begin with,besides,whats worse,in addition,additionallySth is another headache for me.Another headache for me is.21第三段:期待回复,表达感谢第三段:
11、期待回复,表达感谢1.I hope to get your help.If possible,please contact(联系)me at 123456/xxx.2.Looking forward to your early reply.3.Thank you for your help in advance.课 中 练 习23课 中 练 习 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习,七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件。1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈
12、谈你的困难并寻求他的帮助;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。篇 章 框 架 段落及要点分布 第一段 询问Tom生活和学习情况 第二段 表达困难,寻求帮助第三段 期待回复,表达看望表达问候:第一段:表达问候Its been a month since you came to Beijing.How is everything going with you?How are you getting along with your study?你近来学习如何?Does weather and food agree with you here?天气和食物还适合你吗?Is the food to your
13、taste here?食物合你的胃口吗?第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习,七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件。1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况;2.谈谈你的困难并寻求他的帮助;3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助背景句:七月份我将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)添加:心情如何?我迫不及待想要和你分享一个消息。我非常开心地告诉你。I cant wait to share a
14、piece of good news with you that.Im more than delighted to tell you that 第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助背景句:七月份我将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)添加:准备动作?我正在为此做些准备。Im making some preparations for it.Im going to take part in an English speech contest.Im going to take part in an English speech contest,for which I am mak
15、ing some preparations.第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助 I cant wait to share with you a piece of good news that Im going to take part in an English speech contest,for which I am making some preparations.第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助表达困难:你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。collect some useful/relevant information/materials 收集资料What upsets me is that+从
16、句(描述具体的困难)What upsets me is that I have some trouble collecting some useful/relevant information/materials 第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助表达困难:你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。口语不流利紧 张I find/consider it difficult/hard/challenging for me to do sth,which gives me a headache.I find challenging for me to speak English fluently/with f
17、luency,which gives me a headache.第二段:表达困难,寻求帮助寻求帮助:I would appreciate it if you could give me a helping hand.第三段:表达感谢表达拜访I will call on you after the contest.After the contest,I intend to visit you and express my hearty thanks to you personally范 文Dear Tom,Its been a month since you came to Beijing.D
18、oes the weather and food agree with you here?Besides,how are you getting along with your study?I am preparing for an English contest which is to be held in July in Beijing.However,I find it really difficult to collect the relevant speech materials and make appropriate use of the language,which gives
19、 me such a headache.Could you please give me a hand?I believe I will benefit a lot from your professional advice and timely help.After the contest,I intend to visit you and express my hearty thanks to you personally.Yours,Li Hua课 后 练 习36课 后 练 习 假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中 心(Learning Cente
20、r)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1.本人简介;2.求助内容;3.约定时间;4.你的联系方式(Email:;Phone:12345678)。注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;范 文Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a student taking summer course here from China.Although I feel delighted in your school,I have some difficulty in my learning process.So I am writing to as
21、k you for help.First,we are required to collect materials and find reference books for our further study,which happens to be my barrier as I dont know how to use the library resources.Besides,what troubles me is how to take notes and follow some teachers as quickly as possible.Luckily,I was told Leaning center can provide help for foreign students and I am longing for your timely help.If possible,could you talk to me on Sunday mornings?I appreciate it if you could email me at to let me know which day is ok.Yours,Li Hua THANKS