1、 新题型探究-读后续写 Continuation Writing The parents with their three-year-old son went to see a film.When they walked into the cinema,the attendant said to them:“Youll have to go out if your son cries.But well refund(退款退款)you the tickets.”About half an hour later,the husband asked his wife,“What do you thi
2、nk of the film?”“Ive never seen such a boring film.”His wife answered,“Its not worth seeing.”“I dont think much of it,either.”The husband said,“Wake the child up and_.”let him cryWhat do you think is a good ending?2续写的短文字数为150左右；4续写完成后，请用下划线标注你所使用的关键词语。续写部分分为两段，开头已经为你写好;1应使用短文中5个以上标有下划线的关键词语；3Requir
3、ements 评分细则评分档次第一条第二条第三条第四条第五档（21-25分）与所给短文融合度高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了五个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。第四档（16-20分）与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供的 各段落开头语衔接较为合理。内容比较丰富，应用了五个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。第三档（11-15分）与所给短文关系较为密
4、切，与所提供的 各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。写出了若干有关内容，应用了四个以上短文中标出的关键词语。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表达。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第二档（6-10分）与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供的各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档（1-5分）与所提供的短文和开头语的衔接较差。产出内容较少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有较
5、多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容连贯。与原文剧情融洽，逻辑合理续写内容丰富有看点，用了关键词语法结构和词汇多样准确语句间衔接自然，结构紧凑Logical reasonable consistent第五档：21-25与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5 5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。记叙文阅读理解能力记叙文书面表达能力读后续写过程中存在的问题：续写内容与所给短文在叙述意图上不一致续写内容与所给短文
6、在相关细节上相矛盾续写内容与所给短文在语篇结构上不连贯 *use different structures（结构）（结构）*use transitional words（过渡）（过渡）*add some details（细节）（细节）*Predict all the possbile plot *with the help of“PRS”strategy *given two sentences（段首语）*main plots of the passage（故事情节）Step3 Step3 polish（润色）（润色）Step 2 Step 2 draft（拟稿）（拟稿）Step 1 Step
7、 1read(阅读）阅读）“PRS”StrategyProblem-Result-Solution阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was Christmas Day.Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the backroom when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door.The bell,which produced a uniquely pleasant sound,had been in Pappys family for ove
8、r a hundred years.He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop.Although the bell hung on the inside of the main door,Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not.Hearing the bell,he left the backroom to greet
9、his customer.“And how can I help you,little lady?”Pappys voice was joyful.“Hello,sir.”The little girl spoke almost in a whisper.She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes,and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special.Shyly she told him,“Id like to buy a present,sir.”“Well,lets see
10、,”Pappy said,“who is this present for?”“My grandpa.Its for my grandpa.But I dont know what to get.”Pappy began to make suggestions.“How about a pocket watch?Its in good condition.”The little girl didnt answer.She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door.She shook the door gently
11、to ring the bell.Pappys face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement.“This is just right,”the little girl said.“Momma says grandpa loves music.”Just then,Pappys expression changed.Fearful of breaking the little girls heart,he told her,“Im sorry,Missy.Thats not for sale.Maybe your grandp
12、a would like this little radio.”The girl looked at the radio,bowed her head,and sadly sighed,“No,I dont think so.”In an effort to help her understand,Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion,for the rest of his family were all gone now,except for his estranged(疏远的)daughter whom he ha
13、d not seen for nearly a decade.With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him._ Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing._ when wherewhowhatA little girl was selecting _for her grandpa in Pappys shop.However,she insisted on buying _,which my Pa
14、ppy _ dearly.HowStep 1 Thorough ReadingPappyOne Christmas DayIn Pappys shop?A little girlexcited sadjoyful embarrasseda Christmas gifta bellvaluedPara 2 Problems:Later that evening when pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.Results:Solutions:Step 2 Drafting-Creative PlottingPara
15、1 Problems:With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.Results:Solutions:Underlined words:When:Who:What：How:Tip 1Key Words Pappy may feel a sense of sympathy and went to comfort the little girl.Pappy had a deal with the girl.The girl got her dreamed bell.Tip 2 consistent logicPossi
16、ble results/solutionChristmas Daypappy,the little girl,grandpa,momma,daughterpresentsigh,special 8The girl give the bell to Pappy.Pappys estranged(疏远的)daughter came back home.The whole family got tegether again!Step 3 Polishing (Para.1Edition 2)With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up
17、at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door.There was a dead silence in the shop.Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars a
18、ltogether.After thinking for what seems like a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy,the special bell held in her hand.Think about two questions:1.What details can be added to
19、enrich the outline?2.Whats improved in the second edition?3.advanced phrases&structures1.vivid verbs2.inner thoughts(looks,surroundings,dialogues)4.proper transitional words With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to.There
20、 was a dead silence.Suddenly Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars altogether.After thinking for what seems like a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christm
21、as Day and this is your lucky day.It is two dollars that the bell costs exactly.”The child danced out with great joy,the special bell held in her hand.怎样让记叙文生动起来呢？动作描写2-5个环境描写1-2个对话1-2个表情或心理1-2个Step 3 PolishingStep 3 Polishing (Para.2Edition 2)Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he
22、 heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears!There in the doorway stood the little girl,ringing the bell and smiling sweetly.Puzzled,Pappy approached her.Have you changed your mind,little lady?No,the child grinned,Momma says the present is for you.Before Pappy had time to say another word,t
23、he child mother stepped in.Holding back her tears,she gently said，Hello,Dad.1.vivid verbs2.inner thoughts(looks,surroundings,dialogues)怎样让记叙文生动起来呢？动作描写2-5个环境描写1-2个对话1-2个表情或心理1-2个3.advanced phrases&structures4.proper transitional wordseyeshandsheadstare/glare at/look her in the eye/with her eyes shin
24、ing/filled with tearsHis eyes sparkle with excitement/gratitudepat him on the shoulder/headgrasp/hold ones handspoint to sb/sthwave his handsnod/shake his head violentlyHe thought for a momentMake your narration more vivid with appropriate movement.Tip 4 You can get your writing polished by using ad
25、vanced phrases&structuresvivid verbsnecessary inner thoughts natural transitional wordsTip 3 To enrich the plot,we can add_,_,_,_,etc.actionsemotions(looks)surroundingsdialoguesWhich group do you favor?-First,besides/plus/additionally/furthermore,whats more,-at first,then,later,afterwards,before,whe
26、n,during,eventually,finally,immediately,fortunately,unexpectedly,surprisingly,happily for him,Inspired by,Out of curiosity/Driven by curiosity,Apparently,needless to say,in an instant,instead,in the end,at last Conclusion*Think of all the possible details based on the outline*about 70 words(try the
27、vivid description)*positive,logical,reasonable,well-connected*neat handwriting*Dont forget to underline the key words you have chosen.It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city
28、 in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of
29、the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep o
30、ut to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy
31、 hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown r
32、ocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._PracticeSuddenlyalittle
33、rabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._提出问题：问题结果：解决问题Attention:the last sentence of part 1 should be consistent with the following story.提出问题：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.问题结果：Instinctively(凭直觉),I yelled out loud,pulling on the reins（缰绳）hard in order t
34、o stop the horse.But uselessly,the horse sped off the track into another direction.解决问题：Dad followed closely behind,calling out to tell me how to soothe（安慰;使平静）the terrified horse and I did as told.Finally,the horse calmed down,but we seemed to get lost,unable to go back to the mountain road.We had
35、no idea where we were and it was getting dark.We got stuck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home,for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.I was almost breaking down when my father said,“Dont worry,my son.I remember there is a
36、 river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back home.”Finally,we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say,we ate a late dinner.动作一环境对话，转折（高潮）动作（结局）My dear everyone,continuation writing is a new form of exercise on our exam paper.But I think the great imagination and logical mind required in it is nothing new.Because you all have them.Homework:Review what you have learned in this class
