1、3.建 议 信文体概述文体概述 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情一类信件。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力,内明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力,内容通常包括:容通常包括:1.说明写信目的说明写信目的;2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;3.表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。1.给某人提建议
2、给某人提建议 _ 2.如下如下 _ 3.在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4.利用利用 _ 5.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb for advicegive sb some advice(on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sthmake use of常用语块常用语块6.制订计划制订计划 _7.认为认为有用有用 _8.有了某人的共同努力有了某人的共同努力 _9.听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10.把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take sth into account/considerationmake a planfin
3、dhelpful/useful/beneficialwith the joint efforts of sbfollow ones advice11.得到改善得到改善 _12.依我看来依我看来 _13.向某人寻求帮助向某人寻求帮助 _14.我已收到你的来信,得知你我已收到你的来信,得知你 _get improvedin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewturn to sb for helpI have received your letter saying that youI would like to suggest that/I wou
4、ld like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you,I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion that15.我建议我建议套用句式套用句式1.很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对的建的建议。议。Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on2.你就你就向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建
5、设性的建议。建设性的建议。You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.3.我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助。将会很有帮助。I feel that it would be beneficial if4.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。I belie
6、ve youll take my suggestion into account./I believe youll take good consideration of my suggestion.习作修改习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文做短文改错,背经典范文)Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.Here are few suggestions.First,this is important to take a Chinese course,as you
7、ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.newspapers it a on asking Beside,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and
8、 remember Chinese words more easier.You can also make more Chinese friends.He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaandTheyeasilyBesides 作者就如何学习汉语给作者就如何学习汉语给Roy写信提建议。写信提建议。1.ask asking 现在分词作伴随状语,表示主现在分词作伴随
9、状语,表示主动关系。动关系。2.advice后的后的to on advice后常搭配介词后常搭配介词on。3.在在few前加前加a 根据句意,此处为提出一些建根据句意,此处为提出一些建议,表示肯定意义,用议,表示肯定意义,用a few。4.this it 考查句型考查句型it is+adj.+to do sth意为意为“做做是是的的”。5.newspaper newspapers 因为因为newspaper为为可数名词,而且与前后的可数名词,而且与前后的books、magazines属属于并列关系,故用复数形式。于并列关系,故用复数形式。6.Beside Besides 此处表示补充说明关系此
10、处表示补充说明关系“此外此外/而且而且”,beside意为意为“在在旁边旁边”。7.easier easily 修饰谓语动词用副词形式。修饰谓语动词用副词形式。8.He They 根据前一句话中的根据前一句话中的more Chinese friends可知用可知用They。9.or and 此处两个动作为此处两个动作为“顺承顺承”关系,关系,而非而非“选择选择”关系。关系。10.去掉去掉next time前的前的the 相对于现在的相对于现在的“下下一一”,next前不用前不用the。课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华,你的英国好友假定你是李华,你的英国好友Henry在学在学习汉语,但就是写不好汉
11、字,特发邮件咨询你习汉语,但就是写不好汉字,特发邮件咨询你平时是如何练习书写汉字的。请你回复邮件,平时是如何练习书写汉字的。请你回复邮件,内容包括:内容包括:1.书写要求;书写要求;2.练习方式;练习方式;3.你的建议。你的建议。注意:注意:1.词数词数100左右;左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Henry,From your letter I know that youre learning Chinese but you cannot write Chinese characters well.My practices and sugge
12、stions are as follows.Writing a good hand needs long-term and persistent exercise even for native speakers of Chinese.As senior high school students in China,we are required to write Chinese characters frequently.We started from our primary school with writing strokes of Chinese characters,keeping t
13、he rules of writing and the teachers instructions.So starting from the ground up,setting your writing as a daily task,and following a model of calligraphy for practice may help you a lot.Keep on trying.Hopefully,you will make it.Yours sincerely,Li Hua课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack要在要在暑假期间
14、回国,打算为他妈妈准备几件有中国暑假期间回国,打算为他妈妈准备几件有中国特色的礼物,特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一特色的礼物,特来向你咨询。请你给他回复一封邮件。内容包括:封邮件。内容包括:1.建议礼物;建议礼物;2.说明原因;说明原因;3.表达祝福。表达祝福。注意:注意:1.词数词数100左右;左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,Im glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday and you want to bring a few gifts
15、 that symbolize the Chinese culture to your mother.In my opinion,you can buy the following two presents.First of all,cheongsam(旗袍旗袍),a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women,can show the real beauty of a woman.I am sure that your mother will like it.Whats more,the Chinese knot,which stands for unity and good luck,is usually hung in the sitting room of our home.Im convinced that it will bring good luck and happiness to your family.Have a good vacation and give my regards to your mother.Yours,Li Hua