1、如何让考场作文如何让考场作文“亮亮”起起来来看看这两篇作看看这两篇作文文1.2.v高考英语作文评分标准中的最高档次第五档（21-25分）要求考生“应用较多的语法应用较多的语法结构结构”。想要高考英语作文“亮”起来，考生要善于灵活运用多样句式，如名词性从句、名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、强调句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、强调句、倒装句等，倒装句等，使句子变得更优美，增加文章的表达力度，从而提高文章的档次。Think about it:what kind of sentence structures do we use in the following sentences?v1
2、.Learing that you are going to visit Britain,Id like to recommend several places of interest to you.v2.At first,please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty,which plays an extremely significant role in our literature.v3.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.非谓语动词做状语非
3、谓语动词做状语非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句限制性定语从句限制性定语从句v4.By doing so,not only can I share good ideas with others but also I can learn to express myself clearly.v5.Li Ming,my previous classmate,will pay a visit to where he ever studied.v6.Government,in my opinion,is supposed to take immediate measures against polluti
4、on of all kinds.特殊句式：倒装句特殊句式：倒装句特殊句式：加入同位语特殊句式：加入同位语特殊句式：加入插入语特殊句式：加入插入语2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）“Practice makes perfect!”2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型1：非谓语动词做状语【一般】I learn that you are going to visit Britain.Id like t
5、o recommend several places of interest to you.【高级】_Learning that you are going to visit Britain,Id like to recommend several places of interest to you.应用于首段，表示背景。应用于首段，表示背景。2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】I hear that you are going to learn English.I
6、m writing to offer my recommendations.【高级】_Hearing that you are going to learn English,Im writing to offer my recommendations.2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】I know that youre interested in Chinese paper-cutting.Im writing to invite you to visit a p
7、aper-cutting exhibition.【高级】_Knowing that youre interested in Chinese paper-cutting,Im writing to invite you to visit a paper-cutting exhibition.2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】I have leant that our library is planning to buy new books.Im willing to
8、 recommend some books to you.【高级】_Having learnt that our library is planning to buy new books,Im willing to recommend some books to you.动作有先有后，可以用动词动作有先有后，可以用动词ing的完成式的完成式高级版：高级版：2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】I have read your advertisement in the
9、newspaper.I feel interested in voluntary work and do whatever I can to help anyone in need.【高级】_Having read your advertisement in the newspaper,I feel interested in voluntary work and do whatever I can to help anyone in need.动作有先有后，可以用动词动作有先有后，可以用动词ing的完成式的完成式2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考
10、英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型2：非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句【一般】Xian is a nice old city.I visited it last year.【高级】Xian,which I visited last year,is a nice old city.【一般】Rome has a very long history.It is the capital of Italy.【高级】Rome,_,has a very long history.对先行词进行附加的说明对先行词进行附加的说明which is the capital of Italy常
11、见结构：主语常见结构：主语+非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句+谓语谓语+其他其他2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】Charles Smith retired last year.He was my former teacher.【高级】_【一般】Her house stood still in the earthquake.It was built a hundred years ago.【高级】_Charles Smith,who was my former t
12、eacher,retired last year.Her house,which was built a hundred years ago,stood still in the earthquake.2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型3：限制性定语从句限制性定语从句【一般】This is the soldier.He saved the boys life.【高级】This is the soldier_ saved the boys life.【一般】This is the best
13、method.It can be used against pollution.【高级】This is the best method _ can be used against pollution.对先行词进行限制或修饰的对先行词进行限制或修饰的 作用作用thatwho先行词先行词+关系词引导的定语从句关系词引导的定语从句2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【翻译】只有努力工作的人才能成功。Only those _ can succeed.【翻译】天助自助者.God he
14、lps those _【翻译】我有一个朋友，他爸爸是个医生。.I have a friend _ father is a teacher.who work hardwhosewho help themselves.2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【翻译】你没有进步的原因是你不努力。The reason _ is that you didnt work hard.【翻译】我失约的原因是明天我要参加家庭聚会。The reason _ is that I have to at
15、tend a family get-together tomorrow.why you didnt make progresswhy I will fail to go there高级版：高级版：很重要！说明原因的常用句型The reason why is that2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型4：倒装句倒装句【一般】I can not only earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.【高级】_earn mo
16、ney by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.【一般】The sun not only gives us light,but also gives us heat.【高级】_us light,but also gives us heat.not only but also引起的倒装引起的倒装Not only does the sun giveNot only can I 关键！关键！not only 放句首，前倒后不倒，助动词调到主语前放句首，前倒后不倒，助动词调到主语前2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2
17、021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】He not only spoke more correctly,but also he spoke more easily.【高级】_more correctly,but also he spoke more easily.【一般】They not only presented a musical performance,but they also gave a brief introduction to the instruments.【高级】_a musical performance,bu
18、t they also gave a brief introduction to the instruments.Not only did he speakNot only did they present2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型5：加入同位语同位语【一般】Li Ming,who is my previous classmate,will pay a visit to where he ever studied.【高级】Li Ming,_ will pay a visit to
19、where he ever studied.介绍某人或者某物时使用介绍某人或者某物时使用my previous classmate常见结构：主语常见结构：主语+同位语同位语+谓语谓语+其他其他2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）More practice【一般】Great Wall,which is one of the seven wonders in the world,attracts visitors from all over the world.【高级】Great Wall,_,attr
20、acts visitors from all over the world.【一般】Lawrence,who is the author of“Sons and Lovers”,died in 1930.【高级】Lawrence,_,died in 1930.one of the seven wonders in the worldthe author of“Sons and Lovers”2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）2021届高考英语二轮复习如何使考场作文亮起来课件（35张PPT）亮点句型6：加入过渡词过渡词把要点按照时间先后，空间顺序，逻把要点按照时间
21、先后，空间顺序，逻辑关系，因果关系整理，加以适当调辑关系，因果关系整理，加以适当调整，加入整，加入过渡词过渡词来串句成文来串句成文体会一下Eg1.He works hard.He is not likely to have a successful career.He will still be a useful person in the society.He works hard,but he is not likely to have a successful career.However,he will still be a useful person in the society.E
22、g2.Because he helped me in time,I passed the exam.Thanks to his timely help,I passed the exam.As a result of his timely help,I passed the exam.He helped me in time,as a result,I passed the exam.1.表示递进表示递进,“另外，还有另外，还有”whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition2.表示转折表示转折,“但是，但是，然而，然而，相反相反”but;howeve
23、r;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.3.表示因果表示因果,“因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以”since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;4.表示条件表示条件,“如果，只要如果，只要”if;on condition(that);as long as除非除非:unless 否则否则:or else5.表示时间表示时间 当当 的时候的时候:when;while 在在之后之后:after 在在之前之前:before 直到直到:until 直到直到才才:notuntil 一一就就:as
24、 soon as 后来，后来，然后然后:later;afterwards 不久不久:soon 近来近来:lately;recently 自从自从:since 从那时起从那时起:from then on6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系 首先首先:firstly 最主要的最主要的:above all 其次其次:secondly 然后然后:then;next 最后最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述 换句话说换句话说:in other words;that is to say;8.进行举例说明进行举例说明 例如，比如例如，比如:for instance;
25、for example;like;such as that is to say,namely,actually,and so on,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,for this reason 9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact跟你说实话跟你说实话:to tell you the truth10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说总而言之，总的来说:on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a
26、 word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;12.表示结果：表示结果：thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately 13.表示强调：表示强调：above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of cou
27、rse,after all,without any delay,at least,at most,most important,undoubtedlyAs the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”More practice Dear Anne,_(得知你要来中国玩，我想向你推荐一处名胜长城).I hope youll be interested in it.(开门见山，提出自己的推荐)Having learnt that you are coming to visit Beijing,Id like to recommend a place of in
28、terestthe Great Wall to you._(我认为长城是个不错的选择，有几个理由)._(众所周知)，_(中国的首都北京有许多景点)，among which the Great Wall stands out.As one of the greatest projects in the world,the Great Wall is a historic cultural heritage and also a symbol of China.There are several reasons why I think the Great Wall is a better choi
29、ce.As we all know Beijing,the capital of China,has a large number of tourist attractions By visiting it,_(你不仅可以需达到中国的历史和文化，也能感受到人类的力量)._(另外)，just as the saying goes,“He who hasnt been to the Great Wall isnt a true man.”Climbing the Great Wall is a great way to test and develop your will as well as y
30、our strength.I hope you can take my recommendation into consideration.not only can you learn the history and culture of China,but also you can feel the power of human beingsMoreoverUse these sentence patterns we have learnt today and I Hope all of you can make great progress in your composition!Homework for todayvmore practice on your paper.
