1、By Leager 2019.10.18Section 1一、高考英语作文分级标准一、高考英语作文分级标准1、内容全、内容全+句子正确句子正确15分；分；2、高级词汇、高级词汇+高级结构高级结构20分；分；3、具有连贯性、具有连贯性23分；分；4、书写、书写+标点标点25分分你想写一篇高分作文吗？你想写一篇高分作文吗？切记：切记：1、熟记、熟记1909个高频词汇个高频词汇2、熟练掌握句子基本结构（、熟练掌握句子基本结构（5种简单句）种简单句）3、记背一些通用句型、记背一些通用句型4、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）、精通三大从句（状从、定从、名从）简单句的节奏简单句的节奏主主+谓谓 12主主+
2、谓谓+宾宾 123主主+系系+表表 123主主+谓谓+宾宾+宾宾 1234+万能模板万能模板=高分作文高分作文 二、写作步骤：方法二、写作步骤：方法三步：三步：1、先改成正确的中文；、先改成正确的中文；2、再写成正确的英文；、再写成正确的英文；3、最后改成漂亮的英文。、最后改成漂亮的英文。想正确，先简单（长变短）想正确，先简单（长变短）例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫例如：来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。人称李哥。Come so many students,this teacher speak real good,teacher call Leager
3、,people call Li Brother.来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫来了这么多学生，这老师讲得真好，老师叫Leager,人称李哥。人称李哥。这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫这么多学生来了，这老师教得真好，他的名字叫Leager,人们叫他李哥。人们叫他李哥。Many students have come.This teacher teaches well.His name is Leager.People call him Brother Li.先改成正确的中文先改成正确的中文再写成正确的英文再写成正确的英文再写成漂亮的英文再写成漂亮的英文 Plenty of stu
4、dents have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly.His name is Leager,therefore,he is called Brother Li.三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 1 1 升级句子升级句子1.It is universally acknowledged that 众所周知众所周知2.It goes without saying that 无须说无须说 3.As far as Im concerned,我个人认为（就我个人而言），我个人认为（就我个人而言），It is universall
5、y acknowledged that wed better study English with.It goes without saying that we should protect the environment.一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句一）在中心句前加主句，中心句成为主语从句二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）二）在中心句后加从句（状语、定语从句等）1.due to the reason that 因为因为2.which can 这样能这样能 It goes without saying that we should protect the environmen
6、t due to the reason that it is beneficial for us to do so.It is universally acknowledged that wed better study English with Leager,which can make our English excellent.三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇三）用高级词汇代替初级词汇扩充词数扩充词数1.be of great significance很重要很重要=very important,excellent 好极了好极了2.be supposed to/ought/Youd better
7、 应该，最好应该，最好=should do3.As far as I am concerned.我认为我认为=I think/in ones opinion4.It is beneficial for you to do 这样做有好处这样做有好处5.be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢喜欢=like/love6.spare no efforts to do 不遗余力不遗余力=try to do/try ones best to do用状语从句或定语从句合并句子用状语从句或定语从句合并句子升级句子升级句子 Many students have come.This teache
8、r teaches well.His name is Leager.People call him Brother Li.Plenty of students have come due to the reason that this teacher teaches perfectly.His name is Leager,therefore,he is called Brother Li.三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 2 2 合并句子合并句子一）万能过渡句：1.Its not only meaningful,but also entertaining.这件事不仅有意义，而且这件事不仅有意义，而且
9、有趣。有趣。2.Its just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX.这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，这件事就像一扇窗户打开了一个世界，通过这个世界，XXX能更好地理解能更好地理解XXX.二）连贯性1.First and foremost,首先首先2.Besides,其次其次3.Last but not least,最后最后加上一些过渡句，扩充文章的内涵，增加文章的连续性 三、写作技巧三、写作技巧 3 3 过渡与连续性过渡与连续性附：写作技巧图表中心中心 句前
10、句前1.It is universally acknowledged that 众所周知众所周知It goes without saying that 无须说无须说 中心中心句后句后due to the reason that is that 因为因为which can 这样能这样能 Therefore/consequently 高级高级词汇词汇be of great significance很重要很重要=important,excellent 好极了好极了be supposed to/ought/Youd better 应该，最好应该，最好=should doAs far as I am c
11、oncerned.=I think/in ones opinion我认为我认为be crazy about/be fond of 喜欢喜欢=like/loveIt is beneficial for you to do 这样做有好处这样做有好处spare no efforts to do 不遗余力不遗余力=try to do/try ones best to do万能万能过渡过渡Its just like a window opening a new world through which XXX can better understand XXX.这件事就像一扇窗户打开这件事就像一扇窗户打开
12、了一个世界，通过这个世界，了一个世界，通过这个世界，XXX能更好地理能更好地理解解XXX.Its not only meaningful,but also entertaining.这件事不仅有这件事不仅有意义，而且有趣。意义，而且有趣。连贯性连贯性First and foremost,首先首先 Second/Besides,其其次次/Whats more,还有还有 Last but not least,最后最后Section 22019年全国卷假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词
13、数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。.The Analysis of the Writing Task(写作任务分析写作任务分析)：1.type of writing(体裁体裁)：2.writer:3.background：4.writing task：5.notes：a letter of applicationLi Hua,a Chinese student The Chinese painting exhibition is looking for some volunteers.Li Hua intends to be one.the purpose
14、 of writing the advantages Li Hua has what he can do if admitted 100 words add some details6.the structure of a letter of application Opening lines 开场白开场白Body Paragraph主体段主体段 Closing lines 结束语结束语 P1 P2Point 1Point 2Point 3 P3 7.the contents of each paragraph(每段写作内容）每段写作内容）Dear Sir/Madam,P1:P3:self i
15、ntroduction,background,purpose of writing P2:topic sentence bodyLooking forward to receiving a reply advantages:A,B,C things you can do if admitted Yours，Li Hua8.tense（时态）（时态）9.person（人称）（人称）the future tense,the present tense,the first person(第一人称第一人称)，the second person(第二人称第二人称).The guidance of wri
16、ting 写作指导万能自我介绍引出主题：万能自我介绍引出主题：As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a high school,who is crazy about art .你知道的，我是一个正在读高中的你知道的，我是一个正在读高中的17岁的青年，我热爱岁的青年，我热爱艺术艺术，我的名字叫李华。，我的名字叫李华。写信目的万能模板：写信目的万能模板：As a student who is crazy about art ,I am writing this letter to apply for
17、a chance of a volunteer.作为一个热爱作为一个热爱艺术艺术的学生，我正在写信申请做志愿者的机会。的学生，我正在写信申请做志愿者的机会。protecting environment万能开头句：万能开头句：There are several reasons that can account for my application .有以下几个原因能说明我的有以下几个原因能说明我的申请申请。12大信件万能模板大信件万能模板信件类型信件类型V.n.辞职辞职resign/quitresignation求职求职/申请申请applyapplication请求请求askrequest道歉道
18、歉apologizeapology感谢感谢appreciateappreciation推荐推荐recommendrecommendation投诉投诉complaincomplaint邀请邀请inviteinvitation订购订购orderorder建议建议suggestsuggestion倡议倡议advocateadvocation祝贺祝贺congratulatecongratulation中间段：要点内容中间段：要点内容 （重点）（重点）First and foremost,it is universally acknowledged that art is of great signif
19、icance in our life.Besides,I am crazy about art.As far as I am concerned,art is just like a window opening a new world through which art can better understand art.Last but not least,I am delighted that my parents taught me art when I was a child,which was not only meaning but also entertaining.(个人优势
20、）个人优势）结尾部分结尾部分 I believe I can be of great help to the art show/exhibition,such as cleaning the floor and showing guests around.（能做的事）（能做的事）I will be grateful if you take my application seriously.Im looking forward to your reply.As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a
21、high school,who is crazy about art .I am writing this letter to apply fora chance of a volunteer.First and foremost,it is universally acknowledged that art is of great significance in our life.Besides,I am crazy about art.As far as I am concerned,art is just like a window opening a new world through
22、 which art can better understand art.Last but not least,I am delighted that my parents taught me art when I was a child,which was not only meaning but also entertaining.I believe I can be of great help to the art show/exhibition,such as cleaning the floor and showing guests around.I will be grateful
23、 if you take my application seriously.Im looking forward to your reply.满分作文满分作文高分作文高分作文Dear Sir or Madam,As you know,I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in a high school,who is crazy about art .I am writing with purpose of being accepted as a volunteer.There are several reasons tha
24、t can account for my application .First and foremost,I have a good command of English,so I can express myself fluently,which helps me communicate with the visitors efficiently.Whats more,I have learnt Chinese painting for more than ten years.If I am accepted,I can share my professional knowledge wit
25、h visitors.I think I am the very person for the position.I hope you can give me a chance.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua.Summary.Tips on how to write a letter of application:1.The structure of a letter of application 实战演习实战演习 假 如 你 叫 李 华，你 市 博 物 馆 正 在 招 募 兼 职 解 说 员假 如 你 叫 李 华，你 市 博 物 馆
26、 正 在 招 募 兼 职 解 说 员（interpreter），在周末为外国游客进行英语解说服务。请根），在周末为外国游客进行英语解说服务。请根据下面的写作提示，用英语写一封自荐信。内容包括：据下面的写作提示，用英语写一封自荐信。内容包括：1.写信意图；写信意图；2.个人优势；个人优势；3.希望获准。希望获准。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_ Yours，Li Hua【参考范文参考范文】Dear Sir/Madame,I am Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Mi
27、ddle School.I know from your website that the city museum needs some part-time interpreters at weekends.I am writing to recommend myself.There are several reasons that can account for my recommendation.First,I am friendly and helpful,which makes it easy for me to get along with others.Second,I speak English so fluently that I can communicate with foreign visitors without difficulty.More importantly,I have worked as a volunteer before,so I have some experience.I think I am qualified to be an interpreter.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
