1、Argumentation WritingWealth and Health5/29/16 Lead-inHow to write a good essay?5/29/16Learning aims By the end of this class,we will have been able to:1.master the basic structure of an argumentative article（议论文）.2.learn how to organize the points（要点）and how to use some practical and wonderful words
2、 and sentences in writing an argumentation.5/29/16Read and grade(定档定档)the following composition：5/29/16高考英语作文评分标准 第五档(很好);(21-25分)-漂漂亮亮1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(好)：(16-20分)-像模像样1.完全完成了试题规定的任务
3、。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(适当)：(11-15分)-马马虎虎第二档(较差)：(6-10分)-稀里糊涂第一档(差)：(0-5分)-一塌糊涂5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated
4、discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so t
5、hat they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.Th
6、ey cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeel like goingaffordfix their attention onheatedfresh5/29/16paragraphstopic sentences pointsadvanced vocabularysentence patternslinking wordsStructureContentLanguageWriting5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件
7、备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件Five characteristics of outstanding writing:(高分作文的五大特性)1.sense of order(条理性:段落完整，层次分明）2.accuracy (准确性:语法准确，用词精当）3.fluency (流畅性:层次清晰，行文连贯）4.conciseness&variety(简洁、多样性:语言简洁，不重复）5.ideological content(思想性:文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）5/29/16 健康与财富一直是人们讨论的一个热门话题,有人有人认为健康很重要，而有人认为财富比健康更重要认为健康很重要，而有人
8、认为财富比健康更重要,究究竟孰轻孰重？竟孰轻孰重？请以Health and Wealth为题写一篇英文短文。提示:1.简述人们对“健康与财富”的两种不同看法;2.简述你自己的观点及理由。Guidance and exploration：5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件书面表达审题是第一步，也是至关重要的一步。只有弄清题目要求，书面表达审题是第一步，也是至关重要的一步。只有弄清题目要求，才不跑题，不漏要点，圆满地完成写作任务。审题包括审体裁、审格才不跑题，不漏要点，圆满地完成写作任务。审题包括审体裁、审格式、审内容、审人称、审时态等方面的内容。式、审
9、内容、审人称、审时态等方面的内容。审题审题（Examining）5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件Think about?The style:The main idea:Person:Tense:5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件 The style:argumentation（对比观点类议论文）The main idea:Present two different kinds of opinions and give my own view and reasons Person:the third and
10、 first person Tense:the present tense 5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件How can we organize the passage?5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1support
11、ing idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 25/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件巧用衔接词转换优化优美句型Tips:5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起:Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different/opposite opinions.People have taken/adopted different attitu
12、des towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that.of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think 5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作课件C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,of them h
13、old a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,every coin has two sides.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,5/29/16逻辑角度时间顺序合适的过渡性词汇.Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly Thirdly.In
14、the first place In the second place In the third place.Finally/Last but not least/,.5/29/16逻辑角度对称顺序转折顺序因果顺序条件顺序让步顺序合适的过渡性词汇5/29/16逻辑角度递进顺序插入语过渡合适的过渡性词汇5/29/16Six principles of making good sentences (造句成文六大原则)：1.advanced words(高级词汇原则)2.adverbial advanced(状语提前原则)3.phrases preferred(短语优先原则)pound senten
15、ce,composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)5.long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)6.passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)5/29/16when they talk about the importance of either wealth or health,different people have varied answers.(用非谓语动词结构改写)When talking about the importanc
16、e of either wealth or health,different people have varied answers.Practice5/29/16Every day,they have much work to do to make money.They cant remember the health.With so much work to do to make money,they have trouble in remembering the health.(用with的复合结构改写)5/29/16It will raise the awareness of our h
17、ealth.People will have a better understanding of health.(用not onlybut also结构改写并倒装)Not only will it raise the awareness of our health,but also people will have a better understanding of health.5/29/16They can enjoy better facilities（设施）without any difficulty.That helps to improve their health.(用定语从句改
18、写)They can enjoy better facilities without any difficulty,which helps to improve their health.5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 Consolidation5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 不同观点列举型（选择型）不同观点列举型（选择型）There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目作文题目_.But it is well known
19、 that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因一原因一_.Furthermore,in the second place,_原因二原因二_.So it goes without saying that _观点一观点一_.
20、People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _观点二观点二_.In their point of view,on the one hand，_原因一原因一_.On the other hand,_原因二原因二_.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat _观点二观点二_.As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _观点一或二观点一或二_.Itis not only because _,but also be
21、cause _.The more _,the more _.5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 健康与财富一直是人们讨论的一个热门话题,有人认有人认为健康很重要，而有人认为财富比健康更重要为健康很重要，而有人认为财富比健康更重要,究竟孰究竟孰轻孰重？轻孰重？请以Health and Wealth为题写一篇英文短文。提示:1.简述人们对“健康与财富”的两种不同看法;2.简述你自己的观点及理由。Guidance and exploration：5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 Nowadays
22、,people are paying much attention to their health and wealth.Which is more important for our daily life?Different people have different opinions.Some people believe that wealth is more important.Although money cant bring us anything,one can do nothing without it.People work hard to earn money,becaus
23、e it can keep our family or even others a comfortable life.However,the majority of the people think that health is more important.Its useless having much more money while we are in a poor state of health.Whats more,its unwise to achieve happiness and comfort at the cost of their health.We can also l
24、ive happily even though we have little money.In my opinion,wealth will play a more and more important role in our daily life,but as students,we should keep healthy,only in this way can we study efficiently.And there is an old Chinese saying goes:“Health is wealth”.So we can live happily with our hea
25、lthy body.Work show5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 Nowadays,people are paying much attention to their health and wealth.Which is more important for our daily life?Different people have different opinions.Some people believe that wealth is more important.Although money cant bring us anyth
26、ing,one can do nothing without it.People work hard to earn money,because it can keep our family or even others a comfortable life.However,the majority of the people think that health is more important.Its useless having much more money while we are in a poor state of health.Whats more,its unwise to
27、achieve happiness and comfort at the cost of their health.We can also live happily even though we have little money.In my opinion,wealth will play a more and more important role in our daily life,but as students,we should keep healthy,only in this way can we study efficiently.And there is an old Chi
28、nese saying goes:“Health is wealth”.So we can live happily with our healthy body._Structure 5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 Nowadays,people are paying much attention to their health and wealth.Which is more important for our daily life?Different people have different opinions.Some people
29、 believe that wealth is more important.Although money cant bring us anything,one can do nothing without it.People work hard to earn money,because it can keep our family or even others a comfortable life.However,the majority of the people think that health is more important.Its useless having much mo
30、re money while we are in a poor state of health.Whats more,its unwise to achieve happiness and comfort at the cost of their health.We can also live happily even though we have little money.In my opinion,wealth will play a more and more important role in our daily life,but as students,we should keep
31、healthy,only in this way can we study efficiently.And there is an old Chinese saying goes:“Health is wealth”.So we can live happily with our healthy body._5/29/16Language备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件Points Nowadays,people are paying much attention to their health and wealth.Which is more impo
32、rtant for our daily life?Different people have different opinions.Some people believe that wealth is more important.Although money cant bring us anything,one can do nothing without it.People work hard to earn money,because it can keep our family or even others a comfortable life.However,the majority
33、 of the people think that health is more important.Its useless having much more money while we are in a poor state of health.Whats more,its unwise to achieve happiness and comfort at the cost of their health.We can also live happily even though we have little money.In my opinion,wealth will play a m
34、ore and more important role in our daily life,but as students,we should keep healthy,only by this way can let us study efficiently.And there is an old Chinese saying goes:Health is wealth.So we can live happily with our healthy body.5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件 SummarySummarize the ma
35、in points that are included in a good composition.5/29/16备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试 最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由 反对方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促进对体育可以促进对体育的重视；的重视；2可以增强学生的可以增强学生的体魄；体魄；3更有利于提高学更有利于提高学习效率。习效率。1学生以学习为主，学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；考试成绩决定个人前途；2过高的要求学生难过高的要求学生难以达到；以达到；3长跑可能引起感冒长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。或伤害。(考生自行发挥考生自行发挥23点点)注意：1词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。Assignment备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件备战高考英语写作之议论文写作精品课件
