1、选修八 Model4 Which EnglishwritingLeading inWatch a vedio about our key wordEnglish.global maina for learning English “English represents a better future where the world has a common language.”Writing Requirements “It would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English”Do you agree?Why or
2、why not?Write a composition giving your ideas about this statement.Discussionforagainst Discuss in groups and write down your ideas about reasons why you are for and why you are against municationinternational relationshiptraveltradeeconomyloss of culture diversityunemployment of translatorModel Ana
3、lysisIs the Expansion of Enrollment a Good Thing?Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development of society,college students and the nation as a whole.On the one hand,they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of t
4、he job market.On the other hand,the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be raised.However,many problems have been brought about.Firstly,the development of the teaching facilities and accomm
5、odation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment.Secondly,the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered.In the long run,this will definitely deteriorate the h i g h e r e d u c a t i o n.Model Anal
6、ysis Despite these problems,I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society.With the development of our national economy,the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.Model AnalysisWhats the style of the passage?A.Narration (记叙文）B
7、.Exposition（说明文）C.Argumentation（议论文）D.Description （描写文）pros and cons essayModel Analysis Arguementation Layout What is each paragraph about?Part1 Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development of society,college students and the na
8、tion as a whole.The theme of the essayArguementation LayoutPart2 On the one hand,they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market.On the other hand,the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual
9、standards of our nation will be raised.Opinion1Reasons1,2ArgumentationLayout Part2 However,many problems have been brought about.Firstly,the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment.Secondl
10、y,the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered.In the long run,this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.Opinion2Reasons1,2ArguementationLayout Part3 Despite these problems,I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great
11、 benefit to our society.With the development of our national economy,the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.Personal opinionArguementationLayoutPart1Part2Part3The theme of the essayOpinion1Opinion2Reasons1,2Reasons1,2Personal opinionArguementation Transitional wor
12、ds Find out the transitional words used to express following meanings.(a)used to introduce your first idea(b)used to intrduce your next idea(c)used to add an extra idea(d)used to introduce your final idea(e)used to show a contrasting idea(f)used to finish the textArguementation Transitional words (a
13、)used to introduce your first idea (b)used to intrduce your next idea On the one hand,they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market.On the other hand,the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellec
14、tual standards of our nation will be raised.Arguementation Transitional words (a)used to introduce your first idea (b)used to intrduce your next idea (e)used to show a contrasting idea However,many problems have been brought about.Firstly,the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation
15、capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment.Secondly,the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered.In the long run,this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.nevertheless on the other handA
16、rguementation Transitional words(d)used to introduce your extra idea(e)used to show your final ideawhats more,besides,in addition,furthermorelastly,finally,last but not leastArguementation Transitional words(f)used to finish the text Despite these problems,I am still confident that the expansion of
17、enrollment is of great benefit to our society.With the development of our national economy,the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.in my opinionModel Analysisvocabulary The vocabulary used in the passage is A.formal B.informal A.formal B.informalModel Analysis Rich
18、ness of languagewords and phrases:Find out words and phrases you think are used perfectly.Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the needs of the rapid development of society,college students and the nation as a whole.On the one hand,they want to train more
19、qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market.On the other hand,the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that the intellectual standards of our nation will be raised.Model Analysis Richness of languageModel Analysis Richness of lang
20、uage However,many problems have been brought about.Firstly,the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment.Secondly,the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of sel
21、ection are lowered.In the long run,this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.Model Analysis Richness of language Despite these problems,I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society.With the development of our national economy,the problem as men
22、tioned above will be solved if proper measures are taken.diverse sentence Find out which of following sentence patterns are used?Model Analysis Richness of languagea.a.long sentencelong plex sentencescomplex sentencese.e.simple sentencesimple sentencef f.passive voice.passive voiceh.h.inverted sente
23、nceinverted sentence pound sentencecompound sentence d pod-uncomplex .compod-uncomplex sentencesentence g.g.nonfinite formsnonfinite formsi i.emphatic pattern.emphatic patternModel Analysis Richness of language Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998 to meet the need
24、s of the rapid development of society,college students and the nation as a whole.On the one hand,they want to train more qualified people to satisfy the need of the job market.On the other hand,the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of receiving higher education so that t
25、he intellectual standards of our nation will be raised.a.long sentence c.simple sentencea.long sentence pound sentencef.passive voice Model Analysis Richness of language However,many problems have been brought about.Firstly,the development of the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of m
26、any colleges and universities cannot keep pace with the expansion of enrollment.Secondly,the average quality of the freshmen is declining because the criteria of selection are lowered.In the long run,this will definitely deteriorate the higher education.f.passive voiceg.g.nonfinite formsnonfinite po
27、und sentenceModel Analysis Richness of language Despite these problems,I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment is of great benefit to our society.With the development of our national economy,the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures are pound sentenceg.g.nonfinit
28、e formsnonfinite formsf.passive voiceCriteria of a good compositiona.clear layoutb.cover all main ideasc.proper transitional words to link ideasd.formal languagee.rich and accurate words and phrasesf.diverse sentenceg.no grammar mistakesh.appropriate punctuationi.neat and clear handwritingData from
29、Data from Data from Data from Data from Sample assessmentSample assessmentSample assessmentSample assessment I disagree with this statement.Although it will make communication more convenient,it will also promote the development of education.That will promote the development of related fields betwee
30、n countries.For example,trade,culture,tourism,etc.But that would result in the loss of a large number of languages and the reduction of culture.That will make some English translators lose their jobs and make some English software stop using.So it has both advantages and disadvantages.P3P2P1P4whats
31、more,Firstly,Therere also disadvantages.Secondly,Not onlysuch as,diversityworkingSample assessmentSample assessment Beginning There is a widespread concern over issue that it would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot to
32、pic varies from person to person.Sample assessmentSample assessment Ending All in all,in my opinion,good as it is,but I dont agree with the idea that it would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.After all,the more diverse the languages are,the more beautiful the world is.How t
33、o polish your How to polish your writing?writing?a.Polish the layout to make the structure clear.b.Add transitional words to make the passage coherent and fluent.c.Polish the beginning and ending to make the writing suitable for its style.d.Correct grammar mistakes.e.Alert some wording and sentence patterns to make them accurate.HomeorkHomeork self assessment peer assessment teacher assessmentThank you!Wish you happy summer holiday!
